[Report This]Date: Oct 28, 2011 11:45 am Title: The Shock of A Life Time!
Oh my gosh! I have literally read all the chapters up to this one and stopping for a rest! Haha! I LOVE THIS STORY!
Please don't stop writing! I know when you don't get much feedback it feels pointless but this story makes me smile!
Keep up the amazing writing :)
[Report This]Date: Oct 23, 2011 01:39 am Title: Good Day, Gone Bad
Noone ever blame themselves something they cant control. I think some people scared to go back to the life they use to live. I was scared to go back to my dad he abuse everyday when i was a kid. When he died i blame myself. I gotten over it. It was hard it take i guess. I love reading this story.
[Report This]Date: Oct 23, 2011 01:17 am Title: The Meeting
Nice first chapter if i talk to him i got tongue tied. I enjoy reading it
[Report This]Date: Oct 06, 2011 06:37 pm Title: Getting Out Of The Hospital
omg please don't stop like this story is soooo inspiring i love it
Date: Oct 06, 2011 04:57 pm Title: Getting Out Of The Hospital
What a sweet chapter I like it there is another site you can use if you want its called MJsElusiveButterfly its a fan fiction site its fairy new and free its also unlimited you can post as many fan fictions as you want there are some pretty good stories on there I am member. Can't wait for more. :)
Date: Oct 03, 2011 04:02 am Title: Good Day, Gone Bad
Wow Hayle is so lucky. Its a shame her day ended on a bad note with what happened to her mom
[Report This]Date: Oct 02, 2011 02:18 am Title: Good Day, Gone Bad
I love this story!!! I can't wait to read more. *hint hint nudge nudge*
[Report This]Date: Oct 01, 2011 07:23 am Title: The Meeting
Nice start. Not surprised tat Haley is excited about Michael coming back to the store
[Report This]Date: Sep 30, 2011 09:46 pm Title: The Meeting
I like this, can't wait for the next chapter :)