Penname: Pyrefly [Contact] Real name: Mady
Member Since: Nov 27, 2012
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Summary:


IN THE GARDEN

copyright: celestia

 


Categories: Adult, Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Slash, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Domestic Abuse, Emotional Abuse, Self-Harm
Series: In the garden - The next chapter
Chapters: 130 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 166239 Read Count: 70711
[Report This] Published: Aug 25, 2013 Updated: Apr 17, 2016
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Date: Oct 19, 2014 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102 - One more try

Aw, my heart is breaking for these two. T_T Michael has been so ugh, and while Morgan is being a little dickish, it's totally valid considering how closed off and weird MJ's been. Michael needs to do some serious ass kissing, lol.

Anyways, great updates as usual, I'm eager to see what happens next! <3



Author's Response:

lol, 'a little dickish' but yea, I agree on both ends. Thank you so much for adding a review, so glad you enjoy. xx <3

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Date: Jun 14, 2014 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84 - Hysteria

OMG, this chapter was hilarious, I died! XD I can just imagine Michael being drunk and whispering to his mannequins, or even when he's not drunk, lol.

And what they wrote on the wall, oh gosh, I love it!



Author's Response:

 

Haha, thank you! glad you enjoyed! B) I think Michael whispered to his mannequins on a daily basis to tell the truth. :)

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Date: Aug 03, 2014 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90 - Surface

Oh, poor Morgan! :( I feel really bad for him, Justin coming along like a bitter ex and tryin' to mess up stuff. I want to echo what a previous reviewer said and mention how much I like Morgan's development. He's matured a lot, so I'm eager to see how he handles this situation. Michael, on the other hand, still has some work to do, lol.



Author's Response:

Thank you, that's nice. :) Morgan is maturing and growing, having dealt with so much in the past years has finally made him realize one or two things, lol. But Michael.... well yes, he's... Michael, haha. 

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Date: Jul 17, 2014 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87 - The next morning

Aw, I hope Michael can open up to Morgan soon, but I'm glad Morgan is being so sweet. I always look forward to your updates, I just love the romance in your stories! ^_^



Author's Response:

Thank you, that really means a lot! x 

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Date: May 30, 2015 Title: Chapter 117: Chapter 117 - Further

It's always awesome to see updates of this story! I loved the little "moment" MJ and Morgan shared when he was looking all fabulous, lol. I'm eager to see what happens next. ^_^



Author's Response:

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed the little moment even though Michael found it hard to relax lol. I always love your reviews, xx

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Date: Dec 06, 2013 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Oh snap, looks like the boys are gonna get into some michief! lol Oh, and I accidentally posted that last review and stuff on your first chapter somehow instead of the last one. Sorry about that, don't ask me how it happened, lol!

 

I agree with everything you said too! :)



Author's Response:

Heehee, they're definitely in for some action.

That's okay. :) It doesn't matter.

I couldn't agree with you more, though! I just reread your reply and Hulk Hogan? lol! That metaphor still cracks me up. :)

 

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Date: Nov 27, 2013 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

This was an awesome chapter! A lovely combination of cuteness, sensuality and humor, loved it! 

What a trip for Morgan to think he was being proposed to when instead Michael just wanted to - well you know, lol! How ironic that Morgan was thinking pure thoughts while Michael's mind was in the gutter. XD

I was also rather surpised that Michael actually fired Laura, lol, I guess she ended up being too intent on attracting Morgan.



Author's Response:

Thank you so so much. :)

Yea, kind of a paradox eh? ;) Morgan has many wishes for their future. It'll be very hard to make them come true though. :|

Michael pretty much loathed Laura ever since she started flirting with Morgan. He wouldn't let anyone know, though. :)

 

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Date: Nov 23, 2013 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Oooh, I feel like Morgan must have been thinking about the whole marriage thing. Awww, lol. It still brings me back to when he first thought Michael was going to possibly propose, and how he was dissapointed that he didn't. Poor guy. 

I have nothing but positive thoughts as always, and I'm eager to see what happens next. Though Michael is insecure, I hope that he can come to be more open with Morgan, as that'll be integral to their relationship asceding to the ultimate height. Michael has to feel safe in confiding anything to Morgan, even if it's difficult.

Also, the whole "blowjob" moment - hilarious. I love how blunt Morgan can be! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

He did, actually, so your impression were right about that whole scenario!

They still have to find trust within each other and it's going to be hard work for both of them.

lol, I know. He usually just says what's on his mind. :D

 

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Date: Nov 19, 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Sweeeeeet, Justin got kicked to the curb! He's obviously just so pitifully jealous and he needs to get over it, lol. I'm eager to see what happens between Michael and Morgan, it's been a while since they've really been alone without Justin looming over their shoulders.



Author's Response:

Thank you. :) Yea, I think it'll take some time for them to digest everything's that happened with Justin around, specially Morgan.

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Date: Nov 14, 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Oh my, very angsty indeed! Considering how Justin is acting, I don't blame Morgan for blowing up like that, he's defintely getting out of line. Oh dear, can't wait to see what happens, lol.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. :)

It was time for him to finally step his foot down, he'd never been bothered by anyone as much as he's with Justin, lol. Poor guy.

 

 

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Date: Nov 11, 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Aw, I feel so bad for Morgan! It sucks that he thinks Michael won't marry him now. It was sweet how he was excited about the idea and now his hopes have been squashed. :( And to make it worse, now he's feeling inadequate because of Justin. Stupid Justin, lol. He helped Michael but he made Morgan feel like crap in the process. 

I hope Morgan can regain his confidence and realize he can take care of Mike just as well as Justin or anyone else. He must prove that he is prime husband material. ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

Aw me too, actually. :P Morgan has to find a way to gain control over the situation, and at the same time try to keep his cool and composure. Not an easy thing to do, especially being Morgan, lol.

Precisely! :)

 

 

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Date: Nov 10, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prolouge & Chapter 1

Oh my gee, that's so weird, sorry about that! I totally didn't get a message from you, and I don't even see any kind of inbox for messages on my account menu. I didn't get an email either - straaaaange, lol. 

Thank you though, and while I haven't written creatively in a while, it's defintely something I've been thinking about. I've loved reading fanfiction for years (though I'm just geting into MJ stuff), but I haven't written much. I actually started on a story for the Thriller Halloween challenge, but didn't get around to finishing and submiting it.

I often lack motivation to write, and I'm honestly rather insecure about it, but I must say that you're influencing me in a postive direction. :)



Author's Response:

Very weird indeed, :| But okay, all's well then. :) first I thought you were ignoring me but I figured that couldn't be the case.

Aha, I've been into fanfiction for a while now, mostly just interested in well written MJ slash stories to be honest, haha. Other than that I like to read drama stories in general.

Too bad you didn't get around to finish it, but I understand deadlines, sort of takes away the motivation, at least for me.

That's really nice to know, :) if you ever need to brainstorm ideas, or other, don't hestitate to interact. :)

 

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Date: Nov 09, 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

AWWW! Oh my glob, they are so cute! I'm so pleasantly surprised that Morgan decided to stay in Neverland, yay! Michael's just throwing all his love at him in a sweet Michael-y flurry and Morgan doesn't know what to do yet. This is such a big step in their relationship, I'm excited! XD



Author's Response:

Thank yooooou! :)

Yeeey, I know right. :)

Just about anything can happen in this moment. :)

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Date: Nov 07, 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Hm, very interesting development with Justin here. Michael always came across as the touchy feely type, so I can actually see how something similar to this could have happened in real life - one of his friends thinking they were more than friends when they really weren't.

I appreciate that Michael convinced Morgan to calm down and realize he was being a jerk face. It's sweet that they're getting along so well now and I look forward to seeing what ahppens next! :)

 



Author's Response:

Exactly! :) I think it was pretty easy for some friends of his getting caught up in his world and starting to imagining things that weren't actually there.

Thank you. Michael's slowly starting to understand Morgan's mood swings and he's trying to find a way to handle them aswell. :)

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Date: Nov 10, 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Wonderful love scene, their interactions are so adorable! I like that Michael is starting to become more open with his affection and sensuality. They both seem to be encouraging each other in a positve way. Justin remains to be an interesting figure and I'm curious about what will follow. Morgan obviously didn't intend to spend the day away from Michael until Justin butted in, but now he can tell Tristan that he made up with Mikey. :3 It's also nice to see that he's being more mature, by not feeling jealousy towards the notion of Michael being alone with Justin.

As always, I'm kept on the edge of my seat and look forward to your update. ^_^



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. :) Michael's becoming more and more open in various ways, which should only benefit their relationship. And, lol, no Morgan can't stand Justin, at all, however, he's learning how to handle it. :)

By the way, I sent you a message on this site for awhile ago, don't think you received it, though, lol.

Anyway I was wondering if you write any stories as well. Would be fun as you seem to have a very good way with words and our mutual taste in Michael's character.