Penname: NeelzLovesMJ [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: Aug 14, 2016
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Hellooo people of!

I'm an author here and writing has been a passion of mine since a very early age. I love all things literary - whether it's reading or writing. I adore literature and am huge fan of John Steinbeck, F. Scott Fitzgerald, Shakespeare and C.S Lewis among others. I also study English Literature and one of my favourite novels ever is The Great Gatsby.

I'm currently doing A-Levels in the UK, but outside of school, I'm an avid artist and have been drawing since I was in nappies. Another creative hobby of mine is music - I sing and play and I'm learning how to produce using software.

Music in general is a great part of my life and I listen to mainly Hip-Hop and R&B, both from today and from the 90s, though I like my House and Dancehall too. 

I grew up around MJ and his music and he fascinates and inspires me. My favourite allbum of his is Bad, as is the era, though I love him from 1958-2009. I combined two of the loves of my life and ended up writing a fanfiction story on this site. I take pride in my written work and doing anything creative is like a release for me. 

I'm still young and don't really know what I'll do in life XD but as for now, I know that I want to keep writing until the story is finished for you guys. 

Beta-reader: No
Gender: Female
Age: 18-21
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Nikita, according to the media a gold-digger for marrying the old billionaire Mr Andrew Martinez who mysteriously died soon after their tenth wedding anniversary, the cause of death cardiac arrest  but the media's idea is Nikita gold-digger Martinez murdered her husband for his money

Heartbroken and grieving over the loss of her beloved husband Nikita decides to donate some money to various charities and at one of the charity events she meets non other than the king of pop himself

Will he listen to her or is he like the rest of the world disgusted by her?  

Find out in:  Love Conquers All


Please review if you are reading

Categories: HIStory: 1995-1999, Adult, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Death
Series: None
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93935 Read Count: 5861
[Report This] Published: Oct 31, 2017 Updated: Nov 30, 2018
Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 18, 2018 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

Paulo is like the polar opposite of Maria. He even has a nickname for Nikita see that’s how you know he is the good parent! Whoaaaaa. Now that is some tea right there, I can’t believe Paulo cheated because from what I read of him, he didn’t seem like the type of man to do something like that; he seemed way too sweet and caring. But it completely explains why Maria acts that way towards Nikita. Sad to hear about Patricia but that whole thing is messed up. They should take that shit to Dr Phil LOL

LOL MIGUEL FFS, “I know your mommy” πŸ˜‚



Never change, Miguel :’)

Author's Response:

Lol take it to Dr Phil 


Lol can't blame the little man to call him that since he didn't say his real name lol 

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Aug 24, 2018 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Michael is like a big-event coordinator; he knows where everyone is, what they’re supposed to be doing and stuff. Good he’s in charge of it all because we all know he was a little bossy-boots *ahem behind the scenes of Speed Demon*. 

“It’s in her belly but how it got there, I don’t know” omg do you have a lesson or two to learn in school, Emilio 

Uh-oh I think Nikita passed out because she didn’t eat anything and therefore has no energy. Luckily she’s okay since they got her help at the hospital but she needs to take better care of herself and Michael should be as attentive to her as he possibly can be, to make sure it won’t happen again. And damn that nurse was shady af BYE. Hopefully James, Carter and Sophia arrive at the hospital ASAP!!

Author's Response:

Someone has to be the boss lol 



He might be good at other things like math lol 


Yes Michael is making sure she's going to take care of herself from now on. Yeah smh shady people everywhere  




Let's hope so 

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Aug 17, 2018 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

I’m glad Michael is there to support her. Her speech was beautiful! And yikes her pregnancy is steady progressing meaning her bump will only start to get bigger and more noticeable. I don’t think she will be able to hide it from the media much longer now...oh well we’ll see! 

Author's Response:

Yes he's there for her 



She truly loved him but it's at the same time moving on too 



Yes it's growing bigger now and will be hard to hide for the media 

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 24, 2018 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Aw look at shopaholic Michael going all out for his newlywed wife. He did say himself he buys his love interests jewellery. I agree with Amparo that they should let the authorities handle this and it will be sorted out. Totally understand Nikita’s anger etc but yeah also she needs to have an official wedding with Michael now too!

Author's Response:

Lol shopaholic Michael 



Yes he said that himself 



Yeah they kind of need a real wedding too 

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 24, 2018 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

So they’re married. In a way this is what Katherine wanted, right? Call me out if I’m wrong, but there’s a serious problem with Nikita wearing the wedding ring from the marriage to her deceased ex-husband when she’s now married to someone else. Michael’s gotta step up. He is her husband, no-one else. I get she needs time to move on but by the looks of it, she has. I mean she’s re-married. That’s saying a lot about where she is, emotionally. 

Author's Response:

Yes it is what she wanted only she imaged it differently  


Mentally she's still wrapping her mind around it tho

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 24, 2018 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Short and sweet wedding ceremony! Love it. Nikita gave Sophia some great advice about motherhood. Can’t imagine what would’ve happened if Michael didn’t hold Nikita back from that crazy girl. Hormones, hormones, hormones! Shit even I was freaking out. Thank fuckkk the baby is okay. Spontaneous marriages? That’s Vegas for you! Also they should have more than 24 hours to get the marriage annulled lol...I think one of them needs to be a resident in the state but anyway hopefully it gets sorted out. 

Author's Response:

Yes simple and to the point lol 


Ikr? Yes def the hormones 



Yes that's Vegas for you lol 




Maybe they don't want to sort it out? We shall see lol 

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 18, 2018 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Okay it’s official. Miguel is the cutest little child baby small person thing that I’ve ever come across in any fanfiction. Ever. He’s cuter and even more adorable than the toddler in my fic, I don’t know what it is about Miguel, his language just makes me smile but I def know I can’t get enough of his character. Mrs Ramirez may be shaking her head but guess whatvfam. SO AM I. Why can’t she accept that Nikita has, I quote from the 6 god drake, “started from the bottom” and now she’s here? Where is that you might ask? Living a wonderful life with an amazing husband and beautiful child. She needs to be happier for her daughter too. I’m glad Michael has Nikita’s back as always. But I find it so just wrong that she’s talking to her daughter like that, it ain’t right fam. Ain’t right at all. She’s likely just jealous that her daughter is living the life she always wanted. 

Author's Response:

No Joy is a total cutie too I miss her 


Mrs Ramirez is stubborn 


You'll find her reason soon ;) 


That too 

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Date: Oct 24, 2018 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Haha Nikita and her chocolate cravings! She might wanna slow down tho. Diabetes is possible but so is an overweight baby w/out of control insulin levels...

Still wondering about the gender I see. Loved Emilio and Michael playing monopoly aw we all know he was def a fan of that shit 

Author's Response:

True let's hope it's temporary the chocolate craving 



Yes still wondering ;) 



Who doesn't love monopoly (the original one not the newish one with a bankpass thing) 

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 11, 2018 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Nikita shouldn’t feel like she has to “make up” for anything. Michael even said himself, he will be her first since Andrew and that’s a big step to take. She needs to be ready for that. LMAO there’s nothing wrong with smelling like pancakes Michael! And ooooh I’d love to meet Nikita’s family that she mentions. 

Anyway onto the main part of the chapter which you know I’ve been waiting for...okay I’m not gonna front and say I wasn’t expecting her to call out the wrong name, because I’ve known for ages that was gonna happenπŸ˜‚, but I again, don’t blame Nikita. I don’t think she was using Michael, she just got caught up in the moment. It’s not like she did it on purpose, she couldn’t control that Andrew appeared in her mind and she hasn’t been “visualising” Andrew within Michael this entire time either. Also love the comparison Nikita gave between Michael and Andrew! Still I do think Michael shouldn’t be that salty I mean she did make it up to him lol. He’s just gotta try understand, and I know he will; he’s hurt right now but I know he won’t be able to stay away from Nikita for so long. But yeah forget the drama - I’m just glad they finally did it! πŸ˜‚ HELL TO THE YEAH MICHAEL HIT IT NOW HE AIN’T GON’ QUIT IT

Great, lengthy chapter! Loved it truly pea <3

Author's Response:

Ikr? But she felt like that tho poor thing 


Ikr? Like what's wrong with pancakes? Lol 



You will one day don't worry lol 



Yes you've waited ages ik so have I (to post it that is lol) 




Ikr? It wasn't her intention to call him Andrew



Can't blame him for being salty rn 






Yup no quitting it lol 




Thank you Onion <3 

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 18, 2018 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

OMG. A YEAR has gone by already?! Oh mannnn!! Not gonna lie I wish I could’ve seen a little bit more of baby Miguel during his first few months of being in this world but in a way I’m glad I don’t have to wait so long to see him at one years, because this is a milestone. Also I’m surprised you didn’t add an image of Miguel like you have done with all the other cast! But I can picture him and he is adorrrrable! 





AW omfg he’s already speaking Spanish!!!! OKAY I need to calm TF down right now. 



Just when I thought it couldn’t get any sweeter 😭 Carlos and Sophia! I rate all this happiness that’s going around, happy couples left right and centre. It’s so nice to see after all the drama that’s happened. Super glad the Rameriz family aren’t total fans because they can wholesomely accept Michael for who he is, and treat him like a family member. 

Author's Response:

Couldn't find a picture the way I wanted him to look like 


Ikr? He's adorable 



Yes can they accept him for who he is  :) 

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 24, 2018 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Hm I wonder what the media were saying about Nikita. I usually don’t but I agree with Mike in that she shouldn’t stay at the cemetery til night bc hello she has a baby growing in her stomach. Like she’s eating for two, don’t tell me she didn’t leave to get food at some point lol. And damn, Amparo’s fiancé needs to trust her a bit more. 

Author's Response:

Yes she needs to take care of the little one in her stomach now, she's getting used to it 




Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 18, 2018 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Oh my god. First lemme say this - I can’t believe that this is the actual final chapter of this story. I honestly still remember when we were discussing ideas for this way before you got to writing and it just amazes me how fast time has gone by and now it’s actually finished like damn. I’m shooketh! 

Onto the chapter: it’s like they are one big happy family. Feel like it’s going to tie up fuckinggg beautifully because I see that Maria and nikita are finally having a very important conversation. Wowwww Nikita is really outchea throwing knives! YOU GO GIRL- I mean, THAT IS very BAD. Should not happen. Yes it is indeed Michael’s fault that she is pregnant with a foetus. Gee I wonder how it happened. Oh yes he (censored) and then he (censored) before (censored) and that’s how it happened! Well I was right about that beautiful ending. I love that they’re naming their second child Patricia. Phew no more maria = no more negativity. 

This chapter did feel more summary towards the end but then again it is the ending so it’s totally cool. Looking back I wish I could have read the story weekly as you posted the chapters but life got in the way, I took a long long break from this website, and stuff and so I’ve had to do lots of catching up and remind myself of certain plot details, but through and through, this was a good story. A great read too. There were things I agreed with, things I didn’t agree with, but overall I think the characters defo deserve their happy ending. I’m sad it’s over! But knowing you, when one story ends, another begins. Sorry my reviews have been late for so long but remember that I am on Xmas break for another 3 and bit weeks so i’ll catch up on FBOFW at some point too. Also idk why I’m saying his here when I could say it in the group chat but yes I hope you enjoyed my wild sporadic reviews and melting over Miguel, who I’m gonna miss so fucking much LOL. TIL NEXT TIME PEA!!! 

Author's Response:

I hear u I'm still shocked too 


Lol yeah it's bad but deserved in a way 



Yes lots of censored happened ;) 



Exactly no more negativity  



Look at the bright sight you didn't have to wait for the cliffs you could read the next chapter right away 




Yes I'm all for happy endings (for characters who deserve it lol) 




Domt apologize for being late with reviews it's ok 



About a new story, I'm kinda trying to find a idea that fits (you prob hear me in chat about it in the 3 weeks you're home)  



I miss the little guy too lol 



See ya later onion 

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Aug 14, 2018 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

OMG FINALLY Amparo came around! It’s about time! PRAISE DA LORD 

she still doesn’t understand what “baby steps” means though, and she was getting a little too nosy and asking way too personal questions for my taste. I mean it’s been 12 years, don’t expect to be hit with 12 years’ worth of information and stuff in the space of a plane journey, fr. Nikita doesn’t have to share anything with her sister and I think she should keep to herself and just remain civil now that Emilio has his mother’s permission to continue seeing his awesome af relatives. Cool story of how Amparo and Carlos met though. Update sooooon!

Author's Response:

Lmao yes finally 



Yes 12 years is a long time and too much to talk about in a plane ride anyway 



Yes Nikita is being civil for now that's progress too lol 



Yes Emillio will be able to see his fav auntie now with his mom's permission 




Thank u I tried being not too cliche with Amparo and Carlos 




Don't worry I will 

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Aug 14, 2018 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Poor Emilio and his sandcastles!! I can’t blame him for not wanting to leave, it sounds so lit and it is still summer so it would be really great if he could spend it with Michael and Nikita and the others. And yikes Amparo steady interrogating everyone - just let your son have some fun, bih!!! What is her problemm OMG I get she’s his mother and she’s overprotective by nature for that reason, but she can’t go so far as to dictating Emilio’s personal relationships. He should be able to see Nikita, she’s his aunt and she’s always been good to him. I’m glad Michael stepped in to defend her but I’m sure Nikita could handle Amparo herself. But yeah sibling rivalry is a very real thing and I think you gave Nikita and Amparo a really realistic one, too😁

also unfortunately I don’t feel sympathy for Amparo - NOT after that bitchass behaviour back there!πŸ˜‚ great chapter pea and I’m so sorry I’m sooooo late but I’m catching up now!

Author's Response:

Yes poor Emillio just wants to enjoy his summer with his favourite people 



True she's naturally overprotective but there's a too overprotective too and she's on the edge lol 




Yes she could but Michael loves her and he's not scared of Amparo 




Thank you i tried making it realistic 😁




Lol you don't have to like her 




No problem ik you'd eventually review when you've time 



Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 01, 2018 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Michael being into skincare? I’m all for it! πŸ˜‚ Guys can do this stuff too; I mean me and my bro do charcoal face-masks together so I’m rooting for this 100% LOL 

All the masks and things she made sound amaaaazing and cool, and their whole day was so cute I’m glad they pampered each-other since they’re both always stressed out and shit. But yeah it’s also good that they’re talking about past relationships and personal things. Just means that they know more about each-other. I can tell Michael is still hung up on the whole Andrew thing but i’m Sure, at this rate, he’ll get over it in no time


Author's Response:



Lol more guys should be like ur bro :) 


Yeah their day was wonderful, yes he still kinda feeling like second after Andrew but one day he'll be nr 1 I'm sure ;)