Date: Dec 09, 2021 06:27 pm Title: Secret Service
Michael let his insecurities from his past mess up his future!! He didn't have to snap at her like that but also he's drunk and jealous but I feel she's using this as an opportunity to walk away because of Michael's offer. They need to get their shit together!!! Patiently waiting for the next chapter â¤ï¸
Date: Dec 03, 2021 07:14 am Title: Black Out
Nooooooooooooo ðŸ˜¢ðŸ¥ºðŸ˜¢ðŸ¥ºðŸ˜©ðŸ¥ºðŸ˜¢ðŸ˜© No Karima!!!! Omg my heart sank reading this. Both of them are not honest with each other!!! What's going on with Wade??!!! Something is going on, some type of betrayal!!!! Ugh this made me so sad ðŸ˜ž
Ughhh I know its so sad! Why do you think Karima left and yes Michael was pissed. Do you feel he had a right to be?
Date: Nov 01, 2021 05:12 am Title: The Hedonism II
Ok first of all, why does that shady Jeremy person sound like "Wade" to me. Also, why is Michael having a pi follow Karima ðŸ‘€ðŸ˜©ðŸ‘‹ðŸ¾ Michael what is going on with you? And what else are you hiding from Karima cuz I haven't forgotten that convo between you and TJ ðŸ˜© giving me heart failure. First of all, I couldn't go to hedonism so these girls are braver than me cuz I couldn't deal with naked people rubbing against me ðŸ˜‚ðŸ˜©ðŸ˜‚ðŸ˜ðŸ˜‚ðŸ¤£ðŸ˜ I think Karima really loves Michael. Also, how does this Jeremy guy know she has sex with older men.... I just know it's Wade ugh.
I love that this is a chapter I can relate to lol being Jamaican. It's really cool, never read a story about Michael based in Jamaica... when not based but has a chapter or two dedicated to my country. I don't like Karima's friends at all. Those women are toxic..... and only care about themselves and making it up the social ladder, really thinks she should leave the show and focus on her business and her relationship with Michael.
I cannot wait for the next update. Can't wait to see what the PI tells Michael .
Yep that Jeremy dude sounds shady as hell. I am wondering what Michael is going through. Why doesnt he trust Karima? Yea and Michael is def hiding something of his own. I wonder what it is? I think Karima loves Michael as well. I am so happy you can relate to the chapter! I am happy to represent your country well. I dont like Karima's friends either. They are toxic and very self serving. I also think they may be jealous too. She is better off on her own and being with Michael. Thank you dear I always appreciate your comments. It lets me know at least someone likes my story and I should keep going! xoxoxo I also appreciate your understanding in my late update xoxoxo
Date: Oct 31, 2021 05:29 pm Title: The Hedonism II
I am soooooo sooo glad you're back!!! I will reread to leave my comment on the chapter!! The funny thing about this is, I actually live in Jamaica ðŸ˜‚ðŸ˜‚ðŸ˜‚ðŸ˜‚ðŸ˜‚ðŸ˜‚
glad you're back â¤ï¸
Wow! Thank you soooo much that is super sweet of you! I am glad you are enjoying the story! I am happy to be back and will try my very best to update when I can and OMG wow that is soo cool you are from Jamaica!!!! I hope I am representing Jamaica the best as I could possibly. Its so beautiful there and the people there are lovely! I would love to go back some day! Thank you love! â¤ï¸
Date: May 24, 2021 02:26 pm Title: Secret Service
OMG!! I just know that everything will blow up in Kerima's face! I just feel like the other women are setting her up ðŸ˜ðŸ˜
Thanks dear! That is a good point. There does seem to be some undue influence the other girls have on Karima.
Date: Dec 11, 2020 10:23 am Title: Its All About Me
An update!!!!!! I been waiting for this!!!
Wades being sneaky af... as usual of course.
Aint he? He is a sleaze and he always got something sneaky up his sleeve. He got a child and a fiance the whole time SMH
Date: Aug 13, 2020 11:40 pm Title: Somethin' is Up
I donâ€™t think she should go to the trip, those girls are up to something. She doesnâ€™t need a stupid show to help her career, sheâ€™s a smart girl. I think Michael might genuinely be busy with the O2 tour but the whole money thing is still weird to me. AND WHY DID YOU END IT LIKE THAT WE WANT SPICE XD
I agree, I am skeptical about their intentions as well. Karima seems very hard working and driven. She doesn't need the show and knows what she wants and gurlllll lol that was just a lil taste of spice this chapter but there is more to come don't worry ;) LOL
Date: Aug 12, 2020 06:21 pm Title: Secret Service
You know, I like this! This is really solid yeah. I enjoy that it feels realistic, that just because you have chemistry, doesnâ€™t mean that everything is perfect immediately. Relationships take work and understanding and communication and I feel like a lot of authors have Michael and the lady fall immediately and then all the conflict is from outside sources. It feels like the story is driving the characters rather than the characters driving the story and I feel like youâ€™ve hit a good balance of letting the characters have established personalities and lives and allowing them to fall into a situation and the events flow from that. This is all really to say that Iâ€™m enjoying this so thank you for writing!
Awww thank you so much I really appreciate the compliments! :) I am so happy you are enjoying the story. Relationships definitly take time and can be very complex.