Penname: MJQuick [Contact] Real name: Monet
Member Since: Jun 17, 2015
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Summary:

Michael and Alana are now happily married after their affair in 'My Best Friend's Brother'. But what happens when Michael's ex-wife Lisa comes to stay with them and she's now supposedly carrying his child?


Categories: Lisa Marie Presley: 1994, Romance, Suspense, Adult
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8078 Read Count: 1301
[Report This] Published: Dec 23, 2012 Updated: Jan 15, 2015
Reviewer: MJQuick Signed
Date: May 07, 2021 Title: Chapter 6: Update?

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Give It Up by Lenetta16 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 102]
Summary:

Peyton is your typical high school outcast. She doesn't follow trends, she has a very low tolerence for others and she lacks a sunny disposition. But when she meets Michael, the friendly college student who is the complete opposite of her, it seems as if he can be the one thing that will actually make her somewhat enjoy school. Will they become really close friends or will it eventually evolve into something more? Find out in Give It Up!


Categories: Off The Wall: 1975-1981, Angst, Humor, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 75070 Read Count: 3994
[Report This] Published: Aug 14, 2013 Updated: Nov 22, 2017
Reviewer: MJQuick Signed
Date: Feb 03, 2022 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Continue to write more please!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

L I T T L E        W H I T E       L I E S

 

 

 

L O V E        I S        B L I N D,        T H E Y        S A Y

 


Categories: Invincible: 2000-2003, Adult, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Erotica, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 66 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 279803 Read Count: 40098
[Report This] Published: Feb 18, 2014 Updated: May 06, 2021
Reviewer: MJQuick Signed
Date: Nov 06, 2016 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Finish the story! Great work!

Reviewer: MJQuick Signed
Date: Apr 17, 2021 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

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Author's Response:

The new chapter is here :)

Catfish by Pleione Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 58]
Summary:

cat·fish

'kat';fiSH

1.

fish for catfish.

"with the Mississippi River far below its normal level, the catfishing kept getting better and better"

2.

US - informal

lure (someone) into a relationship by means of a fictional online persona.

"she was being catfished by a cruel prankster"

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In recent years, online dating has become the latest trend in finding committed relationships. The success rate of these happy couples has stirred the interest of single career woman Jasmine Dimes, a senior graphic designer who spends a fair chunk of her free time browsing the internet doing everything from visiting forums, chatting, and dabbling a bit into the online dating scene.

She connects with a striking older man named Damien who shows to be a compatible match on a dating site. Sweet, charming, and incredibly attractive, the two hit it off through multiple emails and late night instant chats. Finally! Her Mr. Right was here! Except for the small fact that they aren't actually dating. Or at least he hasn't asked her and vice versa. Despite the sparks, their arrangement was seen as a close friendship developed over the internet. A friendship that hints at the possibilities of something more.

But when Damien announces his plans to visit the city, Jasmine starts gearing up for an opportunity to finally see if those sparks fly in person just as heavily as they do online. Despite the criticism by her friend, she sets out and arranges the meeting to see where things lead.

There's just one slight problem ... he never shows up. Not once, not twice, but a constant string of excuses that leaves her wondering if this is even real. Something always comes up where she's left hanging dry. Where is Damien? Is he real or is this some game? It's now uncertain if she should be concerned or simply angry.

And why is it that Michael Jackson, the worldwide renown pop musician who happens to be visiting the city, seems to always be somewhere around or mentioned to be within the vicinity of their intended meeting spot?

Probably just a coincidence.

... Right?


Categories: Humor, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13776 Read Count: 12770
[Report This] Published: Jan 27, 2015 Updated: Nov 17, 2023
Reviewer: MJQuick Signed
Date: Jun 09, 2022 Title: Chapter 6: Updating Soon.

YES PLEASE CONTINUE!!! 

Reviewer: MJQuick Signed
Date: Jun 09, 2022 Title: Chapter 7: To continue?

IF NO ONE ELSE IS READING, I AM!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

It's been five years since Dawnette and Michael last seen each other in 1986. The last time they were together, it ended on a bad note leaving a poor Dawnette heartbroken and Michael engaged to a woman she never knew about. After having her son, Kyan a few months later, she decided to pursue her career as a songwriter and producer. Haven't writing any hits for anyone yet, she works and helps alongside with close friend Teddy Riley who has written and produced for numerous of artists. But, all of that will change when an unexpected phone call from someone is made to Teddy to help write and produce their next album. Teddy wants Dawnette to help write and produce most of the songs, but what she doesn't know is who she will be writing and producing for and... running back into.

 

Modern technology will be used in this story.

 

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Categories: Dangerous: 1991-1993, 1993-1994, HIStory: 1995-1999, Invincible: 2000-2003, Adult, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Mild Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Death
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 83714 Read Count: 13163
[Report This] Published: Apr 27, 2015 Updated: Aug 23, 2019
Reviewer: MJQuick Signed
Date: Jan 08, 2017 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18. Running Back Into You...

Keep writing!!!! 



Author's Response:

I will very soon. :)

Summary:

“You didn’t have to get me anything, Michael. This must have cost a fortune,” I smiled as I brought my hand up to the diamond choker around my neck, my fingertips brushing against the precious stones.

He grinned and leaned back against the headboard, aimlessly brushing my tresses off my shoulders, “I just wanted to get you something special.” His hand trailed down from my shoulder to my arm and then to my hand resting on the satin sheets. His skin was warm, but I instantly stiffened as the metal ghosted over my skin.

I ignored it and looked up at him through my eyelashes, my cheeks rosy, “You make me feel special just by the way you look at me.”  It was true, more than he’d ever know. With him, I felt like I mattered. That I wasn’t a complete failure.

 

I also could pretend that he wasn’t married.

 


Categories: Dangerous: 1991-1993, Lisa Marie Presley: 1994, HIStory: 1995-1999
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Attempted Suicide, Emotional Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77909 Read Count: 23844
[Report This] Published: May 24, 2015 Updated: Feb 02, 2017
Reviewer: MJQuick Signed
Date: Apr 24, 2021 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44-You're the One

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The Blue Note by Dreamer Rated: M starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 24]
Summary:

A night of freedom, turns into a night of pleasure.


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, One Shot
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10080 Read Count: 1115
[Report This] Published: Nov 26, 2016 Updated: Dec 20, 2016
Reviewer: MJQuick Signed
Date: Dec 20, 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3.

Keep writing!

You by TenderLovingCare Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

"I'm attracted to intelligence.


Don't get me wrong, a perfectly crafted body will certainly get my attention, but I'll get bored with it. I always do.


I need you to outsmart me. Make me feel like I could learn from you, grow with you. Do that and you can have me forever."


But is finding someone like that really worth the forever? Is it truly worth all the trials and painful tribulations?


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Categories: Trigger Warning!, Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Erotica, Mild Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Attempted Suicide, Death, Domestic Abuse, Drug Abuse, Emotional Abuse, Physical Abuse, Racism
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4342 Read Count: 615
[Report This] Published: Dec 18, 2016 Updated: Dec 11, 2023
Reviewer: MJQuick Signed
Date: Dec 20, 2016 Title: You

CONTINUE THE STORY PLEASE!!! 

Summary:

How destiny made our paths cross ultimately showing the rise & fall of music royalty. Can a book written by Michael change Lisa's thoughts about their past, present and future?


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Dangerous: 1991-1993, 1993-1994, Lisa Marie Presley: 1994, Adult, Romance
Characters: Lisa Marie Presley
General Warnings: Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature
Trigger Warnings: Racism
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4763 Read Count: 491
[Report This] Published: Jul 26, 2017 Updated: Jan 17, 2018
Reviewer: MJQuick Signed
Date: Jul 30, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Please continue! Even if I'm your only reader.

P.S. You are a great writer. Your style of writing is the type of things I like to read.  I'm already hooked! 

 



Author's Response: Thanks! I liked the way I started it, because I wanted the reader to connect to Lisa. But now I'm like I wish I had done it another way so everything flows better. Anyways, I'm working on the next part now and hopefully will have it up within hours.

Summary:

 

To the world I'm the reason the Jackson Five is breaking apart. 
To the Jacksons I'm the reason Michael Jackson's career is ruined. 
To my family I'm the reason for my parent's broken heart. 

But to him I'm the love of his life. 

Pregnant with Michael Jackson’s baby at nineteen years-old, Renee finds her life turning upside down.

“None of this means anything if that means you’re going to leave.”
···
“Everyone is blaming me like I made this baby by myself when I didn’t!”

 


Categories: Jackson 5: 1965-1975, Off The Wall: 1975-1981, Thriller: 1982-1983
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45488 Read Count: 4799
[Report This] Published: Sep 16, 2017 Updated: Jul 31, 2018
Reviewer: MJQuick Signed
Date: Aug 09, 2021 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

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Reviewer: MJQuick Signed
Date: Apr 27, 2021 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Write more please! 

Summary: Feature

In 1977, Michael Jackson was a young man destined for what he thought was to be a lonely and unhappy existence covered by fame and fortune, until she showed up. Holly Williams captured the world's hearts with her bold voice and soft eyes while she mesmerized Michael day by day. Despite their age and race they became a couple when everyone said it would not work out because of their differences, but Michael and Holly wanted to show the naysayers were wrong - that love has no age limit or skin color. Follow them on a journey that spans decades involving deceit, tragedy, marriage, failure, heartbreak, children, success, happiness, and most importantly love.


Categories: Off The Wall: 1975-1981, Thriller: 1982-1983, Bad: 1986-1990, Dangerous: 1991-1993, HIStory: 1995-1999, Invincible: 2000-2003, 2003-2005, This Is It: 2006-2009, Adult, Drama, Family, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Erotica
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 165845 Read Count: 6900
[Report This] Published: May 15, 2018 Updated: Aug 15, 2021
Reviewer: MJQuick Signed
Date: Mar 09, 2021 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Joyous Holidays and Bitter Regrets

PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!



Author's Response: It's on its way! Please keep an eye out for it.

Summary:

Sometimes, all it takes is having one person in your corner, without any ulterior motives, that makes all the difference. That's what Melony and Michael were to each other. 

She was the best actress in the world, but never truly believed it. Kept in control by the people in her life for a long time, she eventually breaks free. But there are always consequences, and long-term effects. The things that get her through the hard times, are her new family, and her friends, the Jackson family. With one Jackson in particular being her best friend. Someone who understood the life, the pressures, and the stress of being controlled. Someone who was going to change the world one day.

 

This is the story of how one person can change your life, for the better.  

Categories: Jackson 5: 1965-1975, Off The Wall: 1975-1981, Thriller: 1982-1983, Adult, Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Graphic Depictions of Violence, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Child Abuse, Emotional Abuse, Physical Abuse, Racism
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 61162 Read Count: 580

[Report This] Published: Oct 01, 2020 Updated: Dec 05, 2021
Reviewer: MJQuick Signed
Date: Apr 21, 2021 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

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Author's Response:

I'm actually trying to update but I keep running into a server error... Stay tuned though, thank you for reading!