Penname: NeelzLovesMJ [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: Aug 14, 2016
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Hellooo people of!

I'm an author here and writing has been a passion of mine since a very early age. I love all things literary - whether it's reading or writing. I adore literature and am huge fan of John Steinbeck, F. Scott Fitzgerald, Shakespeare and C.S Lewis among others. I also study English Literature and one of my favourite novels ever is The Great Gatsby.

I'm currently doing A-Levels in the UK, but outside of school, I'm an avid artist and have been drawing since I was in nappies. Another creative hobby of mine is music - I sing and play and I'm learning how to produce using software.

Music in general is a great part of my life and I listen to mainly Hip-Hop and R&B, both from today and from the 90s, though I like my House and Dancehall too. 

I grew up around MJ and his music and he fascinates and inspires me. My favourite allbum of his is Bad, as is the era, though I love him from 1958-2009. I combined two of the loves of my life and ended up writing a fanfiction story on this site. I take pride in my written work and doing anything creative is like a release for me. 

I'm still young and don't really know what I'll do in life XD but as for now, I know that I want to keep writing until the story is finished for you guys. 

Beta-reader: No
Gender: Female
Age: 18-21
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Layla Daniels abandoned by her strict family because of a mistake she made years ago, now with a ten year old son who she had to raise till now in the wary and bad parts of New York 

 Once she felt she'd saved up enough cash to leave New York behind them, they end up in Los Angeles, living in small motels till the money she had saved runs out leaving them on the streets

Till one unexpected encounter with pop star Michael Jackson changes their lives 

Will Layla allow Michael impact her and Miles lives for the better? 

Find out in:  No Regrets     

Categories: Dangerous: 1991-1993, 1993-1994, HIStory: 1995-1999, Adult, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69687 Read Count: 4654
[Report This] Published: Jun 30, 2017 Updated: Jan 25, 2018
Reviewer: darkmc912 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: Sep 20, 2017 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

OH CRAP. Maybe if Layla didn't get so smashed on her night out she'd realise there's a possibility she will be followed, idk, since um she's with JANET JACKSON? WOW. Won't be long til they figure out she's Mike's gf and that's gonna have an even bigger impact.

"Aw dad can we have a kitten or a puppy? " TJ asked 

"No" Tito answered  


Obviously Michael would get the kittens for Miles, OBVI. But why not dogs lol

Author's Response:

Yeah who knows? 

Yes when they find out she's Michaels girl its going to be worse way worse  


Lol TJ is me too and Tito my parents lol 




Lol kittens are cute too lol and easier to take care of since they don't need walking like dogs  


Reviewer: darkmc912 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 14, 2017 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

OMG I feel like it’s just getting sadder and sadder and worse for Layla on an emotional scale. Her body seems to be recovering but she’s still having a super hard time trying to like, I don’t even there really a way to fully overcome a miscarriage? Michael seems to think so and I know he mentioned a “new baby” which Layla clearly is not thinking about at ALL, but he’s just trying to keep optimistic and I can totally understand Layla’s lashing out at Michael for saying that. He’s just trying to help, honestly. But he can only do that if Layla wants to be helped. 

That speech she gave about herself was heart-wrenching she shouldn’t feel like that and I’m glad Michael is convincing her otherwise. Love how he’s thinking about the idea of marrying Layla and she seems kinda suspicious about it right now but come on who wouldn’t wanna marry him lmao XD NOT MEEE SEND HIM MY WAY BABY

I think Flora and Brownie are the only things in this chapter that made me smile. It’s so sad I really want things to turn around wherever possible. Great chapter dear xoxoxox

Author's Response:

Yes it's so sad, things will get better tho  


I don't think you'll ever forget it but learn to live with it eventually 


Yes he just wants to help her because he loves her so much and sees his future with her 



Lol Ikr? In A heartbeat we'd be like yes :)



Yes kittens are the cute factor here :)




Thank you dear xoxoxox

Reviewer: darkmc912 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Sep 18, 2017 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Yes Miles, like alcohol. *clears throat* you'll learn someday LOL. Michael is such a sweetheart so caring!! And Layla - DAMN girl PREACHHHH. I found it especially cute how she like knows the exact date of their first time they made love like that it soooo cute. Loved it!!

Author's Response:

Lol yes someday far from now lol. Yes she remembers because its special :)

 I'm glad you enjoyed it :) 

Reviewer: darkmc912 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 12, 2017 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Oh man. This whole thing was seriously really sad. Layla in a catatonic-like stage because of the sedatives was really upsetting. And then when they wore off she was totally like erratic and blaming herself and she shouldn’t have, fr. And then Michael blames himself too but he wasn’t even there when it happened and that’s out of his control! God it was legit nobody’s fault she lost the baby. I really hope they work from it but it’s good to see Layla and Michael taking care of one another while they are both grieving. Soooo sad man 

Hope the burial will help them try to like move on from it and stuff 

Author's Response:

Yes it's so sad this whole loss of the baby chapters. True is nobody's fault. Yes together they will overcome the loss eventually. Yes so sad. 


Yes let's hope so 

Reviewer: darkmc912 Signed
Date: Oct 10, 2017 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

MILES, TJ, SAM: stfu! Let them do their couple tings lmao they so childish 

you’re actually evil lmao you made her LOSE THE BABY WHAT WHY. This is when you know you have too much power as an author. Legit. I CAN RELATE THO I mean you know my upcoming plans for my storyπŸ˜‚ we tend to take total advantage of the fact that we can let any and everything happen - even terrible things that we wouldn’t want to happen to us IRL. But that’s the beauty of imagination and writing I suppose.

I wish Michael wasn’t stuck at work so he can be with his girl when she needs him the most. Four hours seems long lol. At least Janet is looking after her and I know Layla will get better with both Janet and Michael’s help. Hopefully they can try again soon...seems like Layla really wanted this baby. :( 

Lovely chapter dear xoxo

Author's Response:

Lol yes stupid interruption lol 


Yes us authors have the power to control our characters and the story. Yes ik your plans and I can't wait till it's posted lol Ikr? We don't want all those things to happen in Rl but it's FICTION so it's possible to let every thing happen we come up with 



Same I'm like go home be with Layla you know?  Four hours is so damn long  



Yes let's hope so, yes Layla really wanted this baby  




Thank you dear xoxo 

Reviewer: darkmc912 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Sep 11, 2017 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

This chapter was so warm and delightful what with the family dynamics and all. It was interesting to see the contrasts between both parties - the adults and then the kids. I thought that the heart-to-heart between Layla and Katherine was sweet, and then the boys - well I have no wordsπŸ˜‚. This was wonderful keep it up my lovely x


Author's Response:

Aww thank you sweetie 😘 

Reviewer: darkmc912 Signed
Date: Oct 08, 2017 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

OMG. SHE IS PREGNANT?! YAY!!!!? WTF?! YAY OMG CLEARLY this is all I care about in this chapter and I’m so HAPPY. can’t wait to see how the next 9 months go! 😭❀️ Yas 

Author's Response:

Yes she is :)

Reviewer: darkmc912 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Sep 09, 2017 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Lolll Michael is low-key jealous and just competitive which is really cute🌚It's so nice how he wants the bodyguards families to come too so it "feels normal" and LMAO Layla needs to chill about the money, does she know who her boyfriend is πŸ™„πŸ˜‚aw but she cares so much. Such a shame about the pregnancy :/ was hoping Layla would pop out another Miles in 9 months time haha

Author's Response:

Michaels adorable :) 


Layla knows who her boyfriend is she just don't want to take advantage of that  



Lol maybe it woulda been a mini Layla lol but we'll see if it's a girl or boy when or if she's pregnant :)

Reviewer: darkmc912 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Sep 06, 2017 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

It's wonderful to see how much Michael being around has really mellowed Miles. LMAO his reaction to what Michael and Layla were up toπŸ˜‚ah so innocent. Of course - cannot wait to find out whether she is pregnant or not grrrr why'd you end the chapter there!😭

Author's Response:

Yes hes clueless it's cute, thank goodness sam didn't tell him the truth lol 



You just have to wait and see if she's pregnant or not 

Reviewer: darkmc912 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Aug 22, 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

That ending was SO cute aw :') 

Author's Response:

Thank you :) 

Reviewer: darkmc912 Signed
Date: Oct 06, 2017 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

HAHAH awwww that beginning like I loved how Janet and Michael are so protective over Layla so sweeet. “fuck the fuck off!” HAHA. Obv Jermaine, aka the man with the hairline of the century, is gonna be a total HOE. LEGIT. I agree with Michael lmao. Really felt the love in this chapter what with Toy and Dave, but I’m basically Janet. πŸ˜‚single af 

this was great my DEAR. 

Author's Response:

LMAO hairline of the century LMAO I cant πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚



Yes they love is there with Toy and Dave ☺


Me too 



thank you sweetie 😘

Reviewer: darkmc912 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Sep 04, 2017 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

smhhh at that teacher hating on Layla. LMAO "whats a sugar mama" MILES IS SO CUTE FAM

Author's Response:

Yes those teachers smh. Yes Miles is cute but Sam is smh lol 

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 01, 2017 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

It'a soooooooo blatant that Michael misses Miles and Layla even more...I sense some regret on his end, regarding the way things turned out.

"When she realizes my point of view, I'd consider seeing hers" Michael answered 
"Both of you are so damn stubborn" Tina mentioned rolling her eyes  - I totally agree with my g Tina lmao, both are being extremely stubborn right now but I suppose they both got their reasons. 

MICHAEL USED TO KNOW HER? RAHHHHH HOW IS HE SHIT-STIRRING about a person that the media doesn't even know much about?! I am facepalming so bad at him right now legit, he's about to lose his wizard membership. There is noooo need for him to involve the media in any way whatsoever - nah fam he shouldn't have said a WORD to them fr. He's giving them more shit to base stories off of. 

I am getting the wrong vibes from Thalia. tbh cannot wait to see how Michael and Layla eventually sort this out and overcome's already been too long fam lmao. Good chapter pea <3

Author's Response:

Yes he misses them both 



Yes they both have their reasons 



Yeah smh at that but he said that probaby still in his emotions but still smh at him he should know better 



Yes Tina is right both are stubborn smh 




Yes they need to sort it out ASAP...yes way too long smh 



Thank you Onion πŸ’™



Serenity (se-re-ni-ty):

The quality or state of being calm, peaceful and untroubled.

Melodia and Michael feel like the most invincible couple in the world. But what happens when life starts getting in the way, threatening to break them appart?

Will they be to fight against adverisity? Or Will the pain be too much to bear? 

Find out in Serenity. 

Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Erotica, Mild Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2407 Read Count: 159
[Report This] Published: Sep 02, 2017 Updated: Sep 05, 2017
Reviewer: darkmc912 Signed
Date: Sep 09, 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh my...wasn't expecting that at all. I hope she gets better and I know Michael will support her no matter what. I like this - can't wait for the next one! 



To the world I'm the reason the Jackson Five is breaking apart. 
To the Jacksons I'm the reason Michael Jackson's career is ruined. 
To my family I'm the reason for my parent's broken heart. 

But to him I'm the love of his life. 

Pregnant with Michael Jackson’s baby at nineteen years-old, Renee finds her life turning upside down.

“None of this means anything if that means you’re going to leave.”
“Everyone is blaming me like I made this baby by myself when I didn’t!”


Categories: Jackson 5: 1965-1975, Off The Wall: 1975-1981, Thriller: 1982-1983
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45488 Read Count: 4438
[Report This] Published: Sep 16, 2017 Updated: Jul 31, 2018
Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 23, 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Broooooo that phone call hurt me more than it hurt Michael. Legit I can just picture him talking to Renee on the phone secretly. In a closet. Sounds like exactly the kind of thing teenage Michael would have done aw. I don't call him a bean for nothing LOL. Hahaa even I was like 'oh great Jermaine's going to give advice about women'. Lost af i agree lmao.

Knee-high tie-dyed socks OMG the 70s must have been lit XD. Love how you keep up with the context of the the time in whch the story's set. Ok I'm done being analytical lmao. Awwww so I really liked this chapter - I thought it was nice that Michael went to visit her at home and I get why he's lowkey beating himself up for not having the courage to tell her legit omg she's not going to cut you off fam, you're MJ. It's obvious she cares about him and shit like forced him to take some cake...jk, but if she gets annoyed that he calls her a friend then isn't that enough of a sign that she's after a different kind of label herself? 

I guess it's up to Renee to make the first move, then, bc it doesn't seem like Michael wlll. Good chapter! ....great now I want cake lol

Author's Response:

Michael was embarassed so the closet was the best choice, lmao! 

Girl, ikr? I tie-dye my own when I have time. Just buy some cheap long songs lol. I try my best. I wasn't born nowhere near the 70s. Shoot, I was two years shy of being born in the 2000's so I try to do enough research to keep up with the times, outfits, lingo, etc. It's hard though because sometimes the internet isn't specific enough and I have to go out on a limb and hope I don't muck it up. 

Michael is shy and modest and believes Renee doesn't reciprocate his feelings when clearly she does, but he can't see it. Hopefully he will see it soon and they can come to some sort of mutual standing. I'm weak! She like eat the cake Michael, eat the cake. 

Thanks for the support and I hope you got your cake.. maybe!