Penname: SmoothCriminal58 [Contact] Real name: Miranda
Member Since: Feb 20, 2013
Membership status: Member
Bio:

HEEEEEEEYY everybody!!


What's up people? I've always loved Michael, and love reading his fanfics, so I thought it only fitting to create an account here! YES! I have decided to grace you with my presence!! lol jk...


But really though, Michael was always a huge inspiration for me both musically and as a role model, ever since I was little, so RIP Mike, and HERE. WE. GO!! *for a spoonful of sugar...*


Favorite movies: Moonwalker, Megamind, TV series-Murdoch Mysteries, Hairspray


Favorite books: Moonwalk (MJ's autobio), House of Night series, Hunger Games series, Megamind comic books


Favorite foods: Macaroni and cheese, fish and chips, chicken nuggets


Favorite colours: Green, black, red, aqua


Dream Vacation: Egypt, Neverland Ranch; California, England


Favorite music artists: Michael Jackson (duh! XD), Elton John, Miranda Cosgrove, Janet Jackson


Favorite Michael Jackson song: Hollywood Tonight, because it's just so inspirational to me! And Black or White and The Way You Make Me Feel, although its extremely hard to say!! XD and I love Stranger in Moscow and Speechless.
A few (and I do mean just a few!) of my favorite stories on here areeee:
-Night Shift
-Can You Love Me, For Me?
-Behind The Mask
-Abducted
-The Queen Of Pop
-...And Then He Found Me
-You Are My Life (and its sequel: Your Love Is Magical)
-Give In To Me (and it's sequel: She's Invincible)
-Black Swan
-The Assistant
-The Boss
-Forbidden Love Secrets
-The Man of My Dreams
-Lovely One
-The Interview
-The Queen's Magician
These stories deserve all the praise and reviews and best ratings in the whole world, so go check em out. NOW haha

Annndd advertising for: "Forbidden to remember, Terrified to forget..." Its AMAZING so far! :)
Heres the link: http://www.mjfiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=5219

Gender: female
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Reviews by SmoothCriminal58
Summary:

Response to the Backstage Meet & Greet challenge.


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Challenges: Backstage Meet & Greet
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1028 Read Count: 1918
[Report This] Published: Jun 15, 2010 Updated: Jun 15, 2010
Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Apr 29, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Backstage Meet & Greet

Sexeehhh lol

Heartbreaker by Lenore Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary:


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All she ever wanted was him. But he belongs to someone else.

All he ever wanted was a happy life and a family. But he's struggling to save his fragile marriage. When he least expects it, reality hits him like a blow to the stomach.

He only wanted to hurt her... so how did he end up hurting so many more? She only craved for a little bit of his attention... how did she get herself into such a mess?
Categories: Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Adult
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26538 Read Count: 2866
[Report This] Published: Aug 15, 2010 Updated: Jan 21, 2011
Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Sep 07, 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Wowza... This story is literally amazing, I love it so much!! Please update soon!!!! :)

Summary:

Flo

Flo and Michael both share the same problem. Thanksgiving is coming up and their folks are expecting them to bring a date home. They make a deal that they'll pretend to be in love for thanksgiving break. But in reality they hate each other. What will happens when the act starts to become reality for Flo?


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: Jazer's Library
Chapters: 74 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 123487 Read Count: 75399
[Report This] Published: Jun 01, 2011 Updated: Dec 17, 2012
Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 09, 2013 Title: Chapter 49: I'm continuing for you guys!

OH MY GOD YAYYYY
DONT LEAVE US TOO LONG I LOVE YOU AND YOUR WORK!!! Adksbeveje fangirllll

Summary:

Michael and Sam are on their way back from the movies on a cold, stormy night. They are goofing off and playing around, as close friends do, when they find themselves infront of a cemetary. Michael dares Sam to go in and from there, different events unfold. Follow Michael and Sam on this crazy, scary, and silly journey on this unusual night.

 

 


Categories: This Is It: 2006-2009, Horror
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: Michael and Sam: Friends Till The End
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2655 Read Count: 1144
[Report This] Published: Jun 21, 2011 Updated: Jun 21, 2011
Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Mar 01, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: A Real Thriller of A Night!

HEEHEEHEEHEE that was greattttt!!! Thx a ton!!

Summary:

Cameron Jameson has worked for Michael as his assistant for two years. They had grown close whether she wanted them to or not. Many aren't able to see Michael when he's truly himself. She's one of the only people who knows Michael in and out. From his womanizing ways to his occasional partying. But what happens when she's his next target?


Categories: Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance, Suspense
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: Jazer's Library
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59025 Read Count: 54872
[Report This] Published: Sep 29, 2011 Updated: Jun 11, 2014
Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 19, 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

OOOKAAAAY then...

That was a bit weird XD

Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 20, 2013 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

THANK GOD THEY DIDNT BREAK UUUUUUUUP

I actualy love their disfuntional relationship <3 XD

PLEEEEEEEEEEEEASSSEE vupdate soon I LOOVE THISSS!!! <3<3<3

You're amazinggg ;)



Author's Response:

Summary:

My short story for Christmas and MJFiction's Birthday.


Categories: Suspense, Family, Angst
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Challenges: Christmas Short Story Contest
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1178 Read Count: 1240
[Report This] Published: Dec 19, 2011 Updated: Dec 19, 2011
Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed
Date: Feb 27, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: When Daddy Arrives...

AAAAWWWW HAW HAWWWW that was adoooraaablleee



Author's Response:

Lol, thanks love!

Summary:

Tired and worn from being battered by his recent trial, Michael is desperate to escape. He decides his best bet is to take his children and disappear into the Colorado wilderness. But an honest mistake and a freak storm derail his plans. Luckily, he has an unexpected benefactress in the beautiful and friendly Renee. Now, all he has to do is keep his sanity as cabin fever takes on a whole new meaning.


Categories: Adult, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30374 Read Count: 6230
[Report This] Published: Jan 08, 2012 Updated: Jan 15, 2012
Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 04, 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Heyyy girl I've never read such a capturinf story. Omg. I love this!!! Michael and Renee are like.... Amazing, I have no words!!

This was just beautiful. AAAAND CAN I JUST SAY. HOT. GOOD LAWWWWD sexaayyyyy x.x

I love it omg hahahaha this was fantastic, I mean it, I cant wait for the next chapter!! New favorite for sure! love and support!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the glowing review! I'm sorry to say that this story is complete, but feel free to check out any of my other stories.

Summary:

Michael goes to Las Vegas also known as Sin City with his family to celebrate the release of his new album THRILLER. But the quiet night that he had in mind takes a turn when he meets Schuyler. She becomes the woman who changes his life. Michael wants more of her but the problems start when she walks out of his life and Michael has to go out of his way to find her. He becomes focused on showing her that he is the man that she has been searching for.

Will Michael get Schuyler? Or is he wasting his time with a woman who never loved him?

Join Michael as he tells you his story in his own words of the thriller night that changed his life and the woman that taught him how to love....

***OVER 200 REVIEWS. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR SUPPORT AND LOVE!

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** "A THRILLER NIGHT IN LAS VEGAS" IS ONLY BEING POSTED BY ME ON MJFICTION IF YOU SEE THIS STORY ANYWHERE ELSE, IS NOT ME THEN IT HAS BEEN STOLEN. THANKS FOR THE SUPPORT!!


Categories: Thriller: 1982-1983, Adult, Adventure, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Song Fics, Suspense
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 67 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 193321 Read Count: 40401
[Report This] Published: Jan 19, 2012 Updated: May 26, 2014
Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed
Date: Feb 27, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - A Thriller Night (Part 1)....

hahahahaha love it!!! BTW, nice pic at the end, it made me go aaaawww!! ^_^



Author's Response:

haha thank you <333

Ghosts by femalien Rated: M starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 127]
Summary:

UPDATE! New cover added for the story!

UPDATE! Thank you also for 100 reviews! I love you all!

THANK YOU ALL FOR 10,000 READS! You are wonderful!

Marie (Missy) Hendricks remains jobless when the advertising agency she had been working for the last 4 years closes down. One day, she answers the classified ad placed by a mysterious gentleman who is looking for a personal assistant...


Categories: Adult, Mystery, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88117 Read Count: 35892
[Report This] Published: Jan 21, 2012 Updated: Jun 29, 2013
Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 29, 2013 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 - THE FINALE

ITS OVER!

*sings* and I... Dont know whetherrrrr... To laugh or cry! And It cuts like a knife... "Ghosts" is out of my liiiiiife!

Such a beautiful, amazing love story! 

I am enjoying the sequel just as much as the original, and thank you for this! It was emotionally thrilling to read this; I laughed, cried, raged... And now its over :'(  

Thank you so much! I loved this, and I will be rereading this, mark my words! XD

<3 xxx <3

Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 11, 2013 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Oooooooo!!! Missy gon' be be preggerrrrss... XD

Cant wait for the last chapter, are you gonna make a sequel? Cuz I would love that so much!! ^_^ 

Amazing story, I reread the whole thing and wow its amazing!

Give In To Me by femalien Rated: M starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 81]
Summary:

Michael needs a back-up singer for his Bad tour...However Belinda, the girl of his choice is the leader of an emerging heavy metal band and refuses to abandon her mates...

Two years later fate brings Michael face to face with her again. This time, her band has started to become successful and Belinda is now keen to help Michael with the most unusual request ever...to help him train his voice for a rock song...


Categories: Dangerous: 1991-1993, Adult, Adventure, Hurt/Comfort
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 58284 Read Count: 24014
[Report This] Published: Jan 21, 2012 Updated: Jun 05, 2012
Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 12, 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Shout Out

OMYGAW PLEASE NEVER END THIS!!! Okay lol is you MUST end this amazing story, then i will never stop pestering you with reviews until you write a sequel!! Hahaha 

You are an amazing author, so PLEASE continue this beautiful story one way or another! Please?! 

Thanks!!!



Author's Response:

Well, you can check the sequel, She's Invincible :) Thank you for the review!

Monster by femalien Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 68]
Summary:


 


A good Catholic from Little Italy, Seraphina shocks her family by getting a divorce from her abusive husband. She is cast away and disowned.


Michael is happily signing autographs in front of Virgin Megastore in New York. In one instance, his senses are captured by a beautiful, quiet and troubled young woman. In his generous attempt to bring her some comfort, Michael finds himself absorbed in a story involving Italian traditions, love and family honor.



Categories: Adult, Romance, Suspense
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95645 Read Count: 27976
[Report This] Published: Jan 23, 2012 Updated: Jul 02, 2013
Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 03, 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47 - THE FINALE

AWWUAWWWUAWWW that is  a perfect ending!!!! :') 

PLEASE make a sequel! Please, with MJ on top? *Puppy/MJ face* 

Summary:

Fame and power have got to Michael's head eventually and he knows only one way to deal with people: it's my way or the highway. He thinks the same rule applies to the woman who loves him - and he manages to push her away.

Emily Harrison has to deal with Michael's complex personality and a sister with suicidal tendencies. When the world crashes around her, she has to fight for her own sanity.

Will Michael get one more chance at love with her?


Categories: Adult, Angst, Hurt/Comfort
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Challenges: Older Michael's Point of View
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 58021 Read Count: 13426
[Report This] Published: Jan 25, 2012 Updated: Sep 10, 2012
Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 25, 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

OH MY GOD NO WRITE A SEQUEL NOW!!!!!!! Pleeeease, this cant be over, its too beautiful to be over!! Its amazing, you are such a talented author!! Please write a sequel?

Summary:

Robyn is an average woman with big dreams. Her dream is to make it big and be able to sing alongside her idol Whitney Houston. However, despite what everyone tells her, she feels she has an awful voice, one not worthy of hollywood. Can one man change all of that? Will Michael Jackson be able to tell her otherwise, will he be able to break her out of her shell? What will come out of these two meeting? Read and see! :)


Categories: Dangerous: 1991-1993, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7457 Read Count: 5509
[Report This] Published: Feb 21, 2012 Updated: Oct 20, 2012
Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed
Date: Feb 28, 2013 Title: Chapter 2: An Interesting Dance...A look of...

OMG OMG OMFFFGGGGGGG I AM LOVING THIS!!! lol but really, its excellent!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad! :D I'll be posting more when I can. Hope you'll continue to read. :D

<3 MJLF