Penname: NeelzLovesMJ [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: Aug 14, 2016
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Hellooo people of mjfic.com!


I'm an author here and writing has been a passion of mine since a very early age. I love all things literary - whether it's reading or writing. I adore literature and am huge fan of John Steinbeck, F. Scott Fitzgerald, Shakespeare and C.S Lewis among others. I also study English Literature and one of my favourite novels ever is The Great Gatsby.


I'm currently doing A-Levels in the UK, but outside of school, I'm an avid artist and have been drawing since I was in nappies. Another creative hobby of mine is music - I sing and play and I'm learning how to produce using software.


Music in general is a great part of my life and I listen to mainly Hip-Hop and R&B, both from today and from the 90s, though I like my House and Dancehall too. 


I grew up around MJ and his music and he fascinates and inspires me. My favourite allbum of his is Bad, as is the era, though I love him from 1958-2009. I combined two of the loves of my life and ended up writing a fanfiction story on this site. I take pride in my written work and doing anything creative is like a release for me. 


I'm still young and don't really know what I'll do in life XD but as for now, I know that I want to keep writing until the story is finished for you guys. 


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Gender: Female
Age: 18-21
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Summary:

Nikita, according to the media a gold-digger for marrying the old billionaire Mr Andrew Martinez who mysteriously died soon after their tenth wedding anniversary, the cause of death cardiac arrest  but the media's idea is Nikita gold-digger Martinez murdered her husband for his money


Heartbroken and grieving over the loss of her beloved husband Nikita decides to donate some money to various charities and at one of the charity events she meets non other than the king of pop himself


Will he listen to her or is he like the rest of the world disgusted by her?  


Find out in:  Love Conquers All

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Please review if you are reading


Categories: HIStory: 1995-1999, Adult, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Death
Series: None
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93935 Read Count: 6649
[Report This] Published: Oct 31, 2017 Updated: Nov 30, 2018
Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 18, 2018 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

WHAT UP FAM. I is here to finish this story off!!!

OKAY super exciting the birth!! OMG she said “just take it out” I am dead. 💀 

Ive been waiting a long time for this moment and I’m glad to be continuing reading the story from this point onwards. It was a little frightening when the docs said she wasn’t fully dilated and stuff but in the end I’m really relieved that the baby was born just fine. Phew! You did it fam YAS. Miguel Javier sounds fucking sexy. It’s like the Spanish version of Michael Jackson! Hopefully Nikita teaches him Spanish as well as English. I’m so happy!!!! 



Author's Response:

Hope ya like the whole thing :) 

 

Can you blame her? Lol 

 

Well with Michael being his father he has no choice than to be the Spanish version lol 

 

 

I'm sure she will :) 

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Date: Dec 03, 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Michael explained leaving out the part it felt beyond good to have her sleep on his chest like that  - HOTTT. he should’ve told her he enjoyed it lmao! I can hardly blame Nikita for acting out towards her maids man...gah damn. Loved that little bonding moment they had over dealing with the media. These two really need each other they understand each other, which must be new for both of them. Ofc Michael didn’t take advantage aw. 

WHERE IS NIKITA GOING THO? out of town = where plz? Don’t leave me waiting too long pea! 



Author's Response:

No he didn't tell her, too soon lol 

 

Ikr? Stupid maids smh 

 

Yes they're adorable, arent they? Yes they are perfect for each other

 

You know him, he's not like that 

 

 

 

Next chapter you'll know where out of town is 

 

 

I won't keep you waiting too long onion, don't worry 

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Date: Dec 18, 2018 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Some of Carmen’s questions were RIDICULOUS. Talmbout abortion man shut yo bitchass up! That being said I salute Nikita for her answers she handled the whole thing really well. I wonder what else Carmen had planned to ask Michael and Nikita but whatever they were, I’m sure they were as bad as Oprah asking Michael if he’s a virgin on LIVE TV, and therefore I’m glad she didn’t get to ask them what she really wanted. Side note I’m positive that Miguel is one beautiful baby boy. Half black and half Latino? Gotta be cute as hell. 



Author's Response:

Carmen is the Spanish version 0f Oprah with her questions smh 

 

Yes half black half Latino aka eye candy 

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Date: Jun 29, 2018 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Hm I suspected it wasn’t food poisoning either. LOL when the receptionist thought Michael was press that was funny, but what he did was lowkey shady. He should trust Nikita and ask her instead of sneaking around behind her back and trying to access her confidential medical info, which staff can’t disclose. Yeah she lied after too but Michael should’ve understood that she’s not ready to talk about it yet. He should start singing Song Groove to her lmao. Not surprised she’s preggers but already damnnnn. It’s lit 



Author's Response:

Yeah it was kinda obvious it wasn't food poisoning I agree lol. 

 

 

Yea can't blame her for that tho he kinda was playing press low-key, Yes shady like a tabloid 

 

 

 

Yes he should've listened to Nikita first and yeah she shouldn't have lied either but she's just not ready to talk yet 

 

 

 

Lol omg yes I should've included that lol 

 

 

 

Neither am I (Oh wait I'm the author lol) 

 

 

We shall see how it goes further now 

 

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Date: Feb 12, 2018 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Hey! Since I got a week off from school now I thought I’d do some catching up. I know I am wayyyy behind but anyway - I love that they spent New Years together, just the two of them. Would’ve been the perfect time for Michael to spend it with his family and Nikita maybe? It’s so obvious that Nikita is noticing things about Michael like how sweet of a muffincake he is and his eyes and Michael flirted back and she just kinda dodged it :/ that made me feel kinda bad for him when she basc threw him back into the friendzone like real deep😂 hopefully Nikita will open her eyes fully soon and see what’s right in front of her. 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you have some time to catch up a lil :) 

 

Yes he's flirting but she is not receiving it smh lol 

 

 

 

She will see it one day :) 

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Date: May 25, 2018 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Dammit Sophia why she c-block. 😂

anyway seems like this chapter focuses quite a bit on Sophia. I don’t think a young, wild, carefree girl like her is ready for marriage yet; personally I don’t even think it’s her thing but if she’s not ready it’s not her fault. Oh jeez Michael owes Nikita a new cake! LOL let’s not get too carried away now! Nikita should totally cook a candlelit dinner for them both I think that would be so sweet and a well-needed little romantic cute date - just an idea! Also if Michael wants to be extra (as always, e.g. rhinestone socks) and rent out the whole spa, he should! It will be a nice change from being indoors at home all day. Can’t wait to see what they decide and how it turns out!  



Author's Response:

That's just Sophia beaihg Sophia lol 

 

We shall see what she decides 

 

 

 

I can see her so that :) 

 

 

 

Yeah he could do that but then again Nikita doesn't want to be treated like that 

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Date: Jul 13, 2018 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Aw Michael making Nikki’s breakfast. #keeper. 

Lmao yes this mature and serious and informed side of Sophia is definitely one we haven’t seen before and I would love so see more of this side! Haha “Sophia can be exhausting” but being pregnant isn’t 😂. Spain sounds soooo exciting. Lowkey wish it was just Michael as Nikita going but I don’t mind Luca and Xander; I know that they will make the trip 10x funnier lol, but I can’t wait for them to get to Spain! They should have some fun, like Sophia said, the middle part is the best part and after the baby is born they won’t have any leisure time or time alone for themselves. This holiday sounds great! 



Author's Response:

Ikr? Lol 

 

Ikr? Sophia is growing up lol 

 

Lol it's probably a combination of Sophia and pregnancy lol 

 

 

Lol we shall see who goes and who doesn't go lol 

 

 

 

Yes Sophia's right 

 

 

 

Ikr? 

 

 

 

Let's hope it will be great too 

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Date: Apr 14, 2018 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Lmao, the crew member is so shocked that Michael Jackson, best dancer in the world, can fill in for the replacement. I’m glad the show could be saved. I thought Bill Bray was head of security haha, anyway I loved to hear that Michael is in love with Nikita and he’s giving her (more) time to reciprocate those feelings, which are serious. At least he can open up to Janet even if she’s not totally certain about Nikita herself. She’s there for her brother either way. Lol so true about Michael and travelling...he’s said he’s never ever gotten used to it or the fans’ screaming and stuff...we all know how much he loves to tour lol



Author's Response:

Ikr? Lol 

 

In my story his name is James lol 

 

 

Yes he's very serious about his feelings for Nikita 

 

 

Yes Janet is always there to lisen to him 

 

 

 

Can you blame him? Screaming your ears off while youre trying to talk I'd be so annoyed till the point i'd be like "omg shut up im trying to give a speech geez" but not Michael he was too nice for that 

 

 

 

Lol yes we know lol 

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Date: Jun 22, 2018 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

The alarm clock died really Michael lol

Nice that Nikita got to meet the Jackson klan; it's a huge step for their relationship. Joseph and Nikita are both savages in this chapter lmao. Mike's brothers were mostly pleasant, which is good (except Jermaine, he can go try write another diss track) and I think they really like her :) Good that they got her back already. Wish Janet could've been in this chapter too

 



Author's Response:

Well he coudnt tell her what he was actually doing lol 

 

 

Yes it is a big step, he's no match for her Spanish temperament lol 

 

 

Lol I don't think he'll try that again

 

Yes the fam likes her (maybe expect two ppl) 

 

 

 

So do i but she's still on tour atm till she's back we won't see much of her sadly 

 

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Date: Feb 12, 2018 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Aw I love seeing Nikita the philanthropist. It’s good that she’s using her own skills and abilities in cooking to help those in need. Yeah she’s clearly a gold digger and a murderer who poisoned her husband. 🙄stupid public. They never hear about this type of stuff same with Michael - he did a lot more charity behind closed doors than anyone knows and secretly gave free concert tickets to the disadvantaged. It’s a shame. 

LMAO MICHAEL’S DISGUISE CRYINGGG. At least he wasn’t wearing the Zorro one! Wow Elizabeth taylor’s guest appearance surprised me. That’s interesting! Nikita continues to friendzone Michael. Ha. “Pathetically small table” LOL is that all she remembers from the first time she and Michael met?!😂 

I low-key wish Liz took the role of Cupid or became a matchmaker or some shit and like hooked these two the fuckkk up. Come on! SHE HAD HER CHANCE. She totally should’ve set her single friend up with the gorgeous and talented amazing af cook activist Nikita or at least encourage them to take the next step. Legit. I get that Liz doesn’t know Nikita’s personal past and everything she SHES been through but maybe she could’ve secretly given Michael some advice on the side - like give him that little boost to enable him to be more upfront about his feelings for Nikita. He’s given her space already! 😂 now he just needs to claim it. Good chapter pea!



Author's Response:

Yes she found a way to 'deal with' her grief 

 

Yes it's sad you domt hear those things 

 

Lol he's the disguise expert :) 

 

Sophia is the one pushing them together all the time lol Liz is like fine her time and Sophia is like get together already lol 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Date: Jul 28, 2018 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Aw I think it’s adorable Emilio calls Michael ‘Uncle Michael’. It helps them all be comfortable with each other and makes them feel more like a family. Aw man Nikita shouldn’t be upset. Pregnancy happens, okay! I know she’d prefer to have her Babu when she’s married but even if they get married a few months after their baby, there’s nothin wrong with that. Just cuz the baby’s born out of wedlock, isnt the end of the world and I’m glad Michael agrees with me on that. 

“You don’t look like a Martinez” HAHAHA

Oh jeez Michael’s right there. It does seem a little complicated but I feel like once the baby is born everything will straighten out. I’m just really proud af of Michael for being there for and supporting Nikita, especially since she’s so worried about the marriage situation. He gives me hope! Great chapter pea <3 keep those one-liners coming haha



Author's Response:

Yes to Emilio it's like you date my aunt you're my uncle lol 

 

 

 

Well she has a point tho he does not look like a Martinez lol 

 

 

 

Yes she's stressing too much, thankfully Michael is the calmness himself in the situation :) 

 

 

 

I'm glad you love it Onion <3

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Date: May 18, 2018 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Hm I think that: if Nikita didn’t want to take a break, she wouldn’t have left right after arriving. Still it’s way too soon for them two to take a break, but she shouldn’t make their relationship sound like something of a task for Michael, e.g. he has to “deal with her emotions” too. Tbh, I think Michael is doing the best he can. She needs to be more appreciative of how much time he’s given her and all. But I am glad Katherine spoke to Nikita instead of Michael, I don’t think Nikita would’ve listened to him lol. The little Spanish pepper is co cute LOL. Anyway I loved the drama and this chapter was great, Pea! <3



Author's Response:

Yes Michaels doing all he can and giving her the time she needs 

 

 

Ikr? You can't really say no to Katherine anyway lol But really she needed to hear it from Katherine who is calm and understanding (So is Michael but he could be too passionate lol) 

 

 

 

 

Lol yes that Spanish pepper part is funny lol 

 

 

 

Yay I'm glad you love it :) 

 

 

 

Thank you Onion <3 

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Date: Mar 02, 2018 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

This began on an awfully bleak note. It looks like Nikita is getting Michael into her habit of using alcohol as a means of escape, when actually, she’s supposed to be improving and finding new, healthier ways to cope. I‘m legit surprised that he didn’t stop her from choosing to drink, and that he did not remind her that she’s been making good progress by not having had a drink in two months. I’m even more surprised that he agreed to drink with her. I thought he was meant to have a positive influence on this broken woman...not her having a negative influence on him.

Anyway I am glad that Michael has openly admitted his feelings for her now and I understand Nikita may have led him on but I can see that a relationship was/is not her intention so she shouldn’t feel guilty about leading him on. It’s not really her fault. Plus Michael is just that into her lol. I see with Sabrina’s help, Nikita is slowly coming to terms with her own feelings about Michael. I can see why she can’t be honest about it to Sophia lol bc she’s no help fr and then with Michael, it’s a whole different story why she can’t be honest with him. It’s way too complicated! So I’m happy Sabrina is there to listen and help. Maybe a few more intimidate talks between Sabrina and Nikita will help Nikita break out of her shell once and for all. I can only hope for the best!



Author's Response:

His feelings are hurt that's why he accepted the drink this once 

 

Yes he is that into her lol 

 

Lol Sophia is Sophia lol 

 

 

Yes all we can do is hope for the best 

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Date: Jun 15, 2018 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

AMPARO IS ME IF I EVER WAS TO MEET MYKERU JAXON

I also really like Emilio 

Holy shit the drive scene was really intense. I’m glad they’re safe man and at least Michael wasn’t the one driving damn! LOL but sadly the law and the feds got on their asses ugh. DIDNT THE OFFICER CLOCK WHO IS IN THE CAR LOL

yeah compared to some of the other chapters, idk why, but this one cracked me TF up lol it was a good read

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Lol probably I'd be the same too lol 

 

Emillio he's a good kid 

 

Told you Nikita was a worse driver than Michael lol Ikr? Stupid feds lol he did in the end and let her go lol 

 

 

 

Lol I'm glad you had fun reading it :) 

 

 

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Date: Nov 25, 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

She even doesn't listen to her freaking maids and shit! RLY NIKITA. or should I say Mrs Martinez? Everyone is tryna help your alcoholic ass fam!! 

"Russian whoring pathetic face" <--- Chill level: 0. Not even. It's like -0 LOL.

Well I was super surprised to see Michael there! But I'm even happier that he was, because they def enjoy each-other's company. Here we go againnnn with the comparing-Michael-to-Andrew's-old-af-dead-husband. WOW. YOU KNOW WHAT NIKITA if he reminds you so much of the man you loveeeee, then GET WITH HIM BRUH LOL. High-key waiting for this moment to come! Feel like Michael could have done better to stop her from drinking - she did still down the two shots but I get if he's reluctant to say something about it, bc she's clearly dealing with a lot rn. 

Wow this ending...wowwww nikita. This is where I feel terrible for her. OMFG CRYING HAS MICHAEL FALLEN IN LOVE WITH HER ALREADY?! FFS NO can they just be together already plzzzzzzzz !!!?!?! y u do this to mi hart, pea?



Author's Response:

Well maids work for her not the other way around y'know? 

 

Lol yes it's- 0 But can you blame her? 

 

 

OMG your chill is -0 When it comes to Andrew lol 

 

LMAO get with him lol girl I'm due time don't rush me lol 

 

Hes no professional but he can def try helping her 

 

 

 

Yes poor thing. He didn't know what to respond to her and low-key kinda is into her 

 

 

In due time don't worry they'll get there eventually 

 

 

Sowwy Onion but like u said the author has lotsa power so why not use It? Lol jk but it' too soon into the story for them to be together already rn