Date: Aug 02, 2024 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm really enjoying this story and your character so far:)
Date: Jul 01, 2024 11:00 am Title: Chapter 4
Oh goodness, it’s happening. I can’t wait to se What is going on next
Date: Jun 07, 2024 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 4
Uhoh, I’m curious how Alicia’s reaction will be in case things were to get heated. Can’t wait for the next one!
[Report This]Date: Jun 04, 2024 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was a great introduction! I am excited to see how the story between Michael and Aicia. You have a clear and easy writing style. Great work!
Date: May 19, 2024 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
Welcome back
Date: May 06, 2024 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter. I can tell that you are very passionate about Mike and very knowledgeable about him, too. You t all adds to Write a great realistic story. Congrats! I remember Michael indeed such an encounter with a police officer and he hated that the officer suggested that he stole the car just because he is black .
Please update fast. I love ?? your work
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! I'm so happy you're enjoying the story! I would love to update but the website is broken and won't let me update anything :( I keep getting an error message. Hopefully it'll be fixed soon! Again, thank you so much!
Date: May 06, 2024 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh my gosh, what a refreshing story.!!!! I am in love with it. Thank so much for posting it a staking the time to write ??. I gotta tell you your Michael character acts and talks just like how I believe MJ did. I think it’s almost scary ho realistic this story appears to be because of your wonderful choice of dialogues and obvious talent in writing . Exquisitely written so far. I can hardly wait to read more. Cute
Date: Jan 22, 2024 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 4
OOP! This ended on such a cliffhanger! Okay, starting off, Michael and his dang (horrible) disguises. I dunno who he thought he was fooling, half the time he was still wearing them dang loafers! Smh. He's adorable tho. I loved Alicia teasing him, lol! They so cute. You do a fantastic job of showing the existing love they have from their previous relationship. It feels like there are so many things left unsaid, so many emotions still lingering just with the small interactions and the dialogue they have. There's still so much love there beneath the hurt.
("This your car, boy?".) Oh, Lord, here we go with this foolishness! I'm intrigued so far by what you've written. I can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens to these two. Excited for more!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your in depth review! I really appreciate it and I can't wait to show more!
Date: Jan 22, 2024 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 3
These two crack me up. There's so much tension, but the little comments and actions, like Alicia hanging the phone on that fool, got me laughing. "I love her, but...I'm in love with you". WHY is he so good at this? Like, he's charming the hell outta me and we only on chapter 3.
("Ok look, this conversation is going nowhere fast. I dunno what you want me to say. I dunno, man..."."...ok".) This one got me. This was hilarious. Their back-and-forths are great. He would absolutely drive me nuts, lmao!
("Is your little client here by chance?".
They both looked off to the right of them, nervous smiles on their faces.) They ain't slick at all! LOL
("We are friends. And I love you".) Look, I know he broke your heart, Alicia, and I know we only on chapter 3...but girl, take him back. Or I will gladly take him off your hands. Like this man is so fine and sweet even through words, I need him.
Date: Jan 22, 2024 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oooh, girl, so much has happened this chapter! Michael really would be the type to smooth talk his way back into anyone's good graces??”even the girl whose heart he broke! Love him ranting about his one grammy, and Alicia curiously going to get the album (and absolutely loving it). Also loving La Toya and Janet's relationship with Alicia. Them setting her up and Michael coming in had me cheesing like a fool. Michael be too dang charismatic. How you gonna break a girl's heart and come right on in all smooth and sweet, like, quit it, she's supposed to be mad at you!!! Lol!
[Report This]Date: Dec 29, 2023 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 4
Love it!
Author's Response:
Thank you!! :)
Date: Dec 28, 2023 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 2
I loooove how you write Michael. He just seems so adorable and sweet. I was not expecting a kiss already! That gave me all the feels. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
And I can't wait to write more. Thank you for reading! <3
Date: Dec 27, 2023 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
Only one chapter in so far but I'm loving it! I can't wait to read the rest. I'm really liking your writing as well as the pacing- I hate having to wait like a million chapters before a story hooks me in. I'm interested to read about what happened between Alicia and Michael. Awesome work!
Author's Response:
I'll get into their backstory soon. Thank you so much for reading!
Date: Dec 23, 2023 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 4
Wow... now Michael don't you go pulling out the celebrity card.
Author's Response:
LOL! Ikr
[Report This]Date: Oct 13, 2023 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 3
Definitely wanna see where their relationship goes. Great chapter!
Author's Response:
I'm curious to see what I'll come up with its next. Thanks for reading! :)