Penname: NeelzLovesMJ [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: Aug 14, 2016
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Hellooo people of mjfic.com!


I'm an author here and writing has been a passion of mine since a very early age. I love all things literary - whether it's reading or writing. I adore literature and am huge fan of John Steinbeck, F. Scott Fitzgerald, Shakespeare and C.S Lewis among others. I also study English Literature and one of my favourite novels ever is The Great Gatsby.


I'm currently doing A-Levels in the UK, but outside of school, I'm an avid artist and have been drawing since I was in nappies. Another creative hobby of mine is music - I sing and play and I'm learning how to produce using software.


Music in general is a great part of my life and I listen to mainly Hip-Hop and R&B, both from today and from the 90s, though I like my House and Dancehall too. 


I grew up around MJ and his music and he fascinates and inspires me. My favourite allbum of his is Bad, as is the era, though I love him from 1958-2009. I combined two of the loves of my life and ended up writing a fanfiction story on this site. I take pride in my written work and doing anything creative is like a release for me. 


I'm still young and don't really know what I'll do in life XD but as for now, I know that I want to keep writing until the story is finished for you guys. 


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Gender: Female
Age: 18-21
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Summary:

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Layla Daniels abandoned by her strict family because of a mistake she made years ago, now with a ten year old son who she had to raise till now in the wary and bad parts of New York 


 Once she felt she'd saved up enough cash to leave New York behind them, they end up in Los Angeles, living in small motels till the money she had saved runs out leaving them on the streets


Till one unexpected encounter with pop star Michael Jackson changes their lives 


Will Layla allow Michael impact her and Miles lives for the better? 


Find out in:  No Regrets     


Categories: Dangerous: 1991-1993, 1993-1994, HIStory: 1995-1999, Adult, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69687 Read Count: 4654
[Report This] Published: Jun 30, 2017 Updated: Jan 25, 2018
Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 24, 2017 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Bro I cannot believe that Layla SLAPPED MY PRECIOUS LIL BEAN😭😭I am about to seriously defriend Layla. She’s gotta realise sooner or later that actually, she won’t be as capable without Michael since umm idk HES HE ONE WHO HELPED U OUT IN THE START. So. I don’t like that they aren’t a happy couple at the moment and then Miles is just in the middle fam like it’s really messy lol

i can’t believe that she actually let him. Really man I can’t even. I am sobbing inside. 😭💔 Michael better fly to where she’s at or something....



Author's Response:

Lmao defriend Layla 

 

Ikr? She needs him more than she thinks 

 

Yes Miles and Anna are in the middle of it smh 

 

 

 

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 12, 2017 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Im glad Tina is going out her way so Michael and Layla can talk. Michael and I are about to have beef fr lmao how is he just...what about what Miles wants?! I get that he wants to take extra special care of Anna but he can’t totally leave Miles behind like that and forget about him. TBH I’m glad Layla like stepped in and said she’ll watch a movie with Miles and then she GLARED at him LOL, I can see drama brewing up. πŸ‘€ Yeah dinner 30ft up in the sky is really gonna fix things. Michael’s about to lose his wizard rights!!

ah. Tina and Sam are one step closer to admitting their feelings but they way they said it made it sound like they’re bascially friends with benefitsπŸ˜‚. But OMG they agreed to go on an date so yeah they are gonna be in a relationship YAYYYY!!!!! ❀️



Author's Response:

Lmao 

 

 

Yes drama is on the horizon lol 

 

Lmao no it's not gonna fix things lol wizard rights lol 

 

 

Yes they basc are lol. Yes they finally go on a date lol 

 

πŸ’œ

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 10, 2017 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Lmao Sam and I want the same birthday present. Love how they celebrated together! Michael and Anna wow they’ve gotten real close reallll fast. I can see miles and Anna sorta relating over the fact neither of them have their bio dad around but hey Michael’s there so NO PROB lol. 

why is Michael being so mean 

“I didn’t invent timezones”

“The period excuse” what are they. 10?

Tina and sam - admit it already would ya? Lmao 

hate when they fight tbh! It was stupid lmao they really used periods as a legit reason for being mad at each other ok LOL WOW. This is why I’m single. Loved it <3



Author's Response:

Lol ok I'll send Sam buying you a birthday cake for your birthday lol

 

Yes, but then again what's not to love about him? Yes that's Miles and Anna's bonding thing. Ikr? 

 

 

Well did he invent timezones?  No lol 

 

It' a stadard guy thing to smh 

 

 

 

Nope they're too stubborn lol 

 

 

 

Lol yeah oh well couples fight over stupid things sometimes lol. Don't give up your wizard is out there he's just perfecting his magic for you lol 

 

 

I'm glad you liked it  <3 

Reviewer: darkmc912 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 03, 2017 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Tina can sense Layla's apprehension with the whole Anna thing...so can I, tbh. I mean seriously though, Michael? You used the time you had with Layla to take care of paperwork? Come on dude. lol. I get he's excited about the whole adoption thing but i hope he doesnt lose sight of his priorities, and as much as I'd like him to take care of this young girl properly, I don't want him to end up neglecting Layla in the process.

BIH THIS ASSISTANT IS GONNA MAKE ME CATCH THESE HANDS LEGIT ITS A BEEFTING UM BYE WHO TF ARE YOU LOL

WOW Michael is sooooo popular, look at all these people whining and being impatient to see him XD yes mufffin. Legit love how they surprised him on his bday! I get he's tired and jetlagged and in th midst of this crazy tour and now he has Anna too, but, bro don't ilet Layla slip through your hands. 

WONDERFUL SWEETPEA <3

 



Author's Response:

Tina, u and I can lol 

 

Lol yes smh at him for using the time to do paperwork lol 

 

Rn he' only thinking about the adoption and the rest has a backseat, including Layla smh 

 

BIH THIS ASSISTANT IS GONNA MAKE ME CATCH THESE HANDS LEGIT ITS A BEEFTING UM BYE WHO TF ARE YOU LOL

 

^ πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚   but fr she was just doing her job lol 

 

 

Ikr? 

 

 

 

Thank you sweetie πŸ’œ

Reviewer: darkmc912 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 01, 2017 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Okkk sooooo we all know Michael lowkey visited hospitals and gave free tickets out and other shit like that (for the children) during his tours so it’s really really nice to read about the experience. THAT POOR CHILDDDD AW MAN WTF, I feel so so bad!!!! Her and Michael’s interactions were cute, sad, heart-warming too and omg I think Michael is already getting a little bit attached to Anna. 

Right so I took a minute to stop crying so I could laugh when Sam picked up the phone instead of Layla and he’s like “why are you still in my house”. L M A O. I have the same question it’s ok cinnamon roll. Well i was right about Michael being attached OMG he wants to adopt??!!! Layla could have sounded a BIT happier but Michael maybe should have talked it though with her first you know before bringing another human (just smaller in size) into their lives and relationships? I don’t think this will sit well with Layla.

we’ll have to wait and see! Wonderful pea <3



Author's Response:

Yes we all know that, I felt like including it since he' on yiur after all at the moment 

 

Yes you'r right he' already getting attached to Anna, his heart bleeds for her, can't  blame him tho 

 

 

 

Lol so have i lol, Sam ls too comfortable at cinnamons place lol 

 

Yes u were right. 

 

 

Yeah she could be happier and def yes to he should've discussed it instead of announcing it 

 

 

We shall see what Layla thinks  

 

 

 

Thank you Onion ❀

 

 

 

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 19, 2017 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Their whole argument was shocking af. Layla is overreacting fr...clearly she’s never heard of adapting. She doesn’t even try to work shit out and going back to Queens isn’t going to help just saying....I get she had a fit of rage and prob said some things she didn’t mean but rn she’s being selfish and doing what SHE wants bc SHE is pissed off with Michael. What about your son fam. He clearly doesn’t want to leave and he’s able to treat Anna like a sister! 

She needs to fix up asafp.

Loved the drama otherwise 😜



Author's Response:

They both need to communicate better smh and yes going to Queens isnt going to fix anything smh 

 

 

Yes Miles loves having a sister 

 

 

Yes Drama is needed sometimes 😘

Reviewer: darkmc912 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 29, 2017 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

God I hate to see Michael leave just as much as Layla. But it’s only two weeks “this time” mmhm. Two long weeks without cinnamon roll and no D. But love how Michael has arranged some kind of way for her to meet him in Germany  

”a depressed Layla” wow Sam sounds happy LOL

Lmao why does Tina care if Sam “cheats” when she acknowledged that they aren’t dating? Isn’t it kinda impossible for him to cheat lmao when they’re not officially together. IM INTO YOU YOU KNOW THAT RIGHT YES SAM WE HAVE KNOWN FOR A VERY LONG TIME NOW FAM. I’m just glad he finally admitted it lmao but all of Janet and Layla’s teasing prob doesn’t help  

Sounds like Michael’s got a busyyyyy day. Stupid time zones lol He has to make sure he calls at the right time but it’s not like Layla won’t wake up in the middle of the night if he calls. Great chapter sweettttpea 



Author's Response:

Lol I love this review πŸ˜‚

 

 

Yes two weeks is long without cinnamon roll. No DπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ you killed me 

 

Yes he's that sweet to arrange that  

 

 

 

Lol Sam is Sam lol 

 

 

Lmao yes we know Sam lol 

 

 

Tina cares but she just don't wanna admit 

 

 

Yes it won't help lol 

 

 

 

Yes he got a busy day 

 

 

Ikr? I'd wake up too for his midnight calls 

 

 

 

Thank you sweetie Xx

 

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 09, 2017 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Glad the media is losing interest! But a month that's so long to be away from each other :(. They can keep acting like they don't need each-other but sooner or later, they're going to realise that they most def DO. I wonder how Layla is coping without her wizard.

YES LA-TOYA keep speaking truth XD "Ever heard of makeup sex?" Ok but it's the wrong time for jokes, Layla is clearly quite not in the mood so. I'm glad she talked some sense into Layla with valid af points like Mike loved you no matter what bruh. He has every right to be in touch with Miles and I see he's looking after Anna, but I agree with his sisters rn - they'll get back together ;) Great chapter pea



Author's Response:

Ikr? They need each other

 

Well Toya means facts, she's serious about that lol 

 

 

Same here the sisters are right here rn 

 

 

Thank you Onion 

Reviewer: darkmc912 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 22, 2017 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

"Not really i was just outside in the yard with the kittens and suddenly I felt so much pain a there was a lot of blood" - that souns traumatising as fffff :( what did he do to deserve that? Sounds honestly just horrible. 

"anyone would do that for their family, right?" He mentioned  

"So I officially have your blood now, like literally so uh you're sort of my dad now" Miles answered "you'd sort of would be anyways because you and mom are together anyways" he smiled  - I AM CRYINGGGG I HATE YOU OMG THIS IS SO EMOSH WTF!?!?

Glad that Miles is acknowledging that the shooting was not hs fault and some psycho is clearly out to get him, possibly Layla too! And lmao Sam and Tina are practically already a couple soooooo :3 I commend my baby muffin cinnamon roll smol bean fo getting some proper protection for his new family. Legit he's using who he is and his like status and his assets to help others which is refreshing because we all know he wasn't like evry single other celebrity and I feel like that shows in this story. 

Hopefully shit like will NEVER happen again!!! nice chapter my sweetpea. XD <33



Author's Response:

Agree sounds horrible  

 

Lol I love you too. Emotions are needed sometimes  

 

Yes Sam & Tina are aren't they? Lol 

 

 

Thank you I'm glad u think it's showing that's what I hoped for 

 

 

Let's hope so 

 

 

Thank you my dear onion Xx  <3 

Reviewer: darkmc912 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 25, 2017 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Of course the media are gonna like stick their noses into Michael’s business but he handled it simply and well. Well tbh they’re right to assume he has a secret girlfriend (HER NAME IS LAYLA PEOPLE!) but come on Mike it’s kinda obvious.

legit omg crying at how everyone is like so concerned with Miles and supporting him, especially Michael! AW WHEN LAYLA SAID “you don’t have to put your career on hold” like he’s so serious about them and tbh I’m thinking ‘just shut up Layla! Let your man baby muffin sexy cinnamon roll smol bean do this thang!’ As for the tour we’ll im sure Michael will not let Layla down. He seems so adamant he really really cares...still, a part of ME doesn’t want his career to get left behind in between either so it’s almost like he has to choose what he’s going to prioritise - his family....or his career?

Ofc Tina and Sam are kinda establishing a love/hate relationship between themselves lmao, sexual tension is building too I see. Tina should try to soften up with Sam tho and give him a chance maybe? He clearly likes her. It’s also good to see them take action what with the karate to prevent any more children being shot. Lol  

Michael is doing it...for the children. 

Wonderful chapter sweet-pea XD ❀️



Author's Response:

Yea smh at the media 

 

Lol sshhh they might hear you if you scream even louder πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

 

Yes they all love Miles 

 

Yeah he would give up everything for her but he can't  

 

 

We shall see if Tina softens off for Sam 

 

 

Yes he does everything for the children, someome had to it right? 

 

 

 

Thank you dear Onion XxπŸ’œ

Reviewer: darkmc912 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Aug 29, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This whole chapter had me rollingπŸ˜‚. Mike is such a savage especially when he's like "you're not on the menu so I'll have enchiladas" and it's very comic, the way Michael is low-key roasting Sam to the waitress and Sam has no idea what they're sayingπŸ˜‚. Poor Miles - tough as he is, he seems like a good kid who is very protective of his mother :')



Author's Response:

Yes Michaels savage when he wants to lol 

Sam probably deserved it lol 

 

Yes poor Miles, he only has his mother so yes hes protective over her 

Reviewer: darkmc912 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 20, 2017 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

OMG I cannotttt believe Michael offered his blood awwwww same with Tina. OGs both of them. He even went first awwwwww....! I could tell Michael felt really glad after saving Miles' life. And omg Miles!? WHO TF WOULD DO THAT TO A KID. We have to find out who did this! I hope he's gonna make a speedy recovery. But we gotta know.

It's like that Biggie song - 'Who Shot Ya?'

OK LMAO that was inappropriate. Poor Miles. Great chapter peaaaaaaa. <3



Author's Response:

Yes Michael is kind like that, tbh who wouldn't feel great knowing you saved someone's life with donating blood

 

Yes poor Miles, the shooter is crazy for shooting a kid like that  

 

 

Don't be innapropriate lil one lol 

 

 

Thank you Onion <3

Reviewer: darkmc912 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 18, 2017 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Tina is SUCH A BAD BITCH. LOVE HER ALREADY OMG “what are you a comedian?” 

“You deserved it” πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

Lmao I loved their banter back there it was superb. How did they not clock that it’s a girl? (Other than Michael noticing the boobs tut we see you mikeπŸ™„). I mean the pink flames on her bike could have been a big-enough giveaway but glad she eventually apologised for being kinda mean to my little baby muffin. 

Yeaaaah I pretty much already see where this is heading with them two - Sam and Tina, both hot af, feisty characters - they’re gonna end up together I can feeeel it. Love how Sam wanted to make sure Tina gave him the right number lmao.

Great chapter my dear little pea x 



Author's Response:

Lol I'm glad you love her πŸ˜†

 

Yes we saw that Michael πŸ‘€πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‰

 

Yes but you never know these days with the pink lol 

 

Yes she apologized to baby muffin 

 

Yeah they're both hot heads, we shall see lol 

 

Yes lol he don't trust her to give the right number lol 

 

 

Thank you my dear little onion πŸ˜‰ Xx

 

 

Reviewer: darkmc912 Signed
Date: Sep 29, 2017 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

hahahaaaaa omg THOSE KITTENS. SO SPOILED and yep Michael defo lowkey regrets them bc Layla thinks they’re replacing her. AW. Nice to see Michael’d Dad-like authority stepping in from time to time like when he tells Miles not to stay up too late. And girl whyyyy did you leave the love scene out?!? πŸ™„but yeah glad to see the media are off Layla’s tail PHEW



Author's Response:

Yes lol but at the same time he loves those furballs lol. Yes he deffently is in dad mode sometimes, it's still new but he'll get used to it. 

 

For now, who knows when they're back? 

Reviewer: darkmc912 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Sep 25, 2017 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

AW MILES is soooo in love with those kittens! Glad to see they aren’t freaking out too much about the fact that everyone seen Layla but it was nice to see Michael bring her back up when she brought herself down like that. and wtf WHO IS THIS HENRY DUDE? He better not fuck shit up. 

lmao LOVED IT X



Author's Response:

Yes the kittens are too cute :) 

 

Yes that's Michael for you :)

 

 

Henry is Layla's estranged dad 

 

 

 

Glad you loved it 😘