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Date: Dec 19, 2012 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 17

Lol awww they're too cute. Hopefully Mike will introduce her to the life experiences she's been missing.



Author's Response: Lol maaaan you got me to 500 reviews on my other stoyr. Id kiss you if I wasn't straight

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Date: Dec 19, 2012 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 16

Do it now mike. Just hold her. 

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Date: Dec 19, 2012 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 15

Wtf! They even took peanut? Omg. Poor thing. She was mad funny though.

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Date: Dec 19, 2012 09:26 am Title: Chapter 14

A comedian? Never would've guessed lol. He's Falling hard boy.

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Date: Dec 19, 2012 09:19 am Title: Chapter 13

Lol what is he doing with all of that icecream? That mix sounds disgusting. Jay seems like the push he needs.

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Date: Dec 19, 2012 09:10 am Title: Chapter 12

Lol the secret sharing was funny, playing with poor fat Martha's emotions. He ran away looking for her? (Gushes) I don't blame her for the trust issues. She really doesn't know him from Jack yet. He could be psycho.

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Date: Dec 19, 2012 05:19 am Title: Chapter 11

Uh oh, not even a day in and they're already argueing. She knows she's in love. Don't deny it girl.

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Date: Dec 19, 2012 05:10 am Title: Chapter 10

Yeeeeess!!!! 

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Date: Dec 19, 2012 05:00 am Title: Chapter 9

Is this a dream? If so that would make me highly upset. Douche could keep his 20 bucks. He ain't bout to run nobody ragged.

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Date: Dec 19, 2012 04:49 am Title: Chapter 8

Awwwww. Camille gave his ass a reality check. I can't believe he thought she wasn't gonna figure him out. We women are very observant. Find each other already!!!

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Date: Dec 19, 2012 04:42 am Title: Chapter 7

Glad she's taking the initiative and taking control of her life

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Date: Dec 19, 2012 04:20 am Title: Chapter 6

That was pure bullshit and you know it. Lol had me checking to see if I skipped a chapter and then rereading to see if I read wrong :(. Ms Clint sounds like a great person. If it was me and I was about to go home I would've told em to come back tomorrow.

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Date: Dec 19, 2012 04:09 am Title: Chapter 23

They both need to get laid and stop fighting lol jay should respect his wishes. Thats sweet that he don't think of her as an piece of meat.

Author's Response: Well if he was walking around your house half naked you'd want to pounce on him too

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Date: Dec 19, 2012 04:09 am Title: Chapter 5

Omg! (Squealing) :D the heavens have spoken. Lol I can't believe he hit her with his car. Just like Jay to not take advantage of a situation because if it was anyone else they would of stayed on the asphalt making concrete angels while yelling for an ambulance. Lol. This is awesome.



Author's Response: Lmao aphalt angels thouh?

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Date: Dec 19, 2012 03:56 am Title: Chapter 4

Lol well damn. What kind of dry ass break up was that? Lol rich folk I tell ya. Poor Jay though. Chucked cheese? Her life sux big time.



Author's Response: They weren't in a relationship lol she was the other woman

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