Date: Apr 17, 2023 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Enter Holly Williams
This story needs to come back. This book keeps me wanting to go from chapter to chapter without pause. Like the exploration of interracial love during the 70s/80s. Holly and Michael’s situation with delving into their sexual attraction for each other, topic of Michael being a Jehovah Witness and Holly being put under pressure to kind of “ fit into that”… Her difficult relationship with her mom and how she finds a mother in her Aunt is sweet and warming. I like this!
Date: Aug 21, 2022 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Enter Holly Williams
This has a lot of potential to be a sweet story..the model you put up for Holly is beautiful. And every time I read about Michael sticking his tongue out I think of those pics from Bad era he did it..lol
I'd watch the change in tenses..but good job, I'll be reading this.
Date: Aug 16, 2021 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 33 - "Holly is the person for him...not Diana"
I was so happy to log in and see you have updated.. I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter, though I'm even more curious and concerned about what happened back in New York.. Holly is going through a really tough time now; not to mention Joseph and his controlling nature getting to Michael. I have a feeling that something is quietly brewing as this story continues. Great job!
Author's Response: Oh my, thank you so much for your review. I I truly appreciate you reading and patiently waiting. I am continuing to write one chapter at a time. Be prepared. The next couple chapters will be jam packed! Thanks again!