[Report This]Date: Jun 04, 2011 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 44
HAhah i love this!!! :D! Cnt wait for the next part! Awesome job!
[Report This]Date: Jun 04, 2011 05:18 am Title: Chapter 44
Lovely update, girl!
A lot of fun to read how Michael got all worked up and frantic when talkin to Jermaine in the dressing room xD
I could totally picture that too..he is just Too cute ;)
But Diana..ugh..I don't know what to think of her. I really dont!
I hope she's being genuine this time, I mean after all she Is giving Tinsley her Wedding Dress!! but it's hard to tell if there's more behind it or not..
I'm already waiting for the next update girl! Can't wait to see how this continues.
Cause I sense some more DRAMA bubbling back to the surface ;p
Date: Jun 03, 2011 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 44
This is getting interesting !
[Report This]Date: Jun 03, 2011 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 44
Nice update. I love some drama girl. So let's get it on! Chamone!
Date: Jun 03, 2011 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 44
Am I crazy for thinking Diana is being truly sincere? Man I hope she doesn't do anything..I mean she was the one whi got them together but we all know in Diana's mind it's all about Diana. welcome back I missed this story.
Date: Jun 03, 2011 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 44
Unh unh.. I still don't trust her. She better not try no bullshit! Mike will hopefully talk some sense into his naive fiancee about being so damn trusting. I hope he won't fall for any mess either.
Author's Response:
Anything for the perfect dress, right? xD
I'm sure Tinsley knows better by now but good ole' Diana always has her ways..
Stay tunes, next update coming soon x
Date: May 28, 2011 12:24 am Title: Chapter 1
I am in love with this story :D Can't wait for the next chapter xox
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2011 01:25 am Title: Chapter 43
I think this chapter was great. You observly know how much i love this story. Your a great writer :)! Keep up the great work!
[Report This]Date: May 05, 2011 08:19 am Title: Chapter 43
I'm so sad to see the complications Tinsley is having in this pregnancy...I just looked up pre-eclampsia and....damn, it really DOES look scary! I never heard of that before! I guess I learn something new everyday...
I hope everything ends up being okay for Michael, Tins, and their baby. :-(
Date: May 05, 2011 02:44 am Title: Chapter 43
Aww... I hope Tinsley and baby Jackson will be ok. They've really been through so much. These two really deserve some happiness. I hope they are getting married soon.
Date: May 05, 2011 12:56 am Title: Chapter 43
loved it i hope tins and the baby will be ok
[Report This]Date: May 04, 2011 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 43
YAY! FINALLY an update to this story! I missed it SO Much!
Aw, poor Tinsley and Michael that she has pre-eclampsia!
I know somebody who had that too when she was pregnant with twins..
I hope they'll be fine though ;(
Anyhow, LOVED the update, hoping for a next one already!
P.S: I also love the new pictures x
[Report This]Date: May 01, 2011 03:38 am Title: Chapter 42
Keep writing I've been waiting for an update! I just can't wait what will happen next.
Date: Apr 24, 2011 12:39 am Title: Chapter 35
I expected much more Diana in this story
Author's Response:
Don't worry, she'll be making another appearance soon ;)
But if you Really want a fanfic about Michael and Diana, I think you'd better read my other short story Friends With The Rival: the untold story
That one is basically just about these two..
Diana will be making appearances every once in a while but very little nearing the end.. I'm sorry ;s
This is rather a love story about MJ and Tinsley.
Hope I helped..
Date: Apr 13, 2011 02:00 am Title: Chapter 42
hey i just finished reading this story , to be honest , I find the main character Tinsley really annoying , she needs to man up a bit for herself, she seems very depended on michael and needs him to be there every single minute I am sorry if this offended u i mean this story is really clicched and cheesy. i mean Michael wasnt that perfect he also has his ups and downs you know unlike the way u have described him in the story all like god like saint perfect michael i mean common how cheesy and cliched he wasnt perfect no one is perfect , michael was slight different in real life when he married LMP they had fights and stuff unlike what goes on here i dnt know i guess i dnt see michael this way at all. everything seems to be moving in their relationship way to quicklyy and i guess with hardly any drama or anything it makes the same kind of cliched plot line again
Author's Response:
Well, thank you for your honest opinion on my story.
I don't think Michael is perfect in my story , but if you do I'm sorry if it appears that way..
I guess this is kinda how I picture him in a relationship ...
Hope you'll come to like it more if you will in fact stay tuned
I don't feel offended cause any kind of comment is helpful for my writing ;)