Reviews For Forbidden Love
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Reviewer: LadyKeren Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 21, 2022 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 2 - "You are going over to Mr. Jackson’s house next week, whether you like it or not"

Is it me or is Holly's mother opportunistic?

Reviewer: LadyKeren Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 21, 2022 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Enter Holly Williams

This has a lot of potential to be a sweet story..the model you put up for Holly is beautiful. And every time I read about Michael sticking his tongue out I think of those pics from Bad era he did it..lol

I'd watch the change in tenses..but good job, I'll be reading this.

Reviewer: LadyStardust Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2022 04:14 am Title: Chapter 1 - Enter Holly Williams

Thank you for your story ????????

Reviewer: MJMVP Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2022 05:41 am Title: Chapter 33 - "Holly is the person for him...not Diana"

i am literally in love with this story! pls update soon! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HOLLY WILL DO WHEN SHE FINDS OUT WHAT MJ DID!

Reviewer: chloecass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 26, 2021 01:16 am Title: Chapter 33 - "Holly is the person for him...not Diana"

Just read this whole book. Absolutely loving it. I knew Diana would cause issues though. Hope you update soon.

Reviewer: chloecass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 23, 2021 05:47 am Title: Chapter 8 - "Until you find a house of your own…why don’t you stay here?”

Oh, I didn’t expect that. Looking forward to seeing how they navigate a new relationship while living together.

Reviewer: millymo08 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 21, 2021 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 33 - "Holly is the person for him...not Diana"

Ooh I can't wait to see what happens next! Great writing :)

Reviewer: chloecass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 15, 2021 04:21 am Title: Chapter 2 - "You are going over to Mr. Jackson’s house next week, whether you like it or not"

Love the story and enjoying the similarities between Michael and Holly

Reviewer: chloecass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 15, 2021 04:09 am Title: Chapter 1 - Enter Holly Williams

Love love love... looking forward to reading more

Reviewer: ctrlher Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 30, 2021 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Enter Holly Williams

Love this!

Reviewer: ctrlher Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 30, 2021 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Enter Holly Williams

Great start looking forward to reading this!

Reviewer: kingskid17 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 16, 2021 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 33 - "Holly is the person for him...not Diana"

I was so happy to log in and see you have updated.. I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter, though I'm even more curious and concerned about what happened back in New York.. Holly is going through a really tough time now; not to mention Joseph and his controlling nature getting to Michael. I have a feeling that something is quietly brewing as this story continues. Great job!

Author's Response: Oh my, thank you so much for your review. I I truly appreciate you reading and patiently waiting. I am continuing to write one chapter at a time. Be prepared. The next couple chapters will be jam packed! Thanks again!

Reviewer: Som_Som Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 13, 2021 08:54 am Title: Chapter 1 - Enter Holly Williams

Loving it

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I just added a new chapter. I hope you enjoy.

Reviewer: Som_Som Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 13, 2021 08:54 am Title: Chapter 1 - Enter Holly Williams

Loving it

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I truly appreciate it!

Reviewer: kingskid17 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2021 08:45 am Title: Chapter 32 - Joyous Holidays and Bitter Regrets

I've been enjoying this story so far! What a cliffhanger to end on; I hope there is more to come. I'm looking forward to reading much more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! There definitely is for sure. It just takes time getting it all from my head onto the paper. LOL. Please stay tuned!

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