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Member Since: Sep 07, 2012
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Michael and Maila are young struggling parents. Michael works hard at two jobs and Maila stays at home and watches their two kids; one the youngest which they can't really afford. Debts begin to get higher, funds begin to get lower and almost anything else that can happen falls upon this couple. Soon they begin to fight for a home and the sanity of their family. When will they realize that things will get better if they just hold each other's hand?
Categories: Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Family, Song Fics, Bad: 1986-1990
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5121 Read Count: 6307
[Report This] Published: Sep 27, 2011 Updated: Nov 19, 2012
Reviewer: greenlemonade Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 19, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: One Good Friend Is Better Than None

I loved this chapter and janet is an amazing friend to her. :)



Author's Response: Thank you so much!! Much love!

Summary:

Skyler was a small time girl who landed a job at a new york bank. One day her whole world changed. It was the day she met F.B.I's most wanted. Michael Jackson

WARNING! THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE AND GRAPHIC SITUATIONS.  

THANK YOU GUYS SO MUCH FOR GIVING US OVER 600 REVIEWS! WE ARE SO GLAD YOU ARE ENJOYING THIS STORY. YOU GUYS ARE AWESOME!!!


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Horror, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 145091 Read Count: 131051
[Report This] Published: May 25, 2012 Updated: May 11, 2016
Reviewer: greenlemonade Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Continue pleazzzee!



Author's Response: I will!

Heavy by YANAgirl07 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 45]
Summary:

 

Being with you and being part of your life was like a dream come true for me. You were everything that I ever looked for in someone, everything I’ve ever wanted.

But in the middle of that dream I started to wake up, only to realise the nightmare I’d just walked into...

With your background and with everything going on, I couldn’t say that I didn’t expect it... I just didn’t think that it would be this bad.

The only thing I wanted was to desperately save you from this nightmare. I thought I could do it. I thought that I could rip you away from this horrible place that you were forced to call reality.

I knew from that moment that I was asking for trouble.

The last thing I’d ever want to do is hurt you. So I kept your secrets to myself. The secrets that you fought so hard to hide. The ones that you kept hidden away in the darkest pit of your life; to never be exposed. I knew how fragile you really were, so I kept silent...

And my silence...

Might end up costing you your life...


Categories: Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Suspense
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36949 Read Count: 5495
[Report This] Published: Sep 08, 2012 Updated: Mar 24, 2013
Reviewer: greenlemonade Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Sep 13, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Trust

continue.

Reviewer: greenlemonade Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 20, 2012 Title: Chapter 11: The Party

Oh no.. wonder what will go down at Michael's house? ;) but anywho I hope she will be ok. Can't wait for more.

Summary:

King Michael Jackson is in search of a wife, He is asking of all the women to come to the castel and bring a gift to define who they really are. Kasondra is a poor woman who has pretty much nothing. The people around her are telling her to go to the king. At the same time she feels like she wont make it, will the king choose her?

read with me and find out.

One Night With The King

 


Categories: Adventure, Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5975 Read Count: 1491
[Report This] Published: Sep 18, 2012 Updated: Nov 01, 2012
Reviewer: greenlemonade Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Continue!

Reviewer: greenlemonade Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

She shouldn't think so low herself beliving that she's not his type.

Reviewer: greenlemonade Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Lovely and I like her dress and the white rose.

Continue please!

Stripper Turned by Orphan Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 60]
Summary:

 

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 Warning A.K.A Michael Jackson is a force to be reckoned with. One of the top mafia and gang leaders in the United States Of America. If you ever get on his bad side you can dig yourself a grave because your as good as dead meat. Everyone who is MENTALLY SANE does not cross his path. Warning owns a strip club called Warning's Diamonds because only the baddest ladies strip there. That's where thick headed Allii Reverace A.K.A Mz. Yummy works. She's her own independent woman and she would gladly tell you this. She is NOBODY'S wifey, prostitute, ho or girlfriend. Stripping is all its ever gonna be. But when quiet but evil Warning walks in to check out his club one night Allii's job and maybe life could be on the line.

Michael IS NOT famous in this story...well...music wise that is ;) 

I WOULD LIKE TO SEND A SPECIAL THANK YOU TO MEEECHVEEE FOR MY WONDERFUL BANNER :) :) Now Warning and Mz. Yummy got class :D Thank you Thank you THANK YOU I can't say it enough :D


Categories: Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Suspense
Characters: None
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 28943 Read Count: 10586
[Report This] Published: Oct 10, 2012 Updated: May 06, 2013
Reviewer: greenlemonade Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jan 07, 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I love this story a lot it reminds me of a cute and fluffy gangster story. They are so cute with each other please continue with this.

Author's Response:

thanks :)

Reviewer: greenlemonade Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jan 07, 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Yes I love this a lot you've earned yourself a fans. I like how you make this serious but at the same time with humor and sweetness. It's not over the gang stuff and that's overrated on this site anyway.

I love how unique this is.. I don't have to get mad or sad I could just laugh and bug with them. Please carry on this never stop and thank you! :)

Author's Response:

THANK YOU SOOO MUCH the message you wrote has just encouraged me...I try to make my stories as uniques as possible and your reviews just brought a smile to my face :)

 

Summary:

 

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Much gratitude and love to meeechveee for the beautiful banner!!!! :)

 

It was the best thing that would ever happen to me. And it would become better and better. But..there was this little detail, that kinda ruined the whole thing. I feel both happy and miserable. Lucky and terrified. Where will this go??

It's just so painful...


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Self-Harm
Series: None
Chapters: 119 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 127974 Read Count: 49724
[Report This] Published: Oct 12, 2012 Updated: Sep 19, 2015
Reviewer: greenlemonade Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Oh no I wonder what will happen next? She having the baby now? Is this for real?


Continue Continue!!

Author's Response:

Next chapter is on its way!! 

Reviewer: greenlemonade Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Um hm some sudden feelings is coming back lol now with a start off of complimenting one another. Maybe a good start and lawed I hope Angie learned her lesson for now to never jump conclusions, cause she lose the ones who truely loves her.



Author's Response:

Let's hope everything goes okay!! <3

Reviewer: greenlemonade Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I read this whole story and I love it. Always continue this.



Author's Response:

Thank uuu, so much!!! I'm glad you like it!!

I hope you like the new chapter as well!! Much lovee!! <3

Reviewer: greenlemonade Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh nooo she's gonna get drunk. Tatiana is really getting on my nerves now. Why can't Michael see that she likes him?

Continue please!

Reviewer: greenlemonade Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 19, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Ugh :( I would want to leave the tour in that case. I wouldn't able to handle them flaunting there love around me. And I would make Michael wonder why I'm leaving the tour for? He would get so curious and upset and start begging me to stay. I would most definitley make him yern for me. Continueeee!



Author's Response:

You certainly have a point!! But I think Angie will think of another way of making Michael curious, and constantly worried!!!

I won't say nothing more!! I hope you like the next chapters too, and thank you so much!!!

<3 <3 <3

Reviewer: greenlemonade Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 19, 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I was soooo happy that you updated this. I'm always looking for an update lol one of my most favorite stories on the site. Omg Angie broke down right in front of him:/ I know she wasn't gonna tame herself around him. And what? Michael thinks he's in love with Tatiana? That's what he thinks and ima leave it at that ;) He's secretly in love with Angie and don't know it yet :P I want more please sorry if I'm begging to so much. I'm just hooked.