[Report This]Date: Mar 14, 2012 08:12 am Title: Chapter 8
Great job :D
[Report This]Date: Mar 06, 2012 09:26 am Title: Chapter 6
Great! I love this is that mean girl Lisa?
[Report This]Date: Mar 06, 2012 09:17 am Title: Chapter 5
Very interesting :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 06, 2012 09:04 am Title: Chapter 4
This is great!
[Report This]Date: Mar 06, 2012 08:49 am Title: Chapter 2
Very good chapter :) but it would be better if you could make it more understandable when the conversation comes :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 26, 2012 03:06 pm Title: chapter1
Very interesting
Date: Jan 02, 2012 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 4
Wow this is a great story sis!! :) Keep going with it!!
[Report This]Date: Jan 02, 2012 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 4
I like this cute short chapter. update
[Report This]Date: Jan 02, 2012 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 4
This is really good.
Date: Dec 30, 2011 10:29 pm Title: chapter1
wow i like!
Date: Dec 30, 2011 04:18 pm Title: prologue
this is great! keep it up missmj:) and canufeelit:)
Date: Dec 30, 2011 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 3
this is intresting with a twist i never know kendra would have a love interest. i love the plot of this story i hope michael and kendra hit it off really good.
Date: Dec 30, 2011 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 2
wow im liking this already.
[Report This]Date: Dec 27, 2011 01:43 am Title: prologue
Welcome hon. And Buffy does have her own show...at least the main protaginist in the show was ironocally named buffy. :)
Date: Dec 27, 2011 12:01 am Title: chapter1
Also rember Michael is an embasiter to Africa and Kendra being in africa would work out better then you think... think about it
Author's Response:
i love the africa idea i really do i would like to use that. i luv ideas and suggestions i really could use your help.