[Report This]Date: Sep 29, 2015 10:54 pm Title: The Phone Call
"I would love take a bath with you though." <--- Lol.. That sounds like his "I'd like to give more than a hug!" When a fan asked him for a hug! :)
Author's Response:
lol now that you mention it, it does! Thanks for reading/reviewing <3
Date: Sep 02, 2015 02:05 am Title: A Long Way to Go
holy moly this chapter. love it
Author's Response:
Thank you!! <33
[Report This]Date: Aug 17, 2015 03:36 am Title: A Long Way to Go
Why is Michael following diana ross after what she pulled? That whore is gonna see it and get big headed and think she has a chance. Yay drama lol great update hun
Author's Response:
tsk tssssssk. *zips lips* Thank you hun! <333
Date: Aug 15, 2015 02:18 pm Title: A Long Way to Go
Lawwwddddd this update is life! So much goodness! Imma try to keep it brief regardless of how hard I'm fangirling and stanning right now. Lol. First off, those gifs yassssss! Every time I see them, I just shake my head cuz it's a damn shame how Michael woulda got ALL this work. I woulda stayed pregnant. All the time. Year round. Period. Lmao. And zar's pics were sexy as hell. She is flawless. Michael is really gonna be feeling the heat when these men start openly lusting hunty. If he's still jealous over Rashad, wait til Zaria develops her own fanbase. Lmao I cannot wait! Speaking of Rashad, he be low key trying it and I'm glad Zar pays it dust. Boy bye, that ship has long sailed and will NEVER return. I'm so glad that Terell's bothered ass is out of their lives. Musta lost his damn mind bringing up that shit talkin bout what about her offer? Nigga BYE. Ain't no offer bih! This restraining order is what's up so his ass can disappear and find him some business! Lastly, can this magic making.. I just can't. Everything about it was on point. A freaky Michael.. One who's telling you he wanna do nasty stuff? And I died a thousand deaths at eating the booty like groceries! Lawd Jhene Aiko will never live that down. That is hilarious! I would've loved to hear Michael saying all this in his voice, I don't think I would still be able to survive on this planet chile. And him on Instagram? CHILEEEEEE! He would probably be the only person on IG with 100 million followers or some shit. Anyway, I just loved this chapter. One of my recent faves for sure. And good luck in law school girl!
Author's Response:
Awww thank youuuu. Chile those gifs...don't even get me started on those. The man was so fine that his beauty makes me angry lol I could slap him. Zaria is making moves in her careeeeeeer. She really is gorgeous though. It makes no sense.
"Michael is really gonna be feeling the heat when these men start openly lusting hunty. If he's still jealous over Rashad, wait til Zaria develops her own fanbase. Lmao I cannot wait!"<--lol everyone is so eager to see Michael's reaction once things really do start to pick up. It's gonna be a journey that's for sure XD
Rashad thinks he's slick lol but Zaria keeps swerving him left and right. Terell tried it with the offer thing. He really did lose his mind by thinking that Zaria was gonna keep that offer after he pulled that paternity stunt smh. He's childish lol.
"Ain't no offer bih! "<--I laughed so hard at this lol
"Lastly, can this magic making.. I just can't. Everything about it was on point."<--oh my god, really? I was so disappointed in this one but seeing this makes me feel better. I was so tired when I was writing this that I was so eh about the outcome but I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I think I would lose my mind dealing with a freaky "dirty talking" Michael. I'd be constantly popping out babies just like you lol.
"And I died a thousand deaths at eating the booty like groceries! Lawd Jhene Aiko will never live that down."<--Jhene made history with that one lol. I don't think that phrase is gonna die down for a long time. Ole nasty self lol. Michael played too much for constantly bringing that back up when he knew that Zaria was joking when she said it lol.
I know that if I heard Michael say that I would've laughed so hard though. I wouldn't be able to take him seriously lol.
He finally made that Instagram account! I really do believe that if Instagram was around back in the day, he would've had more followers than that. The man was more popular than the presidents to be honest lol.
I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapterrrrr. I tried to make it up to y'all as best as I could especially since I had been so busy and hadn't had time to really update in over a month. But thank you so much!! I made it pass my first week without breaking down so I'm feeling pretty good about that lol. Y'all are gonna have to pray for me for the future because law school is really no joke.
P.S. I hope this response made sense...I'm half-sleep right now so I'm kind of talking out of the side of my neck lol
[Report This]Date: Aug 15, 2015 12:36 pm Title: A Long Way to Go
PRAAAAAISE no more Terrell, at least for the time being. Who knows what else you're gonna do with his character in the future, you little troll 😪 Anyway, glad that restraining order has been put into place. Bye at Michael thinking Zaria's preggers because she was pigging out lmao that man needs another baby so badly, and joyful.jukebox agrees with me 😌 Jealous Michael has returneddddd, I'm sure we'll be seeing even more of him as time goes on. He's just getting started lmao. And Zaria not wanting Michael alone with Andy for a week was priceless lol Andy isn't a threat 😂 I can't deal. Anywho, Daddy Michael is so adorable teaching his baby girl how to walk. I would be crushed if i was Zaria and missed it, but it is what it is. Michael lucked out with getting the more exciting milestone to witness 😂😂😂 Walking vs. holding a bottle....Walking wins hands down lmao. OH I'm so done with you with this ass eating convo. If I read "eat the booty like groceries" one more time I swear lmaoo. It's gonna happen though, I know it. I'm gonna laugh so hard 😭 Lovely ending to the chapter my dear 😌 I won't get too much into that because I'm sure you already know my thoughts on it lmao Can't wait for the next update but take ya time with it. Studies come first 👌🏼
Author's Response:
"Who knows what else you're gonna do with his character in the future, you little troll"<--
^^^ you don't know meeeee lol
Michael is so stuck on having a baby lol. He gotta chill.
"joyful.jukebox agrees with me"<--she does, huh? *snickers*
"Jealous Michael has returneddddd, I'm sure we'll be seeing even more of him as time goes on. He's just getting started lmao."<--tsk tsssssk
Zaria was being unreasonable...poor thing. But at least she knew that she was being silly. Rashad scarred her for life :(
Michael being a daddy is always my favorite parts to write. If I were Zaria I would've been upset too. It's nothing like actually being there to see it in person but she had to take the L this time. Can't have all of the special moments. Kari saved the greatest moment for 'Da-Da'...little troll lol.
"OH I'm so done with you with this ass eating convo. If I read "eat the booty like groceries" one more time I swear lmaoo"<--
"It's gonna happen though, I know it. "<--you're disgusting lol
And thank you darling. Wasn't my best but I'm glad you enjoyed it. And you already know that I'm gonna take my time with the updates. Gotta be tight and right! :*
Date: Aug 15, 2015 11:20 am Title: A Long Way to Go
Aww of course we understand. Go ahead with your studies and the best of luck! 😊 Now as for this chapter, I'm glad the restraining order is finalized, though I know this will not be the last we see of Terrell. He's crazy, and I know he'll be back. Now Michael need to stop of his petty jealousy of Rashad. Rashad is still the father of Enrique, even if he is salty! 😂😂😂😂 And of course the ending was sexy.
Author's Response:
Thank you, honey <33
"I'm glad the restraining order is finalized, though I know this will not be the last we see of Terrell. He's crazy, and I know he'll be back."<--
^^^^ *zips lips*
Michael and his jealousy lol it never fades. He really does need to learn to get over it. Always in his feelings smh. And thank you! <333
Date: Jul 16, 2015 07:27 pm Title: Failed Twists of Fate
aww they are so cute. continue please thank you
Author's Response:
<333 I'll try to update as much as I can. But thank you for reading!
Date: Jul 12, 2015 11:47 pm Title: Failed Twists of Fate
Yay! Praise GAWD or as Michael said, praise Jehovah! Riq is Rashad's son and that's all that matters. Even though his big headed as works my nerves, between him and that raggedy trifling ass scum Terrell, he is the lesser of two evils. Glad they don't have to worry about that mess anymore and he can stay outta their lives for GOOD. Anyway, I do hope Michael will stop being stubborn and hard headed and listen to his wife. He needs to start getting proper rest and sleep. I peep him mentioning retirement too but chile we all know that ain't gon happen. So I do hope he starts to take better care of himself NOW, regardless if he's working or not. Zaria takes such good care of him though, he's so lucky to have her as a wife. Ol big head self lol. And yassss Mike is a comic book and Marvel fan, I love it. Lol even though Thor isn't my favorite, I like his character. Glad to see these two can put that DNA drama behind them. I had almost forgot they haven't had a honeymoon yet so I hope it does happen soon. Good update girl!
Author's Response:
God works in mysterious ways chile. Won't he do it? lol And you're right...although Rashad can be childish at times, I'm pretty sure that everyone else would take the bs from him rather than dealing with the fact that a rapist was the father of Zaria's child. Now that the major step has been taken, Zaria can finally get back to business and work on having her order against Terell completed.
With Michael...one day he'll learn. Let's just hope that it doesn't have to take something drastic in order for him to finally listen to Zaria though :O
"I peep him mentioning retirement too but chile we all know that ain't gon happen."
lol you know that I had to sneak that little comment in there. MJ knows he ain't foolling anybody. He tried. But he really does need to start taking care of himself or it's gonna start to catch up with him even more and effect him in the worst way.
"Zaria takes such good care of him though, he's so lucky to have her as a wife. Ol big head self lol."<--indeed lol
Marvel Comics are always life lol. Thor is great but my personal fave has always been Spider-Man *blushes*
And noooope they haven't had their honeymoon yet but they surely will have one eventurally. And thanks!! Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: Jul 12, 2015 10:14 pm Title: Failed Twists of Fate
Thank you Jesus! I'm glad Enrique's Rashad's son. Like one of the reviewers said, he's the lesser of the evils. Now we can give Terrell's ass the restraining order. I'm sorry I didn't review the previous chapter, but I'm back. :)
Author's Response:
I know right? God was looking out big time on Zaria's behalf.
"I'm glad Enrique's Rashad's son. Like one of the reviewers said, he's the lesser of the evils."<--that's true!
As for Terell, you'll see how this restraining process goes with him very soon. And that's ok girl! Glad to see that you're back! <333
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2015 10:10 pm Title: Failed Twists of Fate
I swear I thought you were gonna be the biggest troll ever and stop the chapter before the results were said...I was already preparing my rant to you but thank you for being a good girl and not Satan for once :) ANYWAY, I knew all along Rashad was the daddy. You couldn't be that cruel to poor Zaria lol. I caught the tude from Michael about Zaria letting Rashad call her "shorty" lmao im waiting for the giant green monster to make another appearance. You know how I love me some jealous Michael 😈 the beginning was sooo cute, I love their intimate moments and Zaria being all motherly to him, I gush. The heartbeat sleeping technique has returned *squeal* I'll never get over how cute that is. Oh and bye at Michael texting Zaria when she's right in front of him smh lol. Riq's too busy with Sesame Street to pay attention to them fools lmao. But anywayyyy, this chapter was great as usual, my love. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response:
"I swear I thought you were gonna be the biggest troll ever and stop the chapter before the results were said...I was already preparing my rant to you but thank you for being a good girl and not Satan for once :)"<---
I was being a good girl this time just for you, my love...aiming to please tsk tsk.
You know that I couldn't do that to Zaria...she's suffered enough for once :'(
"I caught the tude from Michael about Zaria letting Rashad call her "shorty" lmao im waiting for the giant green monster to make another appearance. You know how I love me some jealous Michael"<--
do ya now? tsk tsk...Jealous Michael might come out of the woodworks soon. Ya never know. *grins*
Of course you would be squealing from the "heartbeat" technique lol. Tbh I like writing those moments too. I like needy Michael. And Zaria is a precious little thing. Ya gotta love her and her motherly ways.
"Oh and bye at Michael texting Zaria when she's right in front of him smh lol. Riq's too busy with Sesame Street to pay attention to them fools lmao"<--lol Michael was being cautious. Ya never now what those little ears will hear. You know how kids pick up on everything at that age and will go off and tell their parent's business to anybody in a split second lol.
But thank you babesssss. Glad you enjoyed it even though it wasn't muuuuuch <333
Date: Jun 23, 2015 06:18 am Title: Bad Things Happen to Good People
Zaria's family (her siblings) could be such a mess..that was quite insensitive of Erin to poke fun of the fact that Kreshell can't have children...good thing she didn't hear it.
Author's Response:
They really are and Erin was pretty mean for that one given her past situation but Zaria made sure that Kreshell didn't hear that one. Otherwise, who knows what would've happened. :O
Date: Jun 22, 2015 09:37 pm Title: Bad Things Happen to Good People
Lmao at Captain Panties!! 😂😂😂 I swear Gianni is as big of a mess as Erin evil ass. And that was so mean what she mumbled about being able to have kids. Mean ass smh lol. Anyway, I do hope these results come out in Zar's favor. No way in hell is Riq Terell's child. I just want them outta their lives for good. Zaria is a good woman, so I do hope things work out. And I just love Michael's sprung ass. Everybody notices the way he looks at Zar and how whipped he is. That's so cute. He wants to be all on her and in her all the damn time. Lmao. As I said before, he's very sweet when he's not being petty and not being a troll. We shall see how long that lasts. Lol
Author's Response:
Gianni plays too much lol. And Erin is rude smh. She knew she was wrong for that one. The results are near so let's hope that they have gone in Zaria's favor. She's been through enough already.
"And I just love Michael's sprung ass. Everybody notices the way he looks at Zar and how whipped he is. That's so cute. He wants to be all on her and in her all the damn time."<--he is very whipped indeed. He doesn't even try to be subtle with it. He loves him some Zaria lol.
And you shall see how long that lasts *snickers*
[Report This]Date: Jun 22, 2015 04:29 pm Title: Bad Things Happen to Good People
I thought Zaria was gonna flip out when Michael told her he filled Erin in on everything 😩 I was like please Jesus noo lmao. He took a chance telling her though, I'd probably be mad welp. But anywayyyy, I was tearing up with Zaria expressing her feelings about what if Enrique wasn't Rashad's and how he would be a rapist's son *sigh*. I would have the same thoughts too. I hope the results come in soon...such a stressful situation ugh. And bye at Zaria mentioning spanking 😂😂😂 Her and Michael are some freaaaaks. And Michael telling her that he wants some tongue?! Bye!! I snorted loool I mean, if Zar ain't givin it to him I'll gladly step in and assist lmao I'm just playinnn. I loved all the family bonding in this chapter though, it was great. Can't wait for the next updateee
Author's Response:
She's mercurial like Michael said tsk tsk. You never know what to expect. He really did take a chance but at least he didn't keep it from her so kudos to him!
"But anywayyyy, I was tearing up with Zaria expressing her feelings about what if Enrique wasn't Rashad's and how he would be a rapist's son *sigh*."<-- :( She's going through right now. You can only hope for the best.
"And bye at Zaria mentioning spanking Her and Michael are some freaaaaks."<--
^^^ you like that don't ya? tsk tsk
"And Michael telling her that he wants some tongue?! Bye!! I snorted loool"<--I was laughing when I wrote that lol.
"I mean, if Zar ain't givin it to him I'll gladly step in and assist lmao I'm just playinnn."<--bye lol you're not playing. You ain't foolin' nobody!
The family bonding is always importaaaaant. I'll be updating soooon so bloop bloop. I love ya! <3
Date: Jun 14, 2015 09:29 pm Title: Can't Get You Off My Mind/Sister to Sister
aww poor Michael..always fantasize about his woman taking care of him that way though..I think I would have been both agitated and trying hard not to laugh..oh Enrique just loves Power Rangers..like me..
Author's Response:
Michael put poor Zaria through but you know she didn't mind. He's such a big baby lol. And Riq loves his Rangers XD
Date: Jun 14, 2015 08:03 pm Title: The Phantom of Obsession pt. I
So sorry I took so long but haven't been on nearly as much. Re:previous review, yes that is what I was referring to..the fact that Zaria could dish but can't take..then again there are lots of double standards between her and Michael..you know when I was reading about Michael telling her what to eat I think to myself she should tell him what to eat see how he likes that, like say no splurging on KFC or something.
Anyway Terell is such a scumbag I like how Zaria was no-nonsense and kept it real I was like you go girl..he sounded like those controlling men who can't handle rejection..Enrique had better not be his.
Author's Response:
Awww that's ok! And for your response to the last review, I gotcha and I agree. Michael and Zaria are something else with their little double standards but that's what makes them them. They're living and learning as time progresses.
As for Terell...he's trash and always will be trash. He tried to break Zaria down but she wasn't having it. She has come to the point where she is fed up and she's not letting him control her any longer. She's growing stronger each day so yaaaay Zar!
"he sounded like those controlling men who can't handle rejection."<--VERY MUCH SO!
And more is to come so we'll see how the situation with Enrique goes. :O