[Report This]Date: Dec 19, 2012 03:44 am Title: Chapter 3
(Sniffling) This is so sad.
[Report This]Date: Dec 19, 2012 03:35 am Title: Chapter 2
Awwww. Sounds like a great friendship. They're almost siblings. That kissing scene was adorable.
[Report This]Date: Dec 19, 2012 03:27 am Title: Chapter 1
Makes you appreciate having a home and someone to take care of you. JJ is very sweet and self sacrificing which you'd think a system's kid would lack. Like it so far.
Date: Dec 19, 2012 12:50 am Title: Chapter 23
OMG...FINALLY!! LOL! This is one of my favorite stories. I always love the ones that authors don't keep up with for whatever reason. It never fails! Haha! :P
Author's Response: Lol this is one of my favs actually
Date: Nov 18, 2012 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 22
I love this story!!! PLEASE CONTINUE!!!
Date: Sep 17, 2012 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 22
This is so realistic! MORE PLEASE!!!LOL!
Date: Sep 17, 2012 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 20
Of all the fanfix I've read, this is the ONLY one that actually seems realistic to Michael's personality. I love it!
Date: Sep 11, 2012 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 22
More More More!!
[Report This]Date: Sep 11, 2012 02:38 am Title: Chapter 22
AAHHHHHHHHHH!!...wait.......my review does count. :(
[Report This]Date: Sep 10, 2012 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 22
They killing me. They so stubborn. They know they want each other so why they play games and not actually give in. Michael is probably end up winning and she be mad. They need to get laid already lol. I still enjoy ur stories.
Continue? :)
Can't wait for more and can't wait for the next chapter. :D
Date: Aug 30, 2012 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 21
MORE MORE MORE!!! *says it like a little kid with sugar rush*
Please upload more
[Report This]Date: Jul 25, 2012 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 21
Lol, they are a mess! I guess it would be awkward seeing the person you grew up with, and viewed as a sibling at the time, naked.
[Report This]Date: Jul 24, 2012 05:13 am Title: Chapter 21
Wow they somethin' else lol that was funny trying to take her boobies out in a public place. Only time i do somethin' like of what she did i do it while im drunk. When im somber i wouldn't do somethin' like that i don't have the guts like jay does. Lol
[Report This]Date: Jul 23, 2012 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 21
Hahaha mwahaha. I'm so bored right now, thanks for updating and keeping me entertained :p
[Report This]Date: Jul 23, 2012 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 21
YAY!!!! an update. this was great. hopefully their will be more.