Penname: NeelzLovesMJ [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: Aug 14, 2016
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Hellooo people of mjfic.com!


I'm an author here and writing has been a passion of mine since a very early age. I love all things literary - whether it's reading or writing. I adore literature and am huge fan of John Steinbeck, F. Scott Fitzgerald, Shakespeare and C.S Lewis among others. I also study English Literature and one of my favourite novels ever is The Great Gatsby.


I'm currently doing A-Levels in the UK, but outside of school, I'm an avid artist and have been drawing since I was in nappies. Another creative hobby of mine is music - I sing and play and I'm learning how to produce using software.


Music in general is a great part of my life and I listen to mainly Hip-Hop and R&B, both from today and from the 90s, though I like my House and Dancehall too. 


I grew up around MJ and his music and he fascinates and inspires me. My favourite allbum of his is Bad, as is the era, though I love him from 1958-2009. I combined two of the loves of my life and ended up writing a fanfiction story on this site. I take pride in my written work and doing anything creative is like a release for me. 


I'm still young and don't really know what I'll do in life XD but as for now, I know that I want to keep writing until the story is finished for you guys. 


Beta-reader: No
Gender: Female
Age: 18-21
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Summary:

 

Siedah Garrett has been signed onto to the epic records company working with the quincy jones and achieving her dream to finally met michael jackson as their relationship blossoms into love can they make it through the pying eyes of the media.


Categories: HIStory: 1995-1999, Thriller: 1982-1983, Bad: 1986-1990, Dangerous: 1991-1993, 1993-1994
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 633 Read Count: 702
[Report This] Published: Oct 04, 2017 Updated: Oct 04, 2017
Reviewer: darkmc912 Signed starstarstar
Date: Oct 05, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hi, omg so anyone that knows me knows that I’m instantly drawn to a Bad Era story where he’s famous and doing albums and tours and things. So I had to click on this and I must say - you did not disappoint! I think it’s off to a great start, can already see Michael and Siedah lowkey flirting with each-other and it seems interesting. 

Please update soon!

Summary:

Nikita, according to the media a gold-digger for marrying the old billionaire Mr Andrew Martinez who mysteriously died soon after their tenth wedding anniversary, the cause of death cardiac arrest  but the media's idea is Nikita gold-digger Martinez murdered her husband for his money


Heartbroken and grieving over the loss of her beloved husband Nikita decides to donate some money to various charities and at one of the charity events she meets non other than the king of pop himself


Will he listen to her or is he like the rest of the world disgusted by her?  


Find out in:  Love Conquers All

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Please review if you are reading


Categories: HIStory: 1995-1999, Adult, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Death
Series: None
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93935 Read Count: 6649
[Report This] Published: Oct 31, 2017 Updated: Nov 30, 2018
Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 13, 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Womp it's me the first one to review AS ALWAYS. (and with the best reviews that leave you rolling XD) 

WOW when Michael was in her house the next morning I instantly thought 'omg they smashed" LOL. But I seriously adore the politeness and the considerance Michael has for her. He reminds her of Andrew ok NO MICHAEL IS ONE-OF-A-KIND - there's nobody like him plz.

"Go follow your dreams" *rolls eyes* what's next? Is he going to ask her to donate to the EFW and Heal the Wizards? 

JK lmao he's my bean. Wasn't Andrew like a lot older than Nikita? Sounds like they were relationshio goals tbh. I mean it's clear they were very close and very much in love and I see why this is so hard for her. I feel terrible for Nikita but legit the drinking should stop now....maybe Michael can take her out to places like the golf club. "Why is the biggest hit writer single" GOOD QUESTION NIKITA WHY TF IS SEXY MAN STILL A SINGLE PRNGLE. I sense that Nikita is lowwww-key interested. 

Wow man "I need someone that doesn't give a damn about the media' LOOK IN FRONT OF U SILLY NOT-WIZARD. Okay this is what I wanted - them two to do shit together so Mykeru can take her mind off shit and make her feel better bc she needs it fr. Still she can't keep comparing Andrew to Michael - I get she misses him very much BUT I think the two are worlds apart and different. JUS SAYN'. I mean it's good she has found comfort within cinnamon roll buttttt no there's only one person like him and that's him. I mean who else thanks God when they see a sunset? ;) 

Need more of their time together! <3 amazngggg sweet peaaaaa. 



Author's Response:

Lol yes my nr 1 each time lol and yes I always love your reviews  

 

Lol yes but Andrew coulda been a nice guy too, don't go hate him now lol 

 

 

Lol who knows?

 

 

Yes he was a lot older but they were goals tho 

 

Ikr? Verrrryyyyy low-key then the woman is grieving 

 

Lol yes she's right there but again she's grieving 

 

Yes they're not the same 

 

 

 

Maybe Andrew did that too stop judging him u don't know Andrew 😂😂😂

 

 

 

Thank you my dear onion 😘

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 20, 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

“You want to ride a horse?” Michael asked her < no but I would love to ride you-OK BYE

FR she should have just had dinner with muffin. They could have shared a muffin. Jk no she needs to stop feeling guilty over his death, seems like she’s not past the mourning stage quite yet, but I’m sure Andrew would want her to be happy no matter what. She’s legit so hesitant to have a good time and get close to Michael which I understand why. AFRAID HE MIGHT WHIP OUT THE GOLD PANTS AND MAKE U PREGNANT HAHA

OK NO seriously. The end of this chapter was really sad and dramatic :( she seems lowkey depressed fam. My mans should be able to help her and he better recognise what she’s dealing with and get her some damn help. Idc how. Idc when. But I feel like they could both really use the company...



Author's Response:

Lol ikr? 

 

Yes Andrew would want her to be happy. Lmao maybe he should wear it to cheer her up. 

 

 

Yes she's grieving it' so sad, poor thing  :( but she needs to want the help too. 

 

 

Yes they both could use the company  

Reviewer: darkmc912 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 01, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yas it is finally here. Seems like only yesterday you pitched this idea to us!

Amazing start! All those horrible things being said about her wowwww people have legit no chill. Kinda reminds me of the same type of thing Michael endured throughout his entire life so that’s why I can def see these two getting along, feel like they can empathise with one another. It’s heartbreaking to see Nikita drinking away her sorrows like come on plz, get up, go outside and go to the golf club or do something else to take your mind off it. Can’t imagine what it’s like losing your husband (bc I am single Pringle 4 lyf) but she shouldn’t have to worry bc I know a certain someone just got back in the country.

I wonder what the charity event will be like and I can’t wait to see how she ends up meeting Michael, maybe while they’re meeting people or at dinner? It’s so sweet she’s using the money or a good cause I think Michael would 100% appreciate that. Bc she’s doing it for the children.

Happy that you finally posted this, don’t keep us waiting too long <3



Author's Response:

Hey sweetie, 

 

Yes it feel like forever ago I had the idea and finally posted yay :) 

 

Yes it' horrible what's said about her but it could be a bonding thing for them since they both know what it feels like 

 

Yes it' heartbreaking but her way of dealing with the loss at the moment. Yes a certain someone just got back into country :). Golf club 😉😂

 

 

Don't worry they'll meet soon. Yes I'm sure Michael will approve of her way of honoring her late husband. 

 

 

 

Thank you dear, I won't keep you waiting too long 😘

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 23, 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

OMG first off it would’ve been so cool if you posted this chapter on Christmas Day which is like two days away! 

LOL Michael being early?! My mans was known for being LATE 😂. I loveee that Michael is helping her out in the kitchen and sort of being her unpaid therapist at the same time what a keeeperrrr. Omfg I’m crying here; she asked cinnamon roll to hold her 😭 of course Michael wouldn’t be there if he believed her I mean same with Nikita, it’s not like she believes the tabloid stuff about him which is why she befriended him. These two have so much in common legit. Their late-night 3am talk was goals. Loved this chapter it’s prob one of my faves so far. ❤️ 



Author's Response:

Yea ik lol but I was like 'i clicked on add chapter' before I realised this was my Christmas chapter lol 

 

Lol late for breakfast lol early for dinner depends on whether he thought it was a lunch or dinner lol 

 

Ikr? Where can I find my Michael? Sadly there was only one

 

 

Ikr? 

 

 

Yes goals 

 

 

❤ merry Christmas 

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Mar 10, 2018 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

IN SPANISH WE SAY SJACKSON LOLLLLLL 

WOWOWOW Sophia and everything she said to Michael omfg I just can’t even process it. It’s so funny omfg. His responses made it even funnier but I have to give Sophia credit damn everything she said was right even tho Michael’s clapbacks wee epiccc. Yes there is def such thing as a top tight suit because on the set of Speed Demon I saw this clip where he was being told to loosen up in terms of his dance moves but muffin complained saying “this is so tight I feel so limited!!!!” Whining like a baby even tho he has a point LOL!

OKAY. FUCKING FINALLY. HELL TO THE YEA she agreed to be his girl. She seemed kinda reluctant about it so personally I don’t think she should’ve agreed to it if she isn’t ready EVEN THOUGH I REALLY WANT THEM TO BE TOGETHER, but at the same time she shouldn’t rush and that’s why I’m very conflicted about this whole thing but very happy about it nonetheless. Loveddddd this one pea 



Author's Response:

Lol yes she had to make up something lol 

 

Ikr? Lol 

 

 

Yes finally 

 

Yes poor babymuffin 

 

I hear you but they taking it slow 

 

 

I'm glad you loved it onion 

 

 

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jan 26, 2018 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Omgz. It’s me. I’ve come out of hiding! 

I felt so bad for Nikita when she was legit just tryna have a good time away from the bullshit with her friend and then all those mean people saying all that stuff :(. So Peak on Nikita. I half-expected her to maybe open up to Michael about the rumours - I mean, he gets her. She knows he deals with the same thing lol. They should bond over what they have in common, no matter how unpleasant the circumstance is. But yeah love seeing Michael and Momma K together cute af! Again thought Nikita and Michael’s interaction would be somewhat longer but you know what - my mans is busy. It’s ok. Hopefully they will get together for some real fun soon 😉😂



Author's Response:

Omg was about to send search and rescue for u lol. Ik you got important things to do 

 

Yeah poor thing

 

Me too I love mama K moments  

 

 

 

Someday they'll have some real 'Fun' lol 

Reviewer: darkmc912 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 06, 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

LOWLIFE SHITHEADS I AGREE. OK fr tho.... Nikita asked Michael if he donates to charity? WUT. This is 1997, right? omg Man in the Mirror came out in 1988 and Heal The Wizards - I mean - World came out in 1993. Sounds like a charitable man to me!!! XD I'm sure Nikita looked like a snaaackkkk in that dress (but the real three-course-meal of the dinner was cinnamon roll) ;) Which charities were they btw? Was the WAB there? Did Michael donate to the EFW? Did Hardee give a speech or nah 

"No I drove here myself and the limo picked me up at the underground garage and they drove around the buiding so it looked like I came with a limo" MICHAEL WUT. Lmaooo why is he so extra even when it comes to his transport ????

"Chardonnay, vodka, or wed wine" oh man this is funny and sad at the same time....like no Nikita. Find a hobby, dear, or something else to do in your time. How about Michael? OK BYE LOL

OKKKK loveddd that he drove her home even and the fact she agreed means she LEARLY has no idea what a terrible driver he was and I'm surprised she (well both of them actually) managed to stay calm during the ride like instead of screaming bc Michael almost ran into a stop sign for the third time bc we all know he was reckless af. Maybe a crazy ride would have cheered her up and broke the ice between them? LOL & I can legit see muffin being a shrink like 'DR JACKSON IS READY TO SEE YOU' OKOK COMING *runs to his office*

The end was sweet, he said she'll find love again and I think we all knows in whom she will find it.... Great chapter pea! <33 they have a lot in common already, can't wait to see it grow and develop.



Author's Response:

Lmao this whole review 😂😂😂

 

 

10 minutes later (not really lol) 

 

 

Yes it's 1997 and yes it's charity i agree and onion you forgot the hospital visits smh lol 

 

Its no question he did those donations for you othwise you'll be blowing up his phone 😂😂😂😂

 

Cause he's Michael Jackson that's why lol 

 

Lol yes great hobby 😂😂 but fr I agree she should find another way to deal with her loss 

 

 

 

Girl this is fiction no reckless driving here lol 

 

 

 

Lol yes all year fully booked with appoints lol so he probaby won't do that tho lol 

 

 

 

Do we? Lol but yes agree it's sweet he said that 

 

 

 

You just have to wait and see lol 

 

 

 

Thank you Onion 💜

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 15, 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

She is finallyyyy doing what’s right. Kind of. Love that she’s not only regularly keeping in touch with Michael, but with Sophia too. BUT FAM seriously how did she fool Michael into thinking she’s drinking tea when she’s drinking out of a WINE glass and also refilling that glass?!😂 Either Michael’s plain clapped, or he lowkey knew she lied and just didn’t say anything. 

"I wasn't going to eat microwaved Christmas dinner but ok deal" Michael answered - also why did I cry at this lmao 

Fr tho I was applauding Nikita when she finally got rid of the alochol. Awww loves that he carried her 😭😭 that entire part was so cute man legit. Well I thought THAT was cute until he cooked for her!!! These two need to take things to the next step ASAP!!! ❤️



Author's Response:

Yes finally :)

 

He probably didn' say anything knowing she'll do what she wants anyway  

 

Idk why you cried lol 

 

 

Lol too many cute parts :) 

 

 

Grieving takes time, give her time ❤

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Feb 14, 2018 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

This chapter began on such a positive note I’m smiling. LOL I hate spiders too but Nikita is such a LIL GIRL! ITS KINDA CUTE. She calls Michael to get rid of a spider? Has she ever heard of BUG EXTERMINATORS LOL! I’m kidding it just shows how dependant she is on Michael and kinda how he’s the only one around for her. And I love that he actually showed up lmao it makes this ten times better. AND THEN he just casually befriends the spider like 😂😂

Ah even the ending of this chapter was really nice and sweet I love that she gave him a tint lol kiss yes I see you Nikita 👀 for me, that is a huge milestone in their relationship. It means that Michael’s charm and all his efforts and everything IS WORKING and now I know that it’s just a matter of time before nikita becomes his. WOOP. THEN THEY CAN SMASHHHH BABAYYYYY



Author's Response:

Cute, Girll spiders are scary af I'd be calling someone in the middle of the night too if I lived on my own 

 

Those bug people dont come over in the middle of the night lol 

 

Yes he's friends with every living thing including eight legged scary af creatures  lol 

 

 

 

 

Ofcourse his charm works how can you resist him? Lol 

 

 

 

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Feb 14, 2018 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

"How long you're going to be able to last to just being a friend?" Liz asked PREACH LIZ PREAAACHHHHH

she needs to listen to Michael man. I can’t stress it enough! Their conversation was intense yet very deep and I totally understand nikita’s lashing out at Michael - he DIDNT say anything wrong, nor did he mean to breach a sensitive area, but it just goes to show how hurt and affected andrew’s death has left her. I feel so bad for her she seems absolutely downright miserable and even a little bit depressed. But it’s a good thing Sabrina the therapist had a session with Nikita because now Nikita has a place to vent - and that’s not Michael lol. He really doesn’t deserve the shit Nikita gave him but he’s a good guy, giving her the doge she needs and all.im glad their second interaction was more positive and even Nikita seems some hope for herself. I do too! I know she will get there one day.  



Author's Response:

Ikr? Lol 

 

 

Yes they're having all this deep conversations and truly a so called 'click they're just admitting it ugh lol 

 

 

 

Yes Sabrina gives her hope and positive view of the future  

 

 

 

Yes he gives her as much as she needs 

 

 

 

 

Yes one day she'll be there 

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Feb 12, 2018 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Ha I wonder if Nikita’s anti-hangover remedy actually works. “Ugh truly disgusting” lol way to compliment Nikita’s attempts at trying to make you feel better, Michael! She seemed soooo shocked and in denial about the possibility her and Michael did the ting. LIKE CHILL LOL. If you did it, I’m sure she’d 100% remember it lol. Man I hate seeing her at Andrew’s grave that’s so sad. Michael time and time telling her she needs to get help, she has to listen to him - he’s the only one aware of the damage she’s doing to herself, he’s the only one who cares...she legit needs to give the therapy a try at least. I totally agree with Michael - Nikita is very stubborn lol, but by now, I think she can trust Michael. 



Author's Response:

I hope it does lol 

 

Lmao but you can't blame it does sound yucky lol 

 

Ikr? She'd remember it 

 

Yes he cares so deeply and she finally listened to him

 

 

 

Yeah it' partly her personality and partly the Spanish culture lol 

 

 

Yes she can trust him and she knows that 

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 09, 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

ah so THAT'S where she went - Tijuana! 

"Then you traveled Europe and got yourself a sugar daddy And I got married too, work and all that shit" Sophia answered <--- BITCH BYE you don't know what the full story is. THE DOOR, Sophia. 

I like that she caught up with Michael very briefly. This entire time I've been saying Nikita needs to like fix up and I'm happy that she finally is, even if it means trying to reconnect with an old friend. Hopefully things start looking up for her...Sophia seems a bit clapped but it's way better than Nikita drinking her life away. 

Lowkey wish Michael invited her for dinner or just to hang out. She seems lonely but hopefully they spend more time together in the next chapter. <3

 



Author's Response:

Lmao I just love your zero chill reviews lol 

 

Sophia has no real filter lol 

 

 

 

They both seem lonly imo  <3

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Aug 31, 2018 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

I think it’s very real that fans of Michael would hate on Nikita because it’s kinda happened with other women in his life (e.g. Debbie/Lisa/Diana...) 

Not sure how I feel about Michael talking so directly with the media. He shouldn’t give them anything. It’s not their business to know and they’ll prob twist Michael’s words anyway. Okay Amparo - glad you’re trying to be there for you sis but...I still find you sketchy af! Lmao she always wants to get her way *rolls eyes* like with the diaper story. It’s cute tho. She’s a bit like Nikita but not that much. Hahaaa if it’s not a girl, Michael is going to be one disappointed daddy. I can’t wait til a gender is revealed pea!! 



Author's Response:

And Nikita is already hated for killing her husband that died of old age something she couldn't do anything about  

 

He felt like saying something about it  

 

Lol 'I still find u sketchy af' lol yeah that's an older sister for you lol (I think since I dont have a older sister) 

 

 

They're sisters so they're kinda the same but not really the same (does that make sense? Lol) 

 

If its not a girl he'll try again for a girl lol 

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 24, 2018 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

OMG first it was chocolate. Now it’s spicy things. Yas me and her gon’ get along lmao. Michael is such a wimp, her snack didn’t sound that bad! (This is coming from someone who took a jar of chilli powder and Tobasco all the way to university lol). Anyway, I’m really looking forward to Sophia and Carter’s wedding. Wow! Vegas sounds amazing it’s gonna be lit. Not sure how Emilio is gonna handle his parent’s little split.  



Author's Response:

Yes lol 

 

Lol you brave with your Tabasco 

 

 

 

Carlos isn't his real dad he on my kmew him for 2 years as his mother's fiance