Date: Jan 23, 2011 07:51 am Title: Chapter 34
Great chapter :) Aahaa Mahara's a babe ;) xx
[Report This]Date: Jan 23, 2011 07:09 am Title: Chapter 34
Oh my Goood I loved every word you wrote ;D
I loooove tis story so much, i just can't describe it!
It's everything! How you write it, how well you think all this through, how everything always seems to fit
And it's so human, too.. I really keep getting the feeling as if this is all based on a true life story ;p
I wish Michael would've found someone like Tinsley in real life, they are the PERFECT Couple!
But I hope they'll make love again because those chapters get me melting every single time! I'm so addicted xD
Please update soon ;)
Date: Jan 22, 2011 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 34
Yes they deserve a break! I'm glad some peace was made with her family. She and Mike make the perfect couple. I hope they'll be intimate soon.
[Report This]Date: Jan 22, 2011 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 34
Aww beautiful chapter :) i love this story so much! And haha it wasnt endlessly long I love it! Haha :)
Cnt wait for the next part :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 22, 2011 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 34
Hey girl. I loved this chapter. Family is the most important thing in life. It's good to see Tinsley was able to face her childhood trauma by staying at her father's house. I really enjoyed the family feel. And the idea that everyone deserves to be heard, and forgiven; especially family. I think you explored an issue sensitive to many of your readers, self included. We often cling to our childhood traumas because we can only see the situation from our own perspective. But in reality there are many perspectives that comprise the truth of the matter. I really liked this chapter girl. I'm glad her father was not the deadbeat she thought he was. And even her cold-hearted conniving Mom was humanized when she broke down crying. I coud really feel this chapter. Very nice update sis. Keep it coming.
Date: Jan 11, 2011 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very interesting, looking forward to the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: Jan 09, 2011 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 33
I hope this reunion helps Tinsley get better. Cuz home girl is messed up sis. Turning down all Michael's good-lovin indicates to me that she needs some sexual healing. And quick. LOL. Still diggin this story. Keep it coming
[Report This]Date: Jan 09, 2011 10:19 am Title: Chapter 33
I really loved this chapter, it was very well-written!
And a lot happened! I can't believe Michael got in touch with her father! that's crazy! she hasn't seen him since she was 4 years old!
God, I hope everything is gonna turn out fine and they're gonna find a way to work on their relationship while they're alone together, at last!
and Michael's speaking to Diana again? Hmm.. Hope there won't be any drama unfolding there soon!
This is so exciting! I can't wait to read what's next! xxx
Date: Jan 08, 2011 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 33
Damn alot going on in this chapter. Loved it doh.
[Report This]Date: Jan 08, 2011 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 33
Aww it was really sad when michael wanted to make love and she said she wasnt ready. She seemed scared all over again. But thankifully he stopped in time. & Its exticing that hes meeting her parents. I wonde how thats gunna turn out
Cnt wait for the next chapter
Date: Jan 08, 2011 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 33
Tinsley is really annoying me. These pills and pregnancy do not mix! The hell is wrong with her? Then she won't make love to Michael?? Smh. Ridiculous.
[Report This]Date: Jan 06, 2011 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 32
Nice update. Tinsley needs to put some meat on them bones. Hopefully Michael will take good care of her. And I still wanna know why Jermaine can attempt to rape her and get away with it?
[Report This]Date: Jan 06, 2011 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 32
Yay! Updates updates UPDATES! ;D
Yes, I know, I obsessed ;p
Can't wait to know what's gonna happen next!
Hopefully Tins will get her weight undr control again xx
Date: Jan 06, 2011 01:52 am Title: Chapter 32
Aww poor Tins and Mike they have go through the trusting me intimatily stage all over again.
[Report This]Date: Jan 05, 2011 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 32
I loved it and dang she is extremely thin for a prego woman. And michaels question made me laugh hahaha
Cnt wait for the next part