This is a common premise for most young adult stories. Not saying that it's a bad one, and it does deviate from the standard Michael Jackson fictoon. I couldn't help but to LOL when Michael said, "Yeah, I'm tired as fuck too." It's a bit out of his character to deliberately swear like that, so he must've been seriously tired to not give a damn about manners XD. Anyways, the story has potential, so I'm following!

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