[Report This]Date: Dec 30, 2017 03:22 pm Title: XIII
I have time to read this!!!
YAS OMFG A DAY IN THE LIFE OF PAUL!!! What a treat! Haha of course Paul needs a king-sized bed! He's not even just a ladies man; he belongs in the playboy mansion XD. Man, Joel is annoying af tho. Now - is Paul there to shop for clothes, or for girls? LOL. Their little scheme so Paul can chat up Georgina was brilliant omg. Paul should legit pay Joel for agreeing to it haha. Plus, it worked, so...!
YES HIS EGO IS HIGH. He starts calling her 'Dear Georgie', what a charmer lol! Clearly Paul has quite a reputation, but he defff lives up to it. I already told you I wasn't expecting to see Michael and Eva in this chapter but that's the beauty of this chapter - what I love most about this is that it's a look into what Paul does all day, leading up to when he finally settles and finds time to spend with his two best fwends, Mike and 'The Famous Eva'. It's also just interesting because we hear about Paul talk about his women and all, but actually reading and seeing what goes on behind the scenes, as I did in this chapter, has made it my favourite by FAR.
You already know I've loved this Paul since day 1 and you knowww I wanted this, so thank you soooo much for making it happen! It seems like I'm asking one thing after another from you but PAUL NEEDS HIS OWN SPINOFF SEQUEL-THING OF HIM AND HIS PURSUE OF GEORGIA LOLLL. But that's a different story (quite literally). Loved this so much, Lorry! <3 Was so worth the wait.
Author's Response:
yass I'm surpised Paul hasn't even started his own playboy mansion and made his money minus the shady stuff lmao. well Paul is a smart cunning guy behind all that gentleman manner lol. he already calls poor georgie she ain't feeling him but she will learn to deal with him eventually. Paul always has time for his friends even when he should be getting his work done and getitng ready to take over from a business smh. gosh i'd love to make a spinoff for them but for now i'll have more filler chapters of paul's persuit for poor gegorie lmao. I'm glad you enjoyed it so much Onion!! <3
[Report This]Date: Dec 30, 2017 08:28 am Title: XIII
Lol Joel is a funny kid
Paul & Marissa are friendly to each other, not lol
I love Georgie she can handle Paul lol
Lol he keeps teasing Michael and Eva smh lol but he's right they do make a cute couple
Author's Response:
At least Paul and his sister are on good terms at least lol. Joel is the kid you love but annoys you at the same time smh lol. It's a love affair of teasing for both teams and I think Georgia will knock his huge ego down one day. Thanks Pea!
[Report This]Date: Dec 18, 2017 06:44 pm Title: II
I can see why Eva wishes she was not a part of this family...her grandmother's attitude for one...smh
Am looking forward to her meeting with Michael :D...
Author's Response:
Indeed poor girl has to endure her snarky comments and just deal with it unfortunately. It's going to be a funny union lol. Thanks Mary!
[Report This]Date: Dec 16, 2017 11:24 pm Title: XII
Studying m-hm lol
Adil is right Eva is no Riya, Eva will understand it I'm sure
Lol at the 'he isn't a celebrity' comment lol
Ugh Marcus smh still rude as ever
Aw Paul is like family to them, love it
Author's Response:
Yep Eva has a heart and won't judge them for who they like and all. Well Paul is a celebrity in their young eyes lol. Marcus can go sit in the sun train and yes Paul sure is. Thanks pea!
[Report This]Date: Dec 15, 2017 04:19 pm Title: XII
Ah forbidden love everywhere. I get why the twins are being cautious about Sophia and Aadesh’s secret relationship but I completely agree with Adil here - legit, I don’t think Eva will mind lmao...she can prob relate, seeing as her closeness with Michael isn’t exactly going to be approved by her grandma. And I can only imagine Riya’s reaction to finding out about them both. I just pray it never happens - esp not at the same time! 😂 Marcus why is he back. He can take several seats, tf he think he is calling my tea-man Paul an ALBINO? SEATS. They’re all a bunch of kids tho LOL.
Also the little kiss scene was well written fr. Don’t be nervous about them! Loved it â¤ï¸ðŸ…
Author's Response:
indeed forbidden love is flourishing lol. I agree too Eva won't mind as well since she is growing closer to mike and well who cares what the old hag thinks smh and it will be legenadary when she finds out but let's be hopeful she will never find out yikes. Marcus needs to leave and find himself a therapist for all that pent up anger smh. yas how dare he call our tea loving fella an albino! blamspherry! and all of em need time out in the kid corner lmao, ugh I'm not looking forward to the actual kissing stage gah but thanks Onion I tried!
Date: Dec 13, 2017 03:19 pm Title: XI
last two chapters soo adorable! love that Eva got to meet Janet I feel like theyll be friends in no time and the rest of his family. youre really great at makindg like distinct characters that feel real and are relatable and funny af:) zimas a pretty name. shame on marcus for being an annoying af punk ass lol
Author's Response:
Aww now that is a huge compliment panda. I try my best and don't make me blush shucks! Lol. But I do believe they will be the best of friends Eva and Janet lol. I wanted to find a distant name and Zima it was. Marcus can hop on a ride on Sun train too. Thanks as always Panda!
Date: Dec 12, 2017 10:49 am Title: XI
Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks hun! <3
[Report This]Date: Dec 08, 2017 04:21 pm Title: XI
I wanted drama. I got drama. Well Marcus has like -0 chill so. YES he was out of line lmao. The family dynamics were fun though but I wish Michael and Marcus didn’t need to bring their beef into the entire cookout but thankfully Roy broke it up🙄. Looks like Michael and Janet are going to need to fight for Eva’s attention! To me, it’s like she’s already family but she just doesn’t know t yet. I can tell they LOVE her and she def enjoyed trying out those foods. Again I’m enjoying seeing the clash of cultures. Hopefully Mike is alright! Wonderful tomato ðŸ…
Author's Response:
You asked and you received the drama you wanted. Ikr they shouldn't have but what can you do with those two smh and yes thankfully Roy came in and shut it down. Yas she will have two of them and she won't know how to handle it lool. I agree she doesn't know it but she will realise in due time. The jackson clan are a welcoming bunch minus idiots like Marcus smh. She sure did and gosh I hope he's OK too. Thanks onion!
[Report This]Date: Dec 08, 2017 02:13 pm Title: XI
"you both will catch flies if you don't close your mouths" lol
Smh at Aadesh lol
Also smh at Roy hes something else lol
Uncle Roy I told her good things besides you wouldn't want Aunt jay to hear you say those words" Michael replied rolling his eyes at him
well brat she isn't here---"Uncle Roy was about to reply when he was cut off by the sudden voice of Paul and his wife
^Lol too funny
You gotta love Paul lol
"to make sure someone in this fucked up family doesn't end up dead." Fun family I see lol
Aww Michael and Eva moments are so adorable aww
Marcus guy is already on my last nerve after just one scentence, cant blame Michael for can't standing him
😱😱😱😱 wow damn Marcus fr? He's your cousin geezz wow lol
Aww Paul is great with Adil it's nice to see they're friends now sort of
are you sure? Cause Michael tends to date a girl without telling her they are" Janet teased the flustered girl. Lol
I'm glad Michael is Ok, sort of
Author's Response:
Adil I have no words for and out of the brothers he is the calmest one? usally its the other way around lol. eweell uncle roy don't care who he offends he always has to have a say lmao. Paul is just a open friendly guy and who knows the kid might be next 'paul' in the making -shiver-. but I agree they are so sweet and getting closer day by day. I won't be surpised mike has already had her as his girl in mind already. Marcus can sit on a spiked baseball bat it's gross he has a crush on his own family nasty af ew. don't ya just love mike's crazy fam?. thanks pea!
Date: Dec 06, 2017 03:46 pm Title: X
Sweet chapter. Michael was shocked that a girl wasn’t afraid of Muscles. They seem to have common interests.
Author's Response:
Haha yes and it's good that they have some common interests! Lol. Nice to know she wasnt afraid.
[Report This]Date: Dec 03, 2017 11:03 am Title: X
"of course, you've tasted the food. Your harem bought the food for you? You don't think they might be trying to poison you with their love potion?" - Lol but he could be right tho
Those sweets sound good, I want some lol
"yes, but it doesn't mean they should be greedy" - exactly lol
"now Eva don't start something you can't finish" - That's a dangerous thing to say lol
Stupid photographer how dare he? Smh at such idiots
Did Michael tell everyone about Eva? Lol it's adorable
Cool love how she's but afraid of Muscles
Can't wait till the cookout
Loved this chapter 💙
Author's Response:
well michael did try to warn him about paul's crazy harem but the poor soul won't listen lol. the sweets made me hungry I can't lie when i was researching something lol. girl what are you implying when mike says that? lool. the photographer can go sit on a spiked baseball bat lol. she isn't due to being around enough animals in her life lol. the cookout is going to be lit just you wait and see! Thanks Pea <3
Date: Dec 03, 2017 09:44 am Title: V
Yikes, Indian families don’t play, especially West Indian!
Author's Response:
Yep especially when It comes to their daughters. Yikes
Date: Dec 03, 2017 09:00 am Title: Introduction
Liking this so far!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you do! Girl where you been 👀
[Report This]Date: Dec 03, 2017 08:46 am Title: X
Lmao, a "snacking queen" I love Paul too much. Oddly enough I've legit never had malapua but I want to try some now! Loveee that he took her to his house esp after he's been to hers like equality duh. The way Michael introduced 'the famous Eva' to his family and how they all see her makes it as if they're a couple. Eva's still very reserved, maybe it's cuz she's at his house for the first time, but Michael broke the ice with Muscles and all, which was sweet!
The cook-out should be good. I WANT DRAMA. Lmao great chapter tomato! <3
Author's Response:
cause Paul loves his food just as much as his buddy and wil shower praises when he can lmao. wow you never have? it sounds yummy lol. can't blame her but she's getting out of her shell more and accepting it. Poor Eva not knowing she's his girl. michael will have to address 'their relationship' some day lol. yeah introducing muscles was a good turn luckily she liked him and musscles did the same phew. your love of drama don't worry something might happen at the cook out. let's see what goes down lol. thanks onion XD
Date: Nov 25, 2017 03:59 pm Title: IX
WOW that was a close one! cute!
Author's Response:
Yep it sure was lol. Thanks panda <3