Penname: SmoothCriminal58 [Contact] Real name: Miranda
Member Since: Feb 20, 2013
Membership status: Member
Bio:

HEEEEEEEYY everybody!!


What's up people? I've always loved Michael, and love reading his fanfics, so I thought it only fitting to create an account here! YES! I have decided to grace you with my presence!! lol jk...


But really though, Michael was always a huge inspiration for me both musically and as a role model, ever since I was little, so RIP Mike, and HERE. WE. GO!! *for a spoonful of sugar...*


Favorite movies: Moonwalker, Megamind, TV series-Murdoch Mysteries, Hairspray


Favorite books: Moonwalk (MJ's autobio), House of Night series, Hunger Games series, Megamind comic books


Favorite foods: Macaroni and cheese, fish and chips, chicken nuggets


Favorite colours: Green, black, red, aqua


Dream Vacation: Egypt, Neverland Ranch; California, England


Favorite music artists: Michael Jackson (duh! XD), Elton John, Miranda Cosgrove, Janet Jackson


Favorite Michael Jackson song: Hollywood Tonight, because it's just so inspirational to me! And Black or White and The Way You Make Me Feel, although its extremely hard to say!! XD and I love Stranger in Moscow and Speechless.
A few (and I do mean just a few!) of my favorite stories on here areeee:
-Night Shift
-Can You Love Me, For Me?
-Behind The Mask
-Abducted
-The Queen Of Pop
-...And Then He Found Me
-You Are My Life (and its sequel: Your Love Is Magical)
-Give In To Me (and it's sequel: She's Invincible)
-Black Swan
-The Assistant
-The Boss
-Forbidden Love Secrets
-The Man of My Dreams
-Lovely One
-The Interview
-The Queen's Magician
These stories deserve all the praise and reviews and best ratings in the whole world, so go check em out. NOW haha

Annndd advertising for: "Forbidden to remember, Terrified to forget..." Its AMAZING so far! :)
Heres the link: http://www.mjfiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=5219

Gender: female
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Reviews by SmoothCriminal58
Summary:

Ever since I can remember... Me and Michael have been the best of friends... We both were forced into the music industry, we both have abusive fathers, we both were the biggest stars in the universe... Although I was above him in fame level... And we both shared same cocky, yet shy, personalties... Nothing could ever go wrong with our friendship! Unless ofcourse, someone fell in love...

 

(Young) Michael

 

So cute

 

 

(Young) Emily

 

 


Categories: Romance, Horror, Suspense, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Adult
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 28138 Read Count: 5468
[Report This] Published: Aug 14, 2012 Updated: May 10, 2014
Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 14, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Childhood - Chapter 1

That would be HandsinMichaelsCurls ;) Sydney iss the BEST well apart from the other 7 authors that I love XD but you, AWESOMEEE :D

Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 17, 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Wounded Blindly -Chapter 20

Gosh... Intense flashback, and to think it happened on Michaels birthday...
That truly was incredible, and I cant wait for the next update!!! :) Your awesooome ;)
Ps. Youre forgiven for the wait xD
Pps. WHEN ARE THEY GONNA DO IT ALREADYYY UHHH XD

Summary:

When Michael is admitted in a private detox clinic, he can't help noticing the girl who runs in the back yard all night long, fighting off sleep in any way she can.

For Jamie life was a happy hike on the mountain trails, camping and trekking, until one day changes her forever. What secret does she keep? Why is she afraid to go to sleep?

* * *

This story was requested by my good friend Jamie (Lovergirl95). Jamie, I hope you like this!


Categories: Dangerous: 1991-1993, Adventure, Hurt/Comfort, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 114569 Read Count: 25230
[Report This] Published: Aug 25, 2012 Updated: Nov 01, 2016
Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 17, 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Oh no... Its coming... :'(

Publish soon, this is so emotional! I hope Mike can cope in the arms of his love...



Author's Response:

It was a dark time, but darkness is easier to cope when you have the candle of love and hope to guide you through....

Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Feb 10, 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

*SHRIEKS FOR A SOLID TWO MINUTES*

JAMIE NOOOOOOO!!!!! NONONONONONONONONONONO HE HAS JAMIE!!!!!!!!!

Oh god please... no...

I'm crying so hard right now... Publish again soon!!! DONT LEAVE US ON THIS!!!!!

 

 

Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Feb 10, 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

FORESHADOW MUCH?!!?!?!?!?!?! Omg!!!! God, Michael's family... well, brothers, they're such a pil!!  And Jamie nor Michael needs that... >:/

I'm scared now, whats gonna happen??? x.x

Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 08, 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

That was a really touching chapter...

Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 29, 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

HE-OHMYGOD HE HE HE HE--
He proposed.
Lol well sort of, but thats how MJ and Lisa started... 0_o OMG im so excited, pleease dont leave us hanging too long, we luv ya :)

Author's Response:

Just a little bit of a wait will make the next part more exciting...all stories are updated in a certain order (take order from my life and I'm lost).

Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 25, 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

I am literally cryin now... :') that was so remarkable beautiful! Oh my gosh, I feel like that was magic. Seriously, you are such and incredible, amazing author. <3 Please never stop writing! :) <3

Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Sep 23, 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

God, I'm not lying, I'm actually crying right now!!! This story has taken MJ and Jamie so far, and I love this so much!!! That dinner is beautiful, and goooood they are so perfect together.

Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 09, 2013 Title: Chapter 29: EDIT TO NOT A CHAPTER

OH MY GOD you cant stop publishing!!! YOU ARE MY FAVORITE AUTHOR!! Its alright, not everybody gets the recognition they deserve! Pleeeeasse dont stop updating, if not for us then for Michael! I love your work so so much, please dont give up on us!! If you want I can recommend you to all my friends here, just please keep going! I love your stories, and I think you're amazing!

Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 07, 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Poor poor Michael... He is such a beautiful soul, this story is so accurate! 

Pleeeeaase publish again soon, I love this so so much!

Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Aug 29, 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Amazinggggg That was so special <3 <3 <3

Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Aug 10, 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Oh my god... I'm crying so hard... I never really thought about the photos before now ever since I saw Michaels response, holding back tears on TV. But now, I am starting to truly appreciate what Michael went through... And its so painful to even think about it... I wish I could have traded places with him... 

That was so incredible, please publish again soon :'( 

Summary:

 

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Anna Nelson is a 15 year-old girl who just can't get over Michael Jackson's tragic death. About a year and a half after the event, she still suffers and cries for him while watching his old videos and listening to his old songs. The thing is, Anna's tired of being in such grief, so now she wants to set herself free in a memorable way. Maybe through some sort of public tribute or dedication to Michael? What will she come up with? Will she accomplish her wishes and honor her idol? Read and find out! Based in a true story.

 


Categories: Adventure, Angst, Family, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4276 Read Count: 5463
[Report This] Published: Sep 18, 2012 Updated: Sep 25, 2012
Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 08, 2013 Title: Chapter 4: CHAPTER 3 - I Have This Dream

Awww I only gotaround to Reading this now, and I love it!This girl is so much like me its scary. I love love love this, please update soon! I'll be waiting!

Summary:

 

Men have always found their way to hurt Barbara Walker, whether it was emotionally or physically. She only learned not to trust them when her boyfriend Kenneth screwed up with her and their son, Jeremy. That was when she finally decided to leave him and start a life of her own with the most precious thing in her life, Jeremy.

Barbara had never cared about celebrities, but when she saw Michael Jackson on TV, she knew he was the only one who could be good to her and her son. So she goes to the ends of the world to make him her child’s new daddy. She doesn’t love him, she doesn’t care about his money, she doesn’t care about his fame. As long as he loves her son and becomes a good male figure to him, what could go wrong?

Will she maybe learn to love him? Is this relationship going to work?

 

by Sabrinamjjlove <3

 

Rated R for sex scenes, abuse, alcohol use, rape and strong language.



Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Dangerous: 1991-1993, Adult, Adventure, Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 20099 Read Count: 1951
[Report This] Published: Sep 29, 2012 Updated: Nov 29, 2012
Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 04, 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Eight

AAAAHHHH MICHAELS COMING OVER!!! Yay :D

Great story an amazing chapter!! Your a great author! And what IS your first language? Just curious, because your enlish is incredible!