Penname: big fan [Contact] Real name: charlenedozier
Member Since: Apr 12, 2015
Membership status: Member
Bio:

i love to read and love michael.


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Summary:

MJ Fan Fiction

Life for Angela Grey has been far from easy. At only 19 she has gone through every type of pain imaginable from getting pregnant at 17, to being in an abusive relationship with the father of her child, she has become completely numb to love and being loved as she focuses on raising her 2 year-old daughter. During her high school graduation she's surprised by tickets and backstage passes to the Jacksons Triumph Tour where she meets Michael Jackson.  

Michael sees the scars of her battered heart and slowly but surely falls for Angela. Will Michael be able to show her that love does exist and give her the love she deserves? Or will her fear of being hurt again stop her from experiencing true love and her heart finding a new home in Michael.  

Find Out...... 

 


Categories: Off The Wall: 1975-1981, Thriller: 1982-1983, Bad: 1986-1990, Dangerous: 1991-1993, Adult, Drama, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Mild Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature
Trigger Warnings: Death, Domestic Abuse, Racism, Self-Harm
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 49088 Read Count: 5844
[Report This] Published: Jun 29, 2015 Updated: Apr 14, 2020
Reviewer: big fan Signed
Date: May 13, 2017 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25. The Big Chill

Where are you lol? Please come back I miss your story so much.

Reviewer: big fan Signed
Date: Feb 05, 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21. New Place, New Trouble

EWWHHHH That bitch Tatum needs to go somewhere I swear everyone is so pressed about him being with Angela.I know she gone start some mess but I hope they don't play into that shit and let her destroy their relationship.Missed this story I hope you will continue on this is really good.

Reviewer: big fan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 13, 2017 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26. Butterflies

I just hope that thy can get back on track and continue their relationship.Going to counseling is a good step for them.Michael wanting to be a dad to her daughter is so sweet.And maybe now they can getback to that good-good lol cause they know they feenin for it.

Summary:

Just a cute mini-story. 

 

Enjoy 


Categories: Thriller: 1982-1983, Adult, One Shot
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: Evie's Friend
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2654 Read Count: 354
[Report This] Published: Jun 30, 2015 Updated: Jun 30, 2015
Reviewer: big fan Signed
Date: Jun 30, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well I gotta tell you for your first short story girl that was hot !!!So funny how michael tricked her like that but she definately didn't seem to mind too much LOL.overall i really liked it can't wait to see what else you come up with in future stories ,and i wouldn'mind if you expanded on michael and evelyn's story i think that would be da bomb you've definately earned a fan of your writing.



Author's Response:

Thank you sooo much for the support. I'm glad this story is getting love because it's been awhile since I wrote my last oneshot. Not sure yet if I'll continue stories between these two jsut yet but we'll see.... 

Summary:


After many obstacles, Valentine and Michael have found their way back to each other 20 years later. Read on to see if they have a true chance to make this love last or are they both simply out of time?


"You touched my heart in places, that I never even knew."


"Cause nobody loves me, like you do."


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, 1993-1994, HIStory: 1995-1999, Invincible: 2000-2003, 2003-2005, This Is It: 2006-2009
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Nudity, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Drug Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9767 Read Count: 1737
[Report This] Published: Jul 03, 2015 Updated: Apr 01, 2019
Reviewer: big fan Signed
Date: Jul 04, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Valentine

YES!!!!!You really peeked my interest with this the introduction to the story is wonderful.I really like how you cast Regina Hall as michael's potential love intrest she's really cute and funny and i can picture them together as a couple i'm so looking forward to your next installment of chapters.(You've got me hooked LOL.



Author's Response:

Yay! I'm glad you love it. And yes, I think Regina Hall is great fit for Val, sassy, smart, and sexy lol.  Thanks so much for your review, more coming soon!

Reviewer: big fan Signed
Date: Jul 05, 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2-Back At One

Wow yuor right michael sure is bold Lol But i guess the love of a good woman will do that for ya .Seems as if val has really been there for michael during the trials and the allegations and it seems like their building a blended family a second chance to get it right i hope it works and love the little sexy time in the  bedroom haha !!!!go mike looking forwrd to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm really enjoying writing this story. And yes, Michael is definitely bolder but that also shows how comfortable he is with Val :)

i will update soon :D

Summary:

This just changed drastically for Vanessa and she's gotta learn how to Cope with them. Who can help her out? She's got her friends and her family but who can she turn to for love? Find out in~ 

 


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Dangerous: 1991-1993
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19230 Read Count: 2010
[Report This] Published: Aug 04, 2015 Updated: May 22, 2020
Reviewer: big fan Signed
Date: Aug 12, 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

The mom is something else quite obviously she has some much deeper issues goin on other than her daughter or maybe shes just a stone cold bitch i'm sure that'll come to light later.But i love the rapport between her and michael starting off can't wait to see them build a deeper connection,he's already getting off the ground by being so gentlemanly that's what i'm talkin about she's gonna fall for him in no time.



Author's Response:

lol yeah we have to see whagt happens between them, but her mom is something else she's crazy. 

Reviewer: big fan Signed
Date: Aug 19, 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Is that fool for real he needs to take several seats and so does her trifling mother,that's just so freakin disrespectful first her mom need to get her ass off her shoulders being so nasty to your own daughter.Having that no good dog in your home after what he did to your daughter and on top of that did this fool hit his damn head on the way down from the stupid tree.How the heck you gonna act surprised she divorcing your butt then talkin bout you want your daughter around that skank and your other kid he must be bipolar whew makes me wanna jump through this laptop screen and smack the mess outta him and her momma LOL but all in all glad that her and michael went out he is so sweet with her they have great chemistry.



Author's Response:

I know right both him and her mother are really making me pissed off, just typing it really made me want to punch them. He's really acting as though what he did wasn't on the level of divorice.

 

But yeah Michael and Nessa are starting to have better time and I'm hoping that it leads ro much more. 

Reviewer: big fan Signed
Date: Aug 05, 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I would love if you were to post pics! As for her mother she seems to be all about money and only concerned with how this will affect her.She needs to be in her daughters corner and support her what a shame basically tellin her it's ok to stay with a man cheatin on you as long as the money is there be a good little obedient wife,and keep your mouth shut what kind of message is that? The meeting between her and michael should be interesting i'm sure sparks are going to fly LOL.And loved the fact that you made michael her divorce lawyer instead of him always being MICHAEL JACKSON (THE SUPERSTAR)can't wait to see what happens next !!!



Author's Response:

I wanted to try something different from him being a superstar so I was like why not put a twist in this and make him the divorce lawyer. You understand exactly what the messgae is of that chapter, her mother is crazy and you'll understand later on in the story. 

Reviewer: big fan Signed
Date: Aug 04, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Three freakin years he's been cheatin on her and has a kid on the side wow who does sh#t like that,oh i know some selfish ass lyyin doggg!!glad she kicked his ass out hope she doesn't cave and take him back.This is when i hope michael will sweep in and show her what a real man can do and i bet that rat will start sniffin around again uhhh can't stand cheaters love it so far hope you continue 



Author's Response:

I know he's such a douche bag and stay turned to find out girl

Summary:

Try to picture yourself in the music industry with one of the greatest entertainers in the world. There are good things that happened such as you writing and recording songs, dancing in music videos, make great friends,  become well known in the entire world, and get into a serious relationship with him. However, there are negative things that happen such as disgusting rumors and lies, betrayal, deception, being used, and having your past haunt you. Join Michael Jackson and Zendaya Coleman in the entertainment world curcit that will have their lives turned around, watched under a microscope and have people on sides. Watch them dodge the bullet and make decisions that will come at an ultimate price. Watch them survive the price of fame

 


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Song Fics, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Erotica, Mild Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Death, Drug Abuse, Emotional Abuse, Physical Abuse, Racism, Self-Harm, Sexual Abuse, Suicide
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21823 Read Count: 1692
[Report This] Published: Aug 18, 2015 Updated: Oct 31, 2015
Reviewer: big fan Signed
Date: Aug 26, 2015 Title: Chapter 4: The Surprise Part One

I also love your banner for your story michael and zendaya are stunning and look so good together girl!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

OH my God! I would've loved them if they dated each other in real life. They have a lot in common and do similar things as well. And aww thanks. I don't really like it but thanks 

Reviewer: big fan Signed
Date: Aug 26, 2015 Title: Chapter 4: The Surprise Part One

Wow that was huge michael saying he wants to help with zenadya 's career path and possibly going on tour so funny her eyes got big again as michael came through the door i'm surprised she hasn't fainted yet probably will when she finds out the news.And loved that her father is so protective of her imagine warning MICHAEL JACKSON  off your daughter  LOL but my guess is he kinda already can see some potential sparks that will lead to them growing closer but wow this is a wonderful opprtunity for her and who can get to say that michael jackson wants to nuture your career i wonder how she's gonna react can't wait to find out great chapter once again.



Author's Response:

Ikr I would've fainted before I could say a word lol. And I will hopefully update pretty soon because I haven't started the next chapter yet. But once I do, I will defiantly update on it  thank you for reading and reviewing 

Reviewer: big fan Signed
Date: Aug 29, 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Replay

AWWWW !!!!YAY Their fist kiss bout time LOL their chemistry is so cute i thought it was sweet how she kept asking them what did michael think or what did michael say about this or that.And that hug she gave him when he showed up at the studio that girl is hooked,but not happy bout that bitch karen faye trying to throw shade at zendaya talk about rude.I know she gonna start some drama michael don't want yo pasty white ass!! but so glad everythings comin together for them in the studio and heatin up with them personally they really are so cute together GOOD JOB your doing great and yes i love your new banner.



Author's Response:

LOL!!! ''Michael don't want your pasty white ass!!!' LMAO! That was funny and I like that line. Thanks for making me laugh from a horrible night I had. I'll try my best to update tomorrow if I start writing tonight. I'm glad that you're enjoying this story and that you like my new banner. Thank you so much love! 

 

Thank you for reading and reviewing 

Reviewer: big fan Signed
Date: Aug 30, 2015 Title: Chapter 7: The Switches Went Off

 OMG!! Like what the hell just happened i can not believe her dad did that i am in utter shock first off how disgusting that's your daughter man! who does that i mean he just went straight to ten on that like where's the trust talkin bout did he stick it in and then stickin his nasty ass hands inside her i can't.Since i've been reading your amazing story i've been feelin some type of way about her dad on the real he acts more like a jealous lover than a father WOW!!! And that jealous bitch karenfaye knew she was shady you don't own michael and again i say he don't want yo flat pancake havin ass please.But i love the connection between mike and daya theres just a sereness and sweetness between them that i love its not lustful or rushed its just the way it should be,and girl you almost had me about to do a happy dance when mike was like since we've been together for awhile now theres something i wannna ask you? i was   like omg he's gonna ask her to be his girl yes but i guess i'm rushin just a lil just know you got me all in with this story can't wait for more. 



Author's Response:

Lol! Thanks again for making me laugh with your review! And I love their chemistry too. They're not rushing into anything and they are just talking. And Ikr I wanted to cry after writing that. He was nasty to do that, even though she wasn't doing anything with Michael. And I can hopefully update tomorrow. 

 

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: big fan Signed
Date: Sep 24, 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Jackson's Bad Girl

That's right Zendaya defend your man and she was more than within her right to slap the piss outta his ass,huh how are you gonna call yourself idolizing this person and doggin him out in the same breath have several seats trevor.And i love how michael called in  to    check in with her and make her aware of what was coming and how low down for someone to leak her music.But like she said she's thrilled but at the same time apprehensive but i hate to say it that's what is going to come with territory when your dating the most famous man in the world and i wonder i know she loves michael and she wants recognition for her music but is she really ready girl i can't wait for more great chapter really.           



Author's Response:

We'll see if Zendaya is really ready for the fame and popularity and the results to come of her fame. But I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. I'll hopefully have an update after school or this weekend. 

 

Thank you for reading and reviewing!