[Report This]Date: Apr 08, 2019 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 5
Wow. Just, wow. I did NOT expect that. Ummm...wow. Wow. Uh, okay--lmaooo! Only way to see what happens next is to find out in the next part! Evandler is a dirty dog, and this is very sad. I hope Smoke finds out what he's looking for, and I wonder how the two will cross paths.
[Report This]Date: Apr 08, 2019 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 4
This story makes me imagine the hell Michael had to go through in the final years of his life. Very surreal writing, here.
Date: Apr 08, 2019 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 3
The mystery in your writing just jumps off of the page! I've always been interested in the strangeness and hidden things of the world, most likely the elite. Your story hits all the right nails on the head for me to keep reading!
Author's Response:
Thank you, there is definitley plenty of strangeness in the next chapter for you to get tucked into :D! Your reviews are very motivational thank you for taking the time to review!
Date: Apr 08, 2019 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 2
I am so speechless at how deep your writing is! You leave clues for us to figure out what era this is in, and it all clicked when Smokey said "Chipolte" lmaooo! Love. This. Story!
Author's Response:
Hey! i'm really glad you like it so far! Perhaps i made a mistake adding in chipotle, i was referencing the actual pepper and not the place lol but it is set in the early 90's before the opening of Chipotle :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 08, 2019 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, you...can...write. I am completely speechless. I have no idea what's going on, but I want to find out what will happen next.
Date: Apr 08, 2019 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, you...can...write. I am completely speechless. I have no idea what's going on, but I want to find out what will happen next.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 07, 2019 01:17 am Title: Chapter 4
It's so full of tension, I love it! Can't wait to read more :) hope you'll update soon!
Author's Response:
Wait no longer! The next chapter is out ;)
[Report This]Date: Apr 05, 2019 08:55 am Title: Chapter 4
Keep up the good work, you’re a really great writer. Looking forward to the next update :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and commenting eVa :) Next update is out x
Date: Apr 04, 2019 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 4
Woooooo!!!!! Can’t wait for morrreee!!!! :)
Author's Response:
Hey, the next chapter is up x
[Report This]Date: Mar 26, 2019 08:43 am Title: Chapter 3
This is really good, really well written story. Please continue! Evander sounds so untrustworthy.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much and yes, Evander is a sneaky one ;)
[Report This]Date: Mar 21, 2019 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 2
It's getting even better. Please update soon!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing, new chapter is up! :)
Date: Mar 17, 2019 07:58 am Title: Chapter 2
good chapter please keep on goingï¼
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying :) Thanks for the review x
Date: Mar 15, 2019 02:24 am Title: Chapter 1
It's really promising, keep going! Can't wait to read more!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
Date: Mar 14, 2019 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Pleas update soon, this book seems interesting so far and it’s really good!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review :)! The next chapter has been updated.