Date: Apr 24, 2016 05:19 am Title: Chapter One
Amazing story girl!!
Loved the last sentence XD
Date: Mar 09, 2016 07:57 am Title: Chapter One
Very nice first meeting...
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review. Glad that you enjoyed the story. Thanks!
Date: Feb 18, 2012 03:12 pm Title: Chapter One
What an amazing ending! Being a fairly young fan of Michael, I understand that many my age cannot appreciate my adoration for him. Great story,
Deidra
Date: Aug 12, 2011 02:02 pm Title: Chapter One
I love it!!! ;D





Date: Aug 01, 2011 03:17 pm Title: Chapter One
That was a cute story. Made me smile :)
Author's Response:
Thank you. I loved writing it. :)





Date: Mar 26, 2011 12:27 am Title: Chapter One
Haha this was a really cute story :) I like the way you had her messing up the lyrics haha,
Great job!
Date: Aug 21, 2010 01:52 am Title: Chapter One
Awhhh that was fantastic (:
Date: Aug 20, 2010 05:57 am Title: Chapter One
Aw, that was just adorable! So real, so life like! I bet he had a lot of situations just like that one! :D And Paris... *sighs* she was too cute! "She knows your name daddy!" Aaaaww... Just perfect!




Date: Aug 20, 2010 01:17 am Title: Chapter One
aw that was cute :) :)
Date: Aug 19, 2010 11:26 pm Title: Chapter One
That so was freakin awesome!!!!!!!!!!! I love the part when paris gives him away amazing!!!!