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Reviewer: neptuneblue23 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jun 13, 2018 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 1 Instructions

My name is Melissa and I want you to do You Rock My World. I’m a white girl, 22 years old and my story is pretty much like the short film. Except I’m with a few friends, celebrating us graduating college. I graduated with a degree in dancing. Michael and his friend Chris flirt with all of us. The only thing I don’t want is the bar fire. Some guys do harass us but Michael and Chris stop them. Michael finally convinces me to go back to his place cause it’s late and you know the rest. ;)

Reviewer: TatianaJackson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 07, 2013 04:45 pm Title: Chapter 4 THE WAY YOU MAKE ME FEEL

FAN OF MICHAEL JACKSON AND TATIANA THUMBTZEN!

Are you?

I have stories about them.

Reviewer: TatianaJackson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 07, 2013 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 12 JUST GOOD FRIENDS

Who smacked Tatiana's ass?

Michael is crying 

:(

Make another Michael and Tatiana fanfic.

Reviewer: ThrillerEraSlave Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2013 03:08 am Title: Chapter 19 BABY BE MINE PART 2

Do the lady in my life :o

Thriller Era <3 Like. Make it...extremely sexy, Michael's in control ;)

Well that's pretty much it, oh and the girl's name is Katie .

Thank you 

Reviewer: YANAgirl07 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2012 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 17 BAD

OMJ! I Love these short stories! You're an amazing writer!

Would you do a short story for: Heartbreaker?

Pretty please! I think you'd come up with somethign good for it! :)



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Reviewer: Illusion Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2012 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 17 BAD

I know I've already suggested "She Drives Me Wild" and "Working Day and Night", but I saw that no one had suggested another song yet... So I see that
I Can't Help It
has not been done yet.

...And maybe having Michael spank a girl wouldn't be too bad either. (;

Keep it up! :D



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Reviewer: jacksonfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 02, 2012 09:23 am Title: Chapter 17 BAD

Wow I liked it girl...

Michael torturing himself was so sexy...I think she stayed calm rather long...I would have been really turned on much before she did lol.

Sweety, I updated my story if you want...please try to catch up :-)

Reviewer: 2human4nature Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 31, 2011 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 1 Instructions

Bad!! Mikey can be a bad boy! Yum! Lol

Author's Response:

Yummieee , yess BAD is a perfect idea <3 That will be the next story, mike the bad boy <3

Reviewer: mjjfan4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 28, 2011 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 15 WORKIN' DAY AND NIGHT

Where's Dangerous or PYT or Shake Your Body?



Author's Response:

Wow, all perfect ideas ... just nobody asked for these until now :)

Great choice, I'll pic one soon and write the next story - thank you for reviewing <3

Reviewer: Illusion Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 25, 2011 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 1 Instructions

You did a great job with She Drives Me Wild!! :D

Hmm... I'm going to give you another suggestion... It doesn't look like you've done Lady In My Life yet...

That, or maybe Workin' Day and Night..

L-O-V-E.. <3  and Happy Holidays! (;

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much <3

The suggestions are perfect, I picked WORKIN' DAY AND NIGHT, I'll upload in a few minutes, was great fun to write :D

Thank you and happy hollydays back :*

Reviewer: Illusion Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 21, 2011 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 13 SHE DRIVES ME WILD part1

I. LOVE. THIS!!!!!! :D

I can't wait for part 2!! Please update quickly!!!!

L-O-V-E..<3



Author's Response:

Heii, thanx :D I'm very glad to hear that from you, because you suggested SHE DRIVES ME WILD

Part 2 's comming, very soon ... :D L-OOOO-V-E back sweetheart ;)

Reviewer: mikespyt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 20, 2011 10:18 am Title: Chapter 1 Instructions

Great job!!! Loved it! I also love reading about Mike and Tati.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much mikespyt, I'm so happy to hear from you again. <3

I also loooove M&T ... they would've been so cute together in " reality "    :)))

Reviewer: Illusion Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 20, 2011 09:27 am Title: Chapter 12 JUST GOOD FRIENDS

I have to say... I love these stories!!!! :)

And since this is my first review and I haven't suggested anything... How about She Drives Me Wild?

L-O-V-E.. <3



Author's Response:

That you for this nice review, really made my day <3

And the suggestion about She Drived Me Wild is just perfect ;) I'm absolutely for this story !!!

That'll be next, you gave me a perfect vision, illusion !

much love back <3

Reviewer: Meikel-Tatey16 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 20, 2011 05:44 am Title: Chapter 12 JUST GOOD FRIENDS

Poor Mikey :( 

Why didn`t he tell her, that he loved her? 

A wonderful chapter :) 

Pls go on ;)
Mike and Tati = <3



Author's Response:

Michael don't wanted to distrub her...because she always said " best friend " ans she did it for one reason...

Do you have another song wish ?

and that you so much for reviewing....and sorry that I needed such a long time ... <3

Reviewer: iloveyoumj Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 09, 2011 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 1 Instructions

hmmm  think yu should do dont walk away i love tht song



Author's Response:

Oh my gosh, I love this song too. brings always tears in my eyes... very very good idea I'll do that afther LIBERIAN GIRL

thank you very much for reviewing <3 !!!!

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