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Reviewer: MJzNubianQueen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2020 11:00 am Title: Chapter 16 : Oops, I did it again

Urgh...can he make up his mind already! Back and forth between the two is hard to keep up with.
I didnt expect him to dog her so soon. Curious as to what next.

Author's Response:

Michael's heart didn't expect to dog her so soon but his second head did lol!

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2020 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 12 - I wanna dance with somebody , I wanna feel the heat with somebody

Michael is so focused on one thing that it's almost a turnoff. Both of these people need to calm the fuck down... and then hit their groove, many, many times ;)



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And Georgia told him if he wanted a one night stand, he should look for that somewhere else! Now he is in too deep

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2020 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 11 : Just call on me, whether day or nightI'll never leave

Argh - Georgia, this is not a reason to have sex with someone!!!



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For Georgia, the equation is simple : the bag > sex with Michael

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2020 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 10 : Mr. Telephone man, there's something wrong with my line

That there was some true magic!

It was great to see her share a genuine vulnerability with him. Georgia's softer/more vulnerable emotions are clearly tightly guarded, though not as much as her ego lets her think they are. I'm very curious how her endometriosis may impact his perception of her...



Author's Response:

Let's just see if Georgia is ever going to talk abour her endometriosis with Michael first! He already cares for her without having a put a name on it, it will only intensifies when she tells him everything IMO

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Date: May 05, 2020 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 15 : Baby, would you mind touching me? Ever so slowly...

Hmmm....lol

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2020 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 9 : This is a story about control

Is it horrible that I'm so relieved that this is the outcome and NOT a massacre scene on that blanket?

 

Also, it sounds like she is discovering his pain pills aren't the typical ones...



Author's Response:

"Is it horrible that I'm so relieved that this is the outcome and NOT a massacre scene on that blanket?" LMAOOOO! I would have put a TW because God knows it is triggering to me lmao. Trauma of being a woman.

Who knows? Georgia is so fixated on something else I don't think she even noticed lol. Money over everything lol

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2020 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 8 : Who's calling the shots?

I love the build up! For the last several chapters I could have just written 'DANG' and it would have captured everything.



Author's Response:

LMAO! Michael needs to learn that just because it is a nice and easy ride with Tatiana does not mean it will be the same with Georgia ;-)

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2020 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 7 : Call me some time, please bang my line you’ll know I answer

After three days without news of Michael, she concluded he was a deceitful horny asshole. 

Yessssss!

I've missed how well you create a fast and fiesty banter between characters! I just wish I could take a day and reread this and all of your old stuff



Author's Response:

Thank youuuu :') I've been re-reading some of my stories and cracking up myself (even though my eyes bled from the number of typos lmao)

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2020 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 6 : Never As Good As the First Time

A. What a wonderfully sensual and vivid chapter!

B. Just the right amount of sneakiness :)

C. WTF!@? Is he reliving sex with another woman while at the table with her? For shame!! He deserves those blue balls.



Author's Response:

Sneaky and sensual, perfect words to describe Georgia lol!

Michael wants the cake and to eat it too, you already know!

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2020 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 5 : I hope that you're the one. If not, you are the prototype

Ouch - that took a painful twist!



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Hell yeah, and from the few chapters you've read, I know you know Michael is not here to only play monopoly with Georgia lol !

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2020 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 4 : Lights, Camera, Action!

I'm SO happy that you are still writing! I loved all the cute chuckle-worthy moments in this chapter. From the play on Independant Woman to “Since you like doing those hip thrust so much... Yeah, I’m sure”

“Did you get the girl?” Georgia asked, getting up from the chair “I need to know so that next time an homeless man gives me an advice en Skid Row, I will actually stop and listen” - I'm rolling hahaha

“Yeah” he shrugged “An advice from the homeless man. You wanted to know if I got the girl, right?” he tilted his head to the side “You tell me” - DANG! I have so many inappropriate comments to make...



Author's Response:

WAIT, let me go fix this typo real quick

 

Santana GIFs | Tenor

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Date: May 04, 2020 03:22 am Title: Chapter 15 : Baby, would you mind touching me? Ever so slowly...

The part about Karen and makeup thing is a fact, that women just couldn’t.....

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Like... You could just tell she was not qualified when Janet Zeitoun did Michael's make up!

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2020 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 3 : I wonder if you look both ways when you cross my mind

Fresno = redneckish, heavy gang activity, and industrial. BUT not too far from some good snowboarding 

"He couldn't have both" -> damn straight!

i love the creative way you linked in the costume element! Eager to see how this develops xo



Author's Response:

I don't know if I'll ever visit California but if I do, I'll make sure to skip Fresno lmao!

"He couldn't have both" -> damn straight! --> Michael can also be a tiny bit delusional so you can guess he will not be thinking like this much more longer. As for the costume thing, I could not resist lol!

Thank you so much for the comment :) I am SO happy you are readin DAF :)!

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2020 06:40 am Title: Chapter 2 : Hello stranger, it's been a minute since we last kicked it

So Tatiana came to basically just humble brag? Smfh I mean I know she invited Georgia, but it was in a "look at how great I am" kinda way.

 

"Is insulting people your only talent?" 

If you can do it lowkey and with class, it's a very very valuable talent *brushes shoulder*



Author's Response:

You already know Tatiana came to stun on the girls with her new romance lmao!

"If you can do it lowkey and with class, it's a very very valuable talent *brushes shoulder" --> IKR! Esecially if it's so lowkey that the person you are talking to don't even notice. It's talent!

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2020 06:03 am Title: Chapter 1 : I Grew Up A Little Girl With Dreams

Fiiiinally getting a chance to read! You'd think with a stay at home order I'd have more time. First thing I've had a chance to read on MJF in years (no exaggeration!) xox

 

"Nothing in Fresno". --> wawawa-wait Fresno in CA!? You mean the place I get bored of just driving through? This is probably the smallest town I've heard you include in a story. Super curious about this one (though I greatly appreciate you not picking Bako/Bakersfield)

"FUCK YOU just a little bit then" --> I'm rolling! 

 

Missed you and your fire humor <3

 



Author's Response:

Hello Redone :)

I am so happy you are taking the time to read this story :)! I am definitely taking this time off the office to finish my FFs! Well, I'm focusing on this one first lol.

Hahaha! All I know about Fresno is that Toni Childs from Girlfriends was from there and she hated it lol! Considering Georgia is my version of Toni Childs, it's fitting!

I missed you too Redone! <3

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