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Summary:

Skyler was a small time girl who landed a job at a new york bank. One day her whole world changed. It was the day she met F.B.I's most wanted. Michael Jackson

WARNING! THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE AND GRAPHIC SITUATIONS.  

THANK YOU GUYS SO MUCH FOR GIVING US OVER 600 REVIEWS! WE ARE SO GLAD YOU ARE ENJOYING THIS STORY. YOU GUYS ARE AWESOME!!!


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Horror, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 145091 Read Count: 134091
[Report This] Published: May 25, 2012 Updated: May 11, 2016
Reviewer: Annie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Mar 04, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It was supposed to be the same story but on Michael's POV and then I say to myself "Girl bye, let's continue the story on Michael's POV"

So basically Liberian girl is still on but with Michael's POV now :) Sorry I deleted it like this :S

And sorry if Kiss of Life keeps on getting more and more dramatic LMAO



Author's Response:

Lol as you can see....I love drama.

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Date: May 11, 2013 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Showtime, sista...

 

OMG I knew you would use Antoine Dobson, I just knew!!!! I'm crying and laughing at the same time, I swear!

What a coincidence that Gunz found Skye!! I love that! And I wonder how Showtime will help Michael's team. Like what can he do for them except flipping his hair dramatically?

And I can't wait to see Michael's face when he will see Sky. Oh hell, he already know. Even Sky knows it. I quote her : "Matter of fact, he would rip this dress off and take me straight to the bedroom"

Great chapter, can't wait for the next one



Author's Response:

he/she will have a big part of the red seven.....somewhat lol. thank you for the review hun. we are glad you enjoyed it. more will come soon. and remember, michael hasn't meet showtime either lol, so this will interesting. oh and stretch found sky. not gunz. thanks again hun. i loved the gif.

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Date: Mar 15, 2013 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Oh my she is deffo leaving Michael?


Sky is a strong woman and I hope she will be safe this time. And that dumb ass Michael, just a "I love you" would save the stress! God, when will he admit it?!
Ugh, I can't believe Tony Haines found her before Michael!!!! I wonder what he wants. Obviously it's linked to Michael. That would be so perverted if he made Sky fall in love with him so that she WON'T ever come back to Michael. That wuld be great LMAO

Febreze... Beyonce?
LMAO, Sky needs to step up her lie game HAHAHA

Michael is deffo in love and he needs a strangers to make him see that? Dude, please!

Great chapter, can't wait to read the next one :)



Author's Response: The whole Beyonce thing was for the irony because we use Beyonce's picture as sky

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

TRD

Love stoned with Diana Ross, Michael Jackson faces bad break-up with the only woman he trusted most, all his life. He paces the next stages of his life, walking wounded with a chip on his shoulder; grieving over his past and heedless about his future. Appalled by the pain of love, he vows to himself that he would not ever fall in love again as he continues to be a player since he became a pleasure seeker for his needs. At this time of dried and withered, an young doctor passes his path like a breath of fresh air... He wants her, he gets her and before they knew a steamy sordid affair begins as he lays out ground rules that their clandestine relationship will be based only on sex. But without his realizing it, it poses a threat when he finds himself falling for her. When love hit him like a freight train for the second time, he fell hard.

"Sex is the only consolation you have when you can't have love"

NOTE: All of the above are discussed in this story. I do realize that this is a very senstive and controversial subject but I want to let you know that I'm in no way trying to portray or paint Michael in a bad light or executing an over exposition of his private things or embarrassing him. My sole intention of this is just trying to vindicate Michael by learning as much as possible to at least get and give a slight view of why he made the choices the way he did and a little spotlight on the troubled life he lived behind the curtains.

 


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 318445 Read Count: 42857
[Report This] Published: Jul 02, 2012 Updated: Sep 13, 2017
Reviewer: Annie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 12: ♥ Chapter 12: Leaves Of Grass ♥

Okay, so I was at home watching TV and then i've saw an episode of The Vampire Diaries and the first think I said was "It's Nita!"

I could not believe that i didin't noticed it earlier!



Author's Response:

LMAO! Yeah you haven't noticed it before? Yes the girl I chose to play as Nita is the one from Vampire Diaries. I love Vampire Diaries... do you? She's very cute and looked perfect for the job :D Lots of love <3 xx

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Date: Jul 12, 2013 Title: Chapter 21: ♥ Chapter 21: Somewhere, Anywhere, Everywhere, Nowhere. ♥

When Nita asked who was Janet, I was like

YOU DON'T KNOW WHO JANET JACKSON IS? Goodbye! And then I realized that Control came out in 1986 lol

That was a cute chapter girl :) I'm glas you're back! And Niya had been so annoying! I know she has the rigtht to be mad at Michael for flirting with girls but the ice-cream stuff lol! The only thing I can think of is... A pregnancy?

Tour? Does he mean the BAD Tour? OMG, I can already smell the drama and I am thinking of thirsty ass Tatiana!



Author's Response:

HEY ANNIE!!! Girl how are you?! I missed you! LOL Ikr? Yes, Control released later and created that big 'Thriller-fame' in Jackson fam again ;) Thank so much babe, I have been out lately... studies have definitely got in my way!! Its annoying right? Hehe yes, Nita's so possessive! LOL Pregnancy?! Girl, you got me thinking whether I have been incredibly confusing my readers LOL! Well you'll see ;) Thats all I can say. :P Yeah I can't wait for Tatiana to get in the scene as well!!! Thanks again for wonderful review hun. Lots of love <3 xx



Author's Response:

HEY ANNIE!!! Girl how are you?! I missed you! LOL Ikr? Yes, Control released later and created that big 'Thriller-fame' in Jackson fam again ;) Thank so much babe, I have been out lately... studies have definitely got in my way!! Its annoying right? Hehe yes, Nita's so possessive! LOL Pregnancy?! Girl, you got me thinking whether I have been incredibly confusing my readers LOL! Well you'll see ;) Thats all I can say. :P Yeah I can't wait for Tatiana to get in the scene as well!!! Thanks again for wonderful review hun. Lots of love <3 xx

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Date: Jan 10, 2013 Title: Chapter 20: ♥ Chapter 20: Man Proposes, Woman disposes ♥

Damn, she gave in to Mike quite easily! I bet she loves being his property and this is why it was so easy for her to forgive Michael! Where is our feisty and smart mouth Nita?

OMG who is it? Katherine, Bubbles or Omer's father?? You are killing me here!

Ih shiit you are bringing Tatiana into it too? This is definitely going to be huge! And I like drama so... ;))

 



Author's Response:

LOL Its Michael Jackson who can she blame? Right... Love conquers it all ;) Well as of now, he knows how to shut up that smart mouth of hers lol! I love how you so easily predict things :) But wait you will see! Of course... I can't wait to start working on chapters about Tatiana :D I love drama as well. We'll see. Thanks for your wonderful review hun! I mean it! Lots of love <3 xx

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Date: Jan 10, 2013 Title: Chapter 19: ♥ Chapter 19: Good Day Sunshine ♥

I can't see the picture of Michael laying on his bed :(

Here I am to catch up on your story! I'm not going to lie, I thought it was really cute all along and I was like

And then it continued to be cute and I was like "Is she going to bring the drama or what?" and then the Stevie thing and i was like

 

I don't know if I'm mad at Michael right now. Maybe he asked people to beat Stevie before Nita told him she was in love with him... Even if it's the case it's baaaaad. But I can understand! And maybe he didn't do it at all.

You got me with the Nita cheating stuff and you ain't going to fool me twice LOL!

On to the next chapter YAY



Author's Response:

HEY Annie :) I'm sorry for that girl! Its not working. Stupid photobucket! Sometimes it can get in my nerves for being like this :/ Aw, how sweet of you! Thanks. HAHA I love the second gif! Its Hilarious! He must be a vampire lol! Right! hehe! Thanks for your warm review chicka. It always light up my mood and make me break into laughter LOL! Love you. Lots of love <3 xx

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Date: Dec 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 16: ♥ Chapter 16: Stranger On My Land ♥

a BIG shock? You are scaring meeeeee
Michael better admit his feelings for Nite because he is not able to work anymore! And he makes Nita confuses! She thought he had another woman!
OMFG! She is the one assuming he has another woman when ...



SHE IS CHEATING ON HIM!!!
What is going on? Nita isn't suppose to cheat on Mike!!! Oh god , i can't...



Author's Response:

HEY Annie :) HEHE Girl you are so funny! Oh yeah? You think so! But Michael needs to get his too much self-conscious ass to admit everything to her... mmm. We'll see! Oh poor babe don't get too scared you have more shocks to see trust me *HEEHEEE* Wait till next update.. It'll be up within next 24 hours. Btw, I love both gifs but the one with Will Smith is just Hilarious! Thanks so much for your charming review hun :D Lots of love <3 xx

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Date: Nov 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: ♥ Chapter 1: Dawn of the Dusk ♥

Actually my story is inspired by Michael' song Liberian Girl :)

I should watch the first season, because everybody around me is talking about Vampires Diaries!



Author's Response:

First season is the best!

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Date: Nov 03, 2012 Title: Chapter 12: ♥ Chapter 12: Leaves Of Grass ♥

It's good to read this new chapter! It's been a longtime but you're finally back! I hope you feel better. I hate the flu too but i always end catching it! I'm weak :-/

Are you kidding? This chapter is great! And I can't wait to see what will happen next!

Katherine talking about Mike's love life was awkward as hell! But I like the fact that Michael finally adit is feeling for Nita! The next step is to adit it... TO HER!

Katherine is right. She is playing hard to get but i'm sure that she is feeling the same for Mike! And the fact that Mike want to see Omer is too cuuuute! I know she didn't want that, but well it's too late know!

And Nita having a date!!!! I know Mike is going to do soething about it, right?

Great chapter like usual, much love!

xoxo Annie :)



Author's Response:

HI there Annie :)

Yeah its been really long, due to the flu. Lol me too. Thanks so much girl :) I really appreciate it! IKR? Parents talking about children's relations... smh! Right you will soon see!!! Well do u think Nita shouldn't go for the date?! We will see... Thanks again Annie :D 

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Date: Nov 03, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: ♥ Chapter 1: Dawn of the Dusk ♥

Oh God I am so excited right now! I didn't even start to read your chapter because I want to finish a chapter on mine, but i can't take it anymore! Yes i have my own story and i want to thank you because you kind of push me to start one. I want people to be eager to read my story as much i am to read yours.

See ya in a minute with my review of your chapter

xoxo Annie :)



Author's Response:

Hi Annie :) There again! lol! WOW! That's really something! Aw, you r writting a story?! That's awesome! I would love to check it out sometimes!!! *Blushes* I'm glad I sort of encouraged u to write one :) I'm sure they will! Thanks so much Annie, I really appreciate that girl! <3 xx 

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Date: Oct 20, 2012 Title: Chapter 11: ♥ Chapter 11: Shrouding Me Alive ♥

Oh my, there is so much going on right now! I hope they will overcome the all this madness! And little Omer already in love with Michael! She can't just let him leave. I beleive that Omer need a father figure in his life and Michael really loves him!

Nita, Nita, Nita! Get it together and admit your feelings! I understand that she must be a little confuse about her relationship with Michael because since they had sex it's not very cleat but after that outburst of jealousy from Michael it's clear that she is for him more than just a 'Sex Friends". What's the matter with her??

Destiny is trying to bring the back together like usual! I'm so eager to find out what will happen next. I wonder if Michael will really leave her alone and if it's the case and wonder is Nita will do something and be a little more passive.

Much love, keep on going hun!

(I didn't really get the title tho, I've try to translate it but I didn't understand the meaning)



Author's Response:

Annie!!! Hey girl :) Yes! Just when Nita's thinking it can't get any bad Omer is creating an emotional bond with Michael. Yes, that's where its heading ;) Right that girl needs to grab some guts... Nita's more guilty and pained over the way their relationship started. Things need to change.. mm... That's right! More than what they thought they were.... madness gonna stop in next chapter and I'd already started working on it. It will be up soon <3 Yes its the fate that brings them back again and again! Lets wait and see where they are all gonna end-up! :P Even if Michael leave her alone I don't think fate will leave them... Thanks a lot luv :) It really means a lot! Your words! They keep me going! Love 'ya! Aw, the title 'Shroud is a length of cloth or an enveloping garment in which a dead person is wrapped for burial.' So shrouding means wrapping that burial cloth around. Here Nita is shrouding Michael when he's alive. :P Pretty complicated and confusing for this chapter... I know... I'm weird Heehee. See you soon luv ;) <3 xx

Reviewer: Annie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 13: ♥ Chapter 13: Never Too Late ♥

That was an eventful chapter!

I'm kind of sad for Nita, I thought that her date would be romantic and nice and make her forget a little bit about Michael but he was a total ass and he has nothing on Mike! And the fact that Omer called Michael "Dada" was too cute! I'm sure Michael is going to be a great dad, well if Nita agree. But I don't think she will refuse since I believe she has feeling for him and Omer likes him.

I really thought Michael choose Nita because she looks like Riya but no! I believe we need a flashback about Michael and Loriya relationship!

And about that date; i'm pretty sure that Michael is going to do is best to be perfect for them. He really want to make it work so he better make it right!

Great chapter like everytime :)! When i saw that you update I've stop to write my own story because i wanted to know so bad what happened! I'm addicted!



Author's Response:

Hi Annie :) Thanks so much hun, I really mean it!

LOL! I know that you guys will be pissed off after reading about Nita's date but I thought that's the way Warner should be :p Thanks girl... Omer part is too cute I agree. Yeah, its too late to stop anything going on b/w Mike and Omer. Oh yeah, the flashback is what 'Fools Fall in Love' (my other story) I have already updated a chapter in it. Check it out if you have time :D Yeah, the date must be worth the wait dont ya think? ;) Thanks, thanks and thanks girlie... readers like you keep me going :D Love' ya girl XD Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: Annie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 07, 2012 Title: Chapter 15: ♥ Chapter 15: Close, but no Closer ♥

Michael sleeping next to Omer was the sweetest thing ever! He really cares about Omer and I guess Nita is getting used to it. And the way Michael can't help but claim that Omer is his own son is amazing! Quincy can't even deny that Omer isn't related to Michael. It's true that they both had those big eyes!
HAHA Michael can't keep at thing from his Mother :) And he is so mad about her co-worker! Michael is getting possesive. I think he should stop before she become bothered by it.
Theit date was great! And Michael calling her princess is so cute.
HAHA Michael getting scold at the shop was hilarious!
They went to see Rome and Juliet! I remember when i see the movie with Leonardo Dicaprio and Clare Danes, it was just so amazing and that's Des'ree song is just so EVERYTHING! You make me shed a tear girl! Even though it's nothing compare to how i cried during the movie :)
What he told her during the play was so romantic and the kiss at the beach was steeeeeamy! I knew from the beginning that he was about to go down if you know what i mean

It's funny how the "I Love you" word cockblocked Michael hahaha! Nita seemed to be ready! I think he is afraid to make love and not having sex like he usually does with her.
WOW that was a big and eventful chapter! I LOVE IT! I can't wait from your next update ;)



Author's Response:

HEY Annie!! :) Oh yeah sweet isnt it? :p yeah girl Whenever I saw Omer Bhatti I see those incerdibly exact dark brown eyes and it make me speechless. LOL! You are right Annie but well you will see soon ;) hehe OH YEAH I saw the movie too. In fact I like the one with Leonardo and Clare than the british movie. I cry everytime I watch the movie and plays. Its just amazing. Wow... I really did? Oh so sorry girl. Wow THANKS SO MUCH Annie :) LMAO Mike's a coward when it comes to feelings lol! You are absolutely right. He doesnt want sex anymore he wants to love and to be loved. :) We'll see soon don't worry! Next update is  very SOOOON!!! :D Oh Thank you for the gif! You weakenned my knees by giving an eyeful of mischeivious Ryan Renolds !! Thanks again Pyt. Lots of love <3 xx

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Date: Dec 24, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: ♥ Chapter 1: Dawn of the Dusk ♥

This video is just so funny! GOD, Michael saying je ne sais quoi is the cutest thing EVER! You just made my day, well my night since it's way toooo late in France x)
"Tell me. If there another woman? I'd like to know. If there another woman? Tell me, tell me"
"Well..."
"Don't tell me!"
"GET A HOLD ON YOURSELF WOMAN"
Priceless :)

This video makes me want to listen to some Diana Ross now! I'm going to spend the entire night playing Muscles !



Author's Response:

LOL Ikr? Mike is too cute when he said that! That's my favorite part too lol! A kid barely thirteen doing a comedy sketch like that without laughing is definitely something else! I just wish he had acted more... you know more films! It would have been amazing!! <3 xx