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Summary: Past Featured Story

Zaria Graham is single parent who works as an assistant to Greenwood Elementary School's prinicpal, Mr. Hampton. In addition to working for her obnoxious boss and taking care of her toddler son, she also has to deal with her ex boyfriend, Rashad, and his stalkerish friend, Terell. But what happens when Michael Jackson comes along? Will he be able to earn her trust and protect her from the people of her haunting past? Come along on the journey to find out....

By the way...Dreamer and I had a bet on whether or not my story would go over 50 chapters. *le sigh* She was right. So as a part of the deal that I made, I want to dedicate my story to her. :-) *hugs*

And a great big hug to all of my readers out there...I never thought that SGI would make it pass 500 let alone 100 reviews!!! You guys are the best. <3 I love you all. 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of giveintothefire. The original characters and plot are mine and should not be used without my permission.  I am in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise.  No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Dangerous: 1991-1993, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Erotica, Graphic Depictions of Violence, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Attempted Suicide, Death, Drug Abuse, Racism, Rape, Sexual Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 166 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1016447 Read Count: 185186
[Report This] Published: Dec 23, 2011 Updated: Jul 29, 2018
Reviewer: RhythmNation Signed
Date: Aug 21, 2018 Title: Chapter 111: Disappointments and Confusions

Im with Michael. I have a dry opinion of Rene. Whenever I include him in my Janet stories its not for very long.

Author's Response:

Michael knows best and he's definitely not someone who would be missed in any story lol

Summary:

UPDATED OCTOBER 18, 2018!!

 

 

 

 

I could never imagine Michael doing a show like The Bachelor, Flavor of Love, I Love New York, etc. no matter how hard I tried, I just couldn't. But if he did, I imagine it'd go something like this...

 

 


Categories: Dangerous: 1991-1993, Adult, Adventure, Humor, Parody, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Erotica, Graphic Depictions of Violence, Mild Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Racism
Series: None
Chapters: 92 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 489836 Read Count: 27228
[Report This] Published: Jul 19, 2013 Updated: Oct 18, 2018
Reviewer: RhythmNation Signed
Date: Feb 04, 2019 Title: Chapter 81: Episode 17 part f ELIMINATIONS

From Day 1, I have always been Team Rocky and Michelle. This is painful but I admit the majority of my Rocky love comes from who plays her. I love Noemie Lenoir. She is the ultimate MJ girl.

Reviewer: RhythmNation Signed
Date: Feb 04, 2019 Title: Chapter 81: Episode 17 part f ELIMINATIONS

From Day 1, I have always been Team Rocky and Michelle. This is painful but I admit the majority of my Rocky love comes from who plays her. I love Noemie Lenoir. She is the ultimate MJ girl.

Summary:

Cherell (Sher-el) is the secret wife of Michael Jackson. That is, until she and Michael decide to announce to the world their fourteen year hidden love affair via an exclusive interview hosted by Oprah Winfrey. During this interview, Cherell and Michael travel back in time, as early as the late seventies, and revisit the birth and growth of their love. However, as they recap on the magic that brought them together, they also ponder over the fame, insecurity, and jealousy that almost tore them apart forever.

A special thank you to all my kind readers for making my story one of the top ten most favorite stories on the site. This says a lot and I am truly honored by this. Please continue to enjoy and never feel shy to tell me what you think. You all are amazing!

I want to give a big thanks and a lot of love to Lorry for doing this amazing banner for my story! You rock!

Disclaimer: All unoriginal characters and settings belong strictly to their respective owner while all original characters are full property of the author. No money is being earned from work of fiction and no copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Off The Wall: 1975-1981, Thriller: 1982-1983, Bad: 1986-1990, Dangerous: 1991-1993, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Mild Violence
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 85 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 303315 Read Count: 79330
[Report This] Published: Jan 08, 2014 Updated: Nov 01, 2017
Reviewer: RhythmNation Signed
Date: Jan 24, 2017 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

Please put a stop to it. Janet and Joe are endgame, plus I dont like how the Debarge family is using Janets name now

Author's Response:

Janet's brothers are more than ready to put a stop to it. Her boyfriend is lucky Joe isn't around for this. Now we get to see how the Debarge family is going to be like.

Reviewer: RhythmNation Signed
Date: Sep 11, 2017 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

Great chapter! I want to talk about Janet and Joe and their sub storyline. I really look forward to the day Joe knocks James out. Is it weird that I want them to end up together?....when she is at least 18 of course.Do you have plans for them?

Author's Response:

Terribly sorry for the late response, but thank you. Like you, I also have a feeling that if Joe ever meets James that won't go over too well. It's not weird for you to want them together at all. We've seen Janet crushing on Joe since she was thirteen and found it adorable. Now that she's becoming of age, we want things to become serious between them. But unfortunately, that's easier said than done. So many obstacles lay in the way of making that happen. But as seasons change, so do people and situations. So we have to see what happens. 

More to come soon. 

Reviewer: RhythmNation Signed
Date: Apr 27, 2017 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

Can Joe just show up sweep Janet of her feet on her 18th birthday. Debarge is gross

Author's Response:

I know what you mean lol. That would be Janet's dream come true, although she'd never admit it. Hopefully, one day soon Janet will get a clue about Debarge.

Summary: Feature

In the second half of this two-part love story Michael and Semaj quickly learn that where there's love, there's trouble. Whether they choose to overcome those troubles or not are strictly up to them. 

If you loved Gangsta Lovin' then you'll be sure to fall in love with this one as well. 

"If you love me, I'd rather you show me than tell me. If you've stopped loving me, I'd rather you tell me than show me." 

DISCLAIMER: Pictures that may be in this story are the owners of whomever on google. The plot and names of the original characters are from my own imagination. This story is not the way I depict Michael was in real life, it's just for entertainment purposes. 


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: The Gangsta Lovin' Series
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 157323 Read Count: 7489
[Report This] Published: Oct 20, 2016 Updated: Jan 03, 2021
Reviewer: RhythmNation Signed
Date: Oct 25, 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13- Let It Burn, but then Let It Go

I get what everyone is saying but I agree with Michael Janet and I guess Randy too? Katherine is allowed to forgive and move on and so are the others, but MJ and JJ are allowed to feel anger. Just because Katherine forgave him does not mean they have to. He did not simply hurt her. He hurt them. They had to struggle, they had to feel unwanted, they had their own independent pain from Joseph. Oh and they dont have to be happy for her. If she decided she wanted to cut off her legs and roll around like a worm, should they support that? No. Why? Because logical that is a poor decision. Getting back with a cheating husband and even worse father is a poor decision

Reviewer: RhythmNation Signed
Date: Oct 25, 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13- Let It Burn, but then Let It Go

I get what everyone is saying but I agree with Michael Janet and I guess Randy too? Katherine is allowed to forgive and move on and so are the others, but MJ and JJ are allowed to feel anger. Just because Katherine forgave him does not mean they have to. He did not simply hurt her. He hurt them. They had to struggle, they had to feel unwanted, they had their own independent pain from Joseph. Oh and they dont have to be happy for her. If she decided she wanted to cut off her legs and roll around like a worm, should they support that? No. Why? Because logical that is a poor decision. Getting back with a cheating husband and even worse father is a poor decision

Author's Response:

Yeah, you can say that Randy was on their side. I do agree with your opinion, but as much as they want to despise Kat's decision they shouldn't make her feel bad about it. As you said she had a right to forgive Joseph just as the Jackson kids have a right whether they want to or not. I defenitely agree about each of them having their own independent pain that they would eventually have to come to terms with and sort out. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! 

Reviewer: RhythmNation Signed
Date: Jul 31, 2018 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22- A Change in the Atmosphere

Simone and Janet are cool again or did Janet wake up and realize who her real friend was when she really needed her. Either way I'm happy. Semaj and Michael are so great together. I understand both sides but I wish Katherine could understand where her kids are coming from and stop forcing Joe on them. Their relationship with him is off because of HIS actions and you can't expect the kids who suffered to be cool just because the man YOU love comes back. They don't know that man. They only know the name and the pain

Author's Response:

They did make up and we'll see more of it in the next update. 

Katherine most definitely should understand that she can't push Joseph off on her kids and expect them to immediately understand. Especially when it comes to Janet and Randy. 

Thank you for reading and reviewing!! 

Reviewer: RhythmNation Signed
Date: Oct 18, 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11- Let's Make a Deal

Im expecting, or hoping rather, for Shawn to over step while on tour and Michael to completely beat the snot out of him. As you can tell, im not a big Jay Z fan. I predict him to be one of those rich kids who thinks the own the world and everyone in it, that includes Semaj.
I just hope, but I dont think, Semaj's parents will have her back.Im ready for this story.So ready.


BTW I hope Janet is done with that little punk she had.

Author's Response:

Dang y'all. Shawn was practically just introduced and either y'all want him to get beat up or die I cannot LOL. Ohh, I see. Well, he doesn't look like Jay-Z try to think of someone else while reading about him. When I describe his features you might get a different picture. That's a nice little prediciton you made there about Shawn's personality, but we'll soon find out what he's all about. 

As for Janet we'll see. 

Reviewer: RhythmNation Signed
Date: Sep 22, 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7- The Truth May Set U Free Pt. I

I think Semaj will appreciate his honesty but it will still hurt her. She become a little distant.
Michael did nothing wrong. He did not lead Nicole on. But he should have cut ties with her after and told Semaj earlier.
Nicole was also not wrong bc she didnt know he had someone but she was wrong for how she acted after finding out

Author's Response:

You make an excellent point! He should've cut ties with her, but you're also right about Nicole not being in the wrong because she didn't know.