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Reviewer: LS15 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2018 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 1 WHEN WE FIRST MET

hey i get the feeling english is your second language. i relate to that. I know this story is complete already but for future stories you might wanna consider getting an editor.

Reviewer: Badgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 02, 2016 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 51 DADDY

Chissà quando posterai la storia precedente per sapere come proseguirà

Reviewer: Badgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 02, 2016 10:11 am Title: Chapter 51 DADDY

Finalmente dopo che Lisa Sideah lo hanno voluto per i soldi è diventato papà insieme a Susan l'unica lo a amato veramente.  Hai riscritto la storia perché non trovo più i miei commenti nei capitoli



Author's Response:

no no, this is not the right story! I accidentally updated on this VERY old version of the story. The real story has not been updated yet, Im sorry that it confused you. Michael isnt a father yet in the actual story.

Reviewer: Love of sexy michaels life Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 20, 2015 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 49

The ages are very hilarious in the last chapter she was 24 going to 25 and Michael was 37 now in this chapter 3 years later she is 24 and Michael is 39 how is that? anyway I love the story, you are one cool writer

Author's Response:

hahah, well thanks for the compliment but I'm not perfect with numbers XD Or maybe they are vampires, who knows XD

Reviewer: Suzzanna Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2013 08:55 am Title: Chapter 1 WHEN WE FIRST MET

I love this story are you going to continue ? any ways thanx 

Reviewer: jacksonfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 09, 2013 01:35 am Title: Chapter 50 " Why are you still so slim? "

I'm so happy that Susan is finally pregnant.They're both so happy now!

Reviewer: jacksonfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 28, 2013 08:41 am Title: Chapter 49

Hmm regarding to your last sentence and the fact they're trying for already 3 years, I would say that Susan is infertile...I hope not.

If it's the case, I really hope they won't break up...Even if they love each other very much, Michael wants children so...

Reviewer: MJrulzBiebersuxs Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2013 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 48 YOUR DEEPEST WISH

Hi Stranger lol. I hope you had a wonderful Christmas & New Year. I hope you had a wonderful vacation and i hope you caught up on much needed sleep & relaxaton. Yay Susan is going to have Michael's baby. Well since that is going to happen i would like to give you a sugesstion for names, If its a boy the name could be Josh or Prince & Blankets name, If its a girl the name could be Paris or Nicole. Its Your Story so you can do whatever. I Hope you like my suggestions. Aww the story is going to end? How many more chapters are their going to be till the end. Well im glad your back i would literally check this story everyday to see if you update a chapter. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.

Reviewer: jacksonfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2013 04:41 am Title: Chapter 48 YOUR DEEPEST WISH

Oh here it goes, they're working on having a baby!! It's great!

Maybe they will have triplets :D

Reviewer: jacksonfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2013 09:33 am Title: Chapter 47 NIGHT WITH YOU

Girl, I'm so happy you're back.

Susan and Michael didn't change, still in love and naughty just like before.

And it seems that Susan is now ready to have a baby...let's see if Mike will be ok but I'm sure he will.

Happy New Year sweety!!



Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hope I will be able to update more often. You're right, super in love and naughty like before ;) I hope you enjoy the next chapter sweety XD Happy new year to you too! Is there a way we could communicate together? I'd love you speak french with you, so maybe I could learn to speak a bit better... :/ tell me, bye <3

Reviewer: jacksonfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2012 09:38 am Title: Chapter 46 I WANNA MARRY YOU LIKE CRAZY

I can't believe Michael didn't believe Susan right from the start...I know he's pretty insecure with all the things he lived, but I thought that Susan showed him enough that he could really trust her.

I'll be on vacations too for two weeks.Happy holidays and have fun.

See you when you'll be back :)

Reviewer: MJrulzBiebersuxs Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2012 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 46 I WANNA MARRY YOU LIKE CRAZY

WOW Their going to tie the knot finaly ^_^ im really happy for them. I hope u have fun on your vacation. I can hardly wait untill you have the chance to update again. Lots Of L.O.V.E.

Author's Response: thank you as much and you know what ill write during my vaction and if i find a wifi restaurant or so ill try to upload. i really dont want you guys to be waiting that long so i try my best XD

Reviewer: jacksonfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2012 08:29 am Title: Chapter 45 I LOVE

First I'm so happy you're back with this story that I really like.

Michael and Susan are just meant to be. I'm so excited that they get married, soon I hope.

This chapter was really cute with Michael, pleasing his girl. I think it was on of my favorite chapter :)

Reviewer: MJrulzBiebersuxs Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 01, 2012 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 45 I LOVE

Hi welcome back i hope you did good on your final's and i hope you are enjoying your break. I Loved This chapter i could not stop reading it. And when i was reading this i was listing to Fall Again lol. OMG i hope Susan and Michael gets married because they are a great couple and they are the defition of True LOVE

Author's Response: What a nice review b25; I just woke up and read this im so happy now, you made my day. Thank you for the wishings for my finals, I did great! Awww sweet that you were listening to fall again when Michael sang it in the story I love that song XD thank you for telling that Susan and Michael are the definition of true love to you that means sooooo much to me b25; I saw you are a member since march, did you already read the whole story so far? A big THANK YOU b25;

Reviewer: jacksonfan Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2012 01:33 am Title: Chapter 44

What does he want to ask her?...Update soon please, I want to know!! lol

It was a very good chapter, it's great that Michael opened his heart on his skin disorder and on how he felt toward his sexual sensitivity...

I'm happy your story is back :)



Author's Response: Im so happy you likes it and yeah.what does mike wanna ask her? Youll find out soon. and yes it was good he spoke about the things that bother him with her, thank you so much love for all the support b25;

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