Penname: NeelzLovesMJ [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: Aug 14, 2016
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Hellooo people of mjfic.com!


I'm an author here and writing has been a passion of mine since a very early age. I love all things literary - whether it's reading or writing. I adore literature and am huge fan of John Steinbeck, F. Scott Fitzgerald, Shakespeare and C.S Lewis among others. I also study English Literature and one of my favourite novels ever is The Great Gatsby.


I'm currently doing A-Levels in the UK, but outside of school, I'm an avid artist and have been drawing since I was in nappies. Another creative hobby of mine is music - I sing and play and I'm learning how to produce using software.


Music in general is a great part of my life and I listen to mainly Hip-Hop and R&B, both from today and from the 90s, though I like my House and Dancehall too. 


I grew up around MJ and his music and he fascinates and inspires me. My favourite allbum of his is Bad, as is the era, though I love him from 1958-2009. I combined two of the loves of my life and ended up writing a fanfiction story on this site. I take pride in my written work and doing anything creative is like a release for me. 


I'm still young and don't really know what I'll do in life XD but as for now, I know that I want to keep writing until the story is finished for you guys. 


Age: 18-21
Gender: Female
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Summary:

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Layla Daniels abandoned by her strict family because of a mistake she made years ago, now with a ten year old son who she had to raise till now in the wary and bad parts of New York 


 Once she felt she'd saved up enough cash to leave New York behind them, they end up in Los Angeles, living in small motels till the money she had saved runs out leaving them on the streets


Till one unexpected encounter with pop star Michael Jackson changes their lives 


Will Layla allow Michael impact her and Miles lives for the better? 


Find out in:  No Regrets     


Categories: Dangerous: 1991-1993, 1993-1994, HIStory: 1995-1999, Adult, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69687 Read Count: 4971
[Report This] Published: Jun 30, 2017 Updated: Jan 25, 2018
Reviewer: darkmc912 Signed
Date: Sep 29, 2017 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

hahahaaaaa omg THOSE KITTENS. SO SPOILED and yep Michael defo lowkey regrets them bc Layla thinks they’re replacing her. AW. Nice to see Michael’d Dad-like authority stepping in from time to time like when he tells Miles not to stay up too late. And girl whyyyy did you leave the love scene out?!? 🙄but yeah glad to see the media are off Layla’s tail PHEW



Author's Response:

Yes lol but at the same time he loves those furballs lol. Yes he deffently is in dad mode sometimes, it's still new but he'll get used to it. 

 

For now, who knows when they're back? 

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 12, 2017 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Im glad Tina is going out her way so Michael and Layla can talk. Michael and I are about to have beef fr lmao how is he just...what about what Miles wants?! I get that he wants to take extra special care of Anna but he can’t totally leave Miles behind like that and forget about him. TBH I’m glad Layla like stepped in and said she’ll watch a movie with Miles and then she GLARED at him LOL, I can see drama brewing up. 👀 Yeah dinner 30ft up in the sky is really gonna fix things. Michael’s about to lose his wizard rights!!

ah. Tina and Sam are one step closer to admitting their feelings but they way they said it made it sound like they’re bascially friends with benefits😂. But OMG they agreed to go on an date so yeah they are gonna be in a relationship YAYYYY!!!!! ❤️



Author's Response:

Lmao 

 

 

Yes drama is on the horizon lol 

 

Lmao no it's not gonna fix things lol wizard rights lol 

 

 

Yes they basc are lol. Yes they finally go on a date lol 

 

💜

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 10, 2017 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Lmao Sam and I want the same birthday present. Love how they celebrated together! Michael and Anna wow they’ve gotten real close reallll fast. I can see miles and Anna sorta relating over the fact neither of them have their bio dad around but hey Michael’s there so NO PROB lol. 

why is Michael being so mean 

“I didn’t invent timezones”

“The period excuse” what are they. 10?

Tina and sam - admit it already would ya? Lmao 

hate when they fight tbh! It was stupid lmao they really used periods as a legit reason for being mad at each other ok LOL WOW. This is why I’m single. Loved it <3



Author's Response:

Lol ok I'll send Sam buying you a birthday cake for your birthday lol

 

Yes, but then again what's not to love about him? Yes that's Miles and Anna's bonding thing. Ikr? 

 

 

Well did he invent timezones?  No lol 

 

It' a stadard guy thing to smh 

 

 

 

Nope they're too stubborn lol 

 

 

 

Lol yeah oh well couples fight over stupid things sometimes lol. Don't give up your wizard is out there he's just perfecting his magic for you lol 

 

 

I'm glad you liked it  <3 

Reviewer: darkmc912 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 03, 2017 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Tina can sense Layla's apprehension with the whole Anna thing...so can I, tbh. I mean seriously though, Michael? You used the time you had with Layla to take care of paperwork? Come on dude. lol. I get he's excited about the whole adoption thing but i hope he doesnt lose sight of his priorities, and as much as I'd like him to take care of this young girl properly, I don't want him to end up neglecting Layla in the process.

BIH THIS ASSISTANT IS GONNA MAKE ME CATCH THESE HANDS LEGIT ITS A BEEFTING UM BYE WHO TF ARE YOU LOL

WOW Michael is sooooo popular, look at all these people whining and being impatient to see him XD yes mufffin. Legit love how they surprised him on his bday! I get he's tired and jetlagged and in th midst of this crazy tour and now he has Anna too, but, bro don't ilet Layla slip through your hands. 

WONDERFUL SWEETPEA <3

 



Author's Response:

Tina, u and I can lol 

 

Lol yes smh at him for using the time to do paperwork lol 

 

Rn he' only thinking about the adoption and the rest has a backseat, including Layla smh 

 

BIH THIS ASSISTANT IS GONNA MAKE ME CATCH THESE HANDS LEGIT ITS A BEEFTING UM BYE WHO TF ARE YOU LOL

 

^ 😂😂😂😂😂   but fr she was just doing her job lol 

 

 

Ikr? 

 

 

 

Thank you sweetie 💜

Reviewer: darkmc912 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 01, 2017 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Okkk sooooo we all know Michael lowkey visited hospitals and gave free tickets out and other shit like that (for the children) during his tours so it’s really really nice to read about the experience. THAT POOR CHILDDDD AW MAN WTF, I feel so so bad!!!! Her and Michael’s interactions were cute, sad, heart-warming too and omg I think Michael is already getting a little bit attached to Anna. 

Right so I took a minute to stop crying so I could laugh when Sam picked up the phone instead of Layla and he’s like “why are you still in my house”. L M A O. I have the same question it’s ok cinnamon roll. Well i was right about Michael being attached OMG he wants to adopt??!!! Layla could have sounded a BIT happier but Michael maybe should have talked it though with her first you know before bringing another human (just smaller in size) into their lives and relationships? I don’t think this will sit well with Layla.

we’ll have to wait and see! Wonderful pea <3



Author's Response:

Yes we all know that, I felt like including it since he' on yiur after all at the moment 

 

Yes you'r right he' already getting attached to Anna, his heart bleeds for her, can't  blame him tho 

 

 

 

Lol so have i lol, Sam ls too comfortable at cinnamons place lol 

 

Yes u were right. 

 

 

Yeah she could be happier and def yes to he should've discussed it instead of announcing it 

 

 

We shall see what Layla thinks  

 

 

 

Thank you Onion ❤

 

 

 

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 19, 2017 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Their whole argument was shocking af. Layla is overreacting fr...clearly she’s never heard of adapting. She doesn’t even try to work shit out and going back to Queens isn’t going to help just saying....I get she had a fit of rage and prob said some things she didn’t mean but rn she’s being selfish and doing what SHE wants bc SHE is pissed off with Michael. What about your son fam. He clearly doesn’t want to leave and he’s able to treat Anna like a sister! 

She needs to fix up asafp.

Loved the drama otherwise 😜



Author's Response:

They both need to communicate better smh and yes going to Queens isnt going to fix anything smh 

 

 

Yes Miles loves having a sister 

 

 

Yes Drama is needed sometimes 😘

Reviewer: darkmc912 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 29, 2017 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

God I hate to see Michael leave just as much as Layla. But it’s only two weeks “this time” mmhm. Two long weeks without cinnamon roll and no D. But love how Michael has arranged some kind of way for her to meet him in Germany  

”a depressed Layla” wow Sam sounds happy LOL

Lmao why does Tina care if Sam “cheats” when she acknowledged that they aren’t dating? Isn’t it kinda impossible for him to cheat lmao when they’re not officially together. IM INTO YOU YOU KNOW THAT RIGHT YES SAM WE HAVE KNOWN FOR A VERY LONG TIME NOW FAM. I’m just glad he finally admitted it lmao but all of Janet and Layla’s teasing prob doesn’t help  

Sounds like Michael’s got a busyyyyy day. Stupid time zones lol He has to make sure he calls at the right time but it’s not like Layla won’t wake up in the middle of the night if he calls. Great chapter sweettttpea 



Author's Response:

Lol I love this review 😂

 

 

Yes two weeks is long without cinnamon roll. No D😂😂😂 you killed me 

 

Yes he's that sweet to arrange that  

 

 

 

Lol Sam is Sam lol 

 

 

Lmao yes we know Sam lol 

 

 

Tina cares but she just don't wanna admit 

 

 

Yes it won't help lol 

 

 

 

Yes he got a busy day 

 

 

Ikr? I'd wake up too for his midnight calls 

 

 

 

Thank you sweetie Xx

 

Reviewer: darkmc912 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 22, 2017 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

"Not really i was just outside in the yard with the kittens and suddenly I felt so much pain a there was a lot of blood" - that souns traumatising as fffff :( what did he do to deserve that? Sounds honestly just horrible. 

"anyone would do that for their family, right?" He mentioned  

"So I officially have your blood now, like literally so uh you're sort of my dad now" Miles answered "you'd sort of would be anyways because you and mom are together anyways" he smiled  - I AM CRYINGGGG I HATE YOU OMG THIS IS SO EMOSH WTF!?!?

Glad that Miles is acknowledging that the shooting was not hs fault and some psycho is clearly out to get him, possibly Layla too! And lmao Sam and Tina are practically already a couple soooooo :3 I commend my baby muffin cinnamon roll smol bean fo getting some proper protection for his new family. Legit he's using who he is and his like status and his assets to help others which is refreshing because we all know he wasn't like evry single other celebrity and I feel like that shows in this story. 

Hopefully shit like will NEVER happen again!!! nice chapter my sweetpea. XD <33



Author's Response:

Agree sounds horrible  

 

Lol I love you too. Emotions are needed sometimes  

 

Yes Sam & Tina are aren't they? Lol 

 

 

Thank you I'm glad u think it's showing that's what I hoped for 

 

 

Let's hope so 

 

 

Thank you my dear onion Xx  <3 

Reviewer: darkmc912 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 20, 2017 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

OMG I cannotttt believe Michael offered his blood awwwww same with Tina. OGs both of them. He even went first awwwwww....! I could tell Michael felt really glad after saving Miles' life. And omg Miles!? WHO TF WOULD DO THAT TO A KID. We have to find out who did this! I hope he's gonna make a speedy recovery. But we gotta know.

It's like that Biggie song - 'Who Shot Ya?'

OK LMAO that was inappropriate. Poor Miles. Great chapter peaaaaaaa. <3



Author's Response:

Yes Michael is kind like that, tbh who wouldn't feel great knowing you saved someone's life with donating blood

 

Yes poor Miles, the shooter is crazy for shooting a kid like that  

 

 

Don't be innapropriate lil one lol 

 

 

Thank you Onion <3

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 24, 2017 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Bro I cannot believe that Layla SLAPPED MY PRECIOUS LIL BEAN😭😭I am about to seriously defriend Layla. She’s gotta realise sooner or later that actually, she won’t be as capable without Michael since umm idk HES HE ONE WHO HELPED U OUT IN THE START. So. I don’t like that they aren’t a happy couple at the moment and then Miles is just in the middle fam like it’s really messy lol

i can’t believe that she actually let him. Really man I can’t even. I am sobbing inside. 😭💔 Michael better fly to where she’s at or something....



Author's Response:

Lmao defriend Layla 

 

Ikr? She needs him more than she thinks 

 

Yes Miles and Anna are in the middle of it smh 

 

 

 

Reviewer: darkmc912 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 25, 2017 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Of course the media are gonna like stick their noses into Michael’s business but he handled it simply and well. Well tbh they’re right to assume he has a secret girlfriend (HER NAME IS LAYLA PEOPLE!) but come on Mike it’s kinda obvious.

legit omg crying at how everyone is like so concerned with Miles and supporting him, especially Michael! AW WHEN LAYLA SAID “you don’t have to put your career on hold” like he’s so serious about them and tbh I’m thinking ‘just shut up Layla! Let your man baby muffin sexy cinnamon roll smol bean do this thang!’ As for the tour we’ll im sure Michael will not let Layla down. He seems so adamant he really really cares...still, a part of ME doesn’t want his career to get left behind in between either so it’s almost like he has to choose what he’s going to prioritise - his family....or his career?

Ofc Tina and Sam are kinda establishing a love/hate relationship between themselves lmao, sexual tension is building too I see. Tina should try to soften up with Sam tho and give him a chance maybe? He clearly likes her. It’s also good to see them take action what with the karate to prevent any more children being shot. Lol  

Michael is doing it...for the children. 

Wonderful chapter sweet-pea XD ❤️



Author's Response:

Yea smh at the media 

 

Lol sshhh they might hear you if you scream even louder 😂😂😂

 

Yes they all love Miles 

 

Yeah he would give up everything for her but he can't  

 

 

We shall see if Tina softens off for Sam 

 

 

Yes he does everything for the children, someome had to it right? 

 

 

 

Thank you dear Onion Xx💜

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 09, 2017 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Glad the media is losing interest! But a month that's so long to be away from each other :(. They can keep acting like they don't need each-other but sooner or later, they're going to realise that they most def DO. I wonder how Layla is coping without her wizard.

YES LA-TOYA keep speaking truth XD "Ever heard of makeup sex?" Ok but it's the wrong time for jokes, Layla is clearly quite not in the mood so. I'm glad she talked some sense into Layla with valid af points like Mike loved you no matter what bruh. He has every right to be in touch with Miles and I see he's looking after Anna, but I agree with his sisters rn - they'll get back together ;) Great chapter pea



Author's Response:

Ikr? They need each other

 

Well Toya means facts, she's serious about that lol 

 

 

Same here the sisters are right here rn 

 

 

Thank you Onion 

Reviewer: darkmc912 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Aug 29, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This whole chapter had me rolling😂. Mike is such a savage especially when he's like "you're not on the menu so I'll have enchiladas" and it's very comic, the way Michael is low-key roasting Sam to the waitress and Sam has no idea what they're saying😂. Poor Miles - tough as he is, he seems like a good kid who is very protective of his mother :')



Author's Response:

Yes Michaels savage when he wants to lol 

Sam probably deserved it lol 

 

Yes poor Miles, he only has his mother so yes hes protective over her 

Summary:

 

Serenity (se-re-ni-ty):

The quality or state of being calm, peaceful and untroubled.


Melodia and Michael feel like the most invincible couple in the world. But what happens when life starts getting in the way, threatening to break them appart?

Will they be to fight against adverisity? Or Will the pain be too much to bear? 


Find out in Serenity. 


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Erotica, Mild Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2407 Read Count: 159
[Report This] Published: Sep 02, 2017 Updated: Sep 05, 2017
Reviewer: darkmc912 Signed
Date: Sep 09, 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh my...wasn't expecting that at all. I hope she gets better and I know Michael will support her no matter what. I like this - can't wait for the next one! 

Summary:

 

To the world I'm the reason the Jackson Five is breaking apart. 
To the Jacksons I'm the reason Michael Jackson's career is ruined. 
To my family I'm the reason for my parent's broken heart. 

But to him I'm the love of his life. 

Pregnant with Michael Jackson’s baby at nineteen years-old, Renee finds her life turning upside down.

“None of this means anything if that means you’re going to leave.”
···
“Everyone is blaming me like I made this baby by myself when I didn’t!”

 


Categories: Jackson 5: 1965-1975, Off The Wall: 1975-1981, Thriller: 1982-1983
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45488 Read Count: 4800
[Report This] Published: Sep 16, 2017 Updated: Jul 31, 2018
Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Apr 23, 2018 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

"I read that if a woman eats a lot of spicy food then the baby will come out bald." 

I rarely actually laugh aloud and lose my shit when I'm reading stories, but THIS CRACKED ME TF UP LMFAO, where did Michael read this?! Omg he'd be the best, yet most clueless father ever. All jokes aside, it's assuring to see these two educate themselves, especially since they're going to be young parents. It shows they're really going to take care of lil lime and they recognise that a baby is a huge responsbility.

Okay...first, I am not saying that teen pregnancy has got to be in any way easy - it was unexpected for Renee, and I know just like most young girls do, she pictured having her first child when she's older, perhaps a little more mature and preferably settled down. But when she complained about how she's "so damn fertile", it kinda sounded low-key...unappreciative? And like regret? Idk if she was joking orrr it could just be her hormones and everything she's currently dealing with, but what she said stood out to me particularly because I now know how lucky a woman has gotta be if she's perfectly fertile...I mean - I have PCOS bro! I'd rather be OVERLY-FERTILE than INfertile. She needs to be aware that there are lots of girls who, by nature, won't be able to concieve/have children as easily as she has; she shouldn't really complain about it. Fair enough she's 19 but come on fam...don't overlook the importance of what you got. (Plus I know she's not on some Kylie Jenner shit and she'll be a good mum XD). 

Totally agree with Renee and wanting to stay out of the media's eyes. I seriously love how comfortable these two are with each-other. Somebody get them their own house, and two wedding rings. And then they can raise this baby the right way. BUT they should only marry if they want to make that committment, as if a baby isn't enough committment, they shouldn't just tie the knot because Renee's pregnant and it will validate everything or whatever. It would probably offer a better environment to raise their child in though...so yeah, they should do it! HELL YEAH.