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Reviewer: LovingMichael Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2024 01:01 pm Title: "That girl--Tatiana."

This chapter is interesting and complex because it demonstrates a kind of toxicity in Michael's tsundere side. He finds himself ugly and wants to mask his "ugliness" by trying to be mean to her. I find it both sad and quite stupid to do this because it amounts to being mean to someone innocent and attacking them because you yourself don't have confidence in yourself. Basically: being mean for no apparent reason but hiding a lack of self-esteem.

I'm waiting to see how the subject will be approached.

Reviewer: LovingMichael Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2024 12:53 pm Title: New Neighbors

I loved this chapter! The illustration photos are already too magnificent, but what's more, I loved the budding chemistry between the two lovebirds (which, however, started off badly). :3

No negative points!

Reviewer: LovingMichael Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2024 12:45 pm Title: A Starry Night

I read the first chapter and I enjoyed it :) I was captivated by the cover (because I have been madly in love with Princess Tatiana since I was ten and a half) and so I landed on this fanfiction. The chapter is quite short but it's already sad enough.

Our heroine is therefore a motherless little girl living in one of the most dangerous cities in the country. It's already a very interesting plot and we then naturally ask ourselves the question: What will happen to our little Tati who lives in this cruel and hostile world for her?

The only negative point for me is that the sentences are too short. But apart from that, we feel the tension and the sadness, it's well written.

Eager to read what follows !

Reviewer: mdc20 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 12, 2022 06:07 pm Title: Friends?

haha typical Chris to be humorous and be trying to act as if he got game to women lol, 

Reviewer: mdc20 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 12, 2022 05:34 pm Title: A New Start

sarcastic remarks were nothing new to Michael Jackson lol, luv this chapter

Reviewer: mdc20 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 12, 2022 04:40 pm Title: "That girl--Tatiana."

poor tati , of only she had known when someone makes fun of you , they are either in love with you, or want to be you

Reviewer: mdc20 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 12, 2022 04:27 pm Title: First Day Jitters

omg , wow Michael is very different as a child in this story alright !!! I really couldnt imagine a younger Michael even stooping that low

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 26, 2020 10:57 am Title: Michael’s Prank

Hey girl, long time no see ! So glad you are back with an update. It has been tooooo for.... long. Where have you been all this time??
I enjoyed it thoroughly. Thank you. Hopefully Michael will act more mature around her now that he knows who she is...

Author's Response:

Ive been working and working out, catching up on Naruto and taking care of family and slackin off, i gotta stay consistent lmao!! Godddddd its been so long on here lmao and glad you enjoyed😁😁😁❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

 

Reviewer: KarenR63 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 21, 2019 12:22 pm Title: A Starry Night

This was amazing, can’t wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response:

Thank youuuuuuuuuu ❤😁

 

 

Thanxxxxxxxxxx for reviewingggg!!!!

Reviewer: lovinthethrill04 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2019 09:36 pm Title: The Laxative Prank:PT 1

omg this prank thoo they gon hav tha runs fr fr lol.  and tupac and aaliyah soo cutee omg! aww lil babiess 



Author's Response:

I wanted to do this for my senior prank but nahhhh i was a little chicken lmaoo and Tupac and Aaliyah definitely my cuteee babieessssss❤😂

 

Thanxxxxxxxxxxxx for reviewingggg!!!

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2019 12:37 pm Title: The Laxative Prank:PT 1

They are so mean😩

Author's Response:

Lmaoooo its just a prankkkk😏😂

 

Thanxxxxxxxx for reviewingggg

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2019 12:11 am Title: Changes

Poor Mike and Tati. I wonder when they will become friends and start treating each other with care and respect 😩😢

Author's Response:

...😏

Stay Tuned 

Thannxxxxxxx for rating and reviewing!!!!

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 08, 2019 11:14 pm Title: Ugly

Aww, this is heartbreaking. Just like in real life. I will never get beyond this. He was the most gorgeous handsome man on the planet. Why couldn’t he ever see this. His father did him so wrong 😩 I hope Tatiana will see through this charade of his fast to see the wounded self esteem and the little boy that he is to help him built his self confidence. Great but disturbing chapter. I wish Mike would stop calling Tati ugly. It certainly does not help his case. He obviously still doesn’t know that Tati is the girl from Gary🧐

Author's Response:

ALWAYS thought that  he was so beautiful, but was Joe's fault. Unfortunately, he still dont see that Tatiana is his longtime crush. Boys lol. It doesn't help. He need to chill out with calling her the 'ugly' word.


But we all she's aint ugly lmao 


Thanxxxxxxxx for rating and reviewing❤❤❤❤

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 05, 2019 09:35 pm Title: Right Where I Want You

Hey welcome back! It’s so good to have a new update. I really thought you deserted story. And it’s a very good update, too. Nice work! I really like how Michael is intrigued by Tatiana and how he’s trying to get her attention and how you are describing his inner feelings by doing so. It’s sad to read that Michael is so self-conscious and he thinks that he’s ugly. It breaks my heart. He has got this very soft side to him but no one has discovered it, yet. I hope it won’t take Tatiana and too long to find it once Michael’s ready to show it. Please get back in the swing and update more frequently. Thank you so much.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much and I'm glad to be back!! I could never leave this story hangin lol just really busy is all. New update will becoming soon😁

 

Thannxxxxxxx for reviewing❤❤❤

Reviewer: lovinthethrill04 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 20, 2019 08:33 am Title: He Knows

Ooh michael gon find out soon.. he might see her old picture or somethin.



Author's Response:

I dont knowwwwww. He just might lmao😂😂😂

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