Date: Nov 26, 2022 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 5
I love this story! The way you write is so unique and I love the way you describe the sci fi themes. Org is so cute and Eo is so sassy, it’s just the way I imagine him lol. I look forward to more!
Haha, thank you MoonRiver22 for that comment. I also see Eo the same way, since watching him in Captain Eo. I am happy you look forward to more. I want the next update to be a full completion of the story, so I am working on it. Thanks so much for taking the time to leave feedback. :)
Date: Mar 13, 2022 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Your writing is so beautiful! I love how you write descriptions. So elegantly and unique. I love this story plot and can’t wait to read more!
Hello radiatethelove, thank you so much! I hope you enjoy the rest (whenever I can find a chance to make a new chapter).
Date: Jan 30, 2022 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm curious to see how EO's character develops in the story as it progresses! Great work!
Hi Storyteller Juneau. It will definitely change for the better I think. Thank you for your comment and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
Date: Jan 30, 2022 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 2
Great story, cant wait for moree
Hi Strawberry01, thank you so much for the review. More soon.
Date: Jan 07, 2022 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 1