[Report This]Date: Jul 09, 2018 03:26 am Title: XIX
Ugh daadi Riya needs to accept you can't force love on people
Poor Michael needs to stop blaming himself it's not his fault
Poor Eva her cree- I mean husband to be arrived
Roy and Jay deserve their lil baby they'd be great parents
Author's Response:
well she is from the old generation and can't accept change sadly smh but I agree poor lad has to stop blaming himself because it wsa not his fault his parents died that day. I clocked the shade you threw hm pea? tsk and yas the pair will be great parents in due time! thanks pea <3
[Report This]Date: Jul 06, 2018 10:47 pm Title: XVI
Love the interaction with Paul and his horse.. XD. Maybe he can take some pointers on animal handling from Michael, lol.
Hm...since one of the cousins is also in a relationship Daadi doesn't know about maybe Eva and Michael could have that cousin on their side...
Daadi seems to be enjoying the arranged marriage idea a little too much, smh.
Author's Response:
poor Paul can't get one break with animals compared to his friend and he could get pointers but he is not that interested to be animal whisper like his pal XD. hm something could happen since one twin is in a secret relationship and ole woman needs to focus her energy on something else smh lol. thanks mary <3
[Report This]Date: Jun 28, 2018 09:14 am Title: XVIII
Yikes Michael didn’t take the truth so well. He just needs time and to give Eva a chance to explain. He must be sooo confused and sad I feel so bad for mikeðŸ˜. He clearly doesn’t understand why Eva had to keep it a secret and I don’t think he gets just how big this thing is... At least Aunt Jay could bring some happiness with her good news! And damn that cliffhanger I wonder if Eva will be able to tell her side of the story, if he’ll listen. Bc rn, Michael only knows ones side - Vik’s.
Author's Response:
I agree the magnitude of what is going down has not dawned him yet that she did this for a reason and yay to aunt jay at least in the mist of drama a flicker of happiness appeared lol. we shall what goes down in the next chapter onion! mwhahahaha -cough- thanks as always <3
[Report This]Date: Jun 28, 2018 01:14 am Title: XVIII
Lol Michael's cute trying to pronaunce German I can't do that either so I get the feeling lol
Michael hear the girl she is obviously terrified of Vik don't just walk away then smh (but at the same time can't blame him either but still hear her out)
Gotta love Adil
Roy smh can't u see he loves the girl
Yeah agree with Jay they're all stubborn lol
See you shoulda let the girl explain even Paul says it but I get his side too but still let her explain
Awww Jay finally will have her own little one she deserves it and has enough expierence with raising Michael and Janet
Can't wait for Roy's reaction lol
Author's Response:
Isn't he just adorable lol. Only if he had stayed but still the poor guy needed a break and uncle Roy is just being a concerned uncle..eh in his way lool. It's a mix conflict of emotion for everyone and let's hope Jay has her own little one too soon!. Thanks Pea!
[Report This]Date: Jun 23, 2018 07:06 pm Title: XV
An arranged marriage...smh. I don't envy Eva facing that prospect... especially to a man like Vikram
Maybe Eva's cousin can be Eva and Michael's aly against her grandmother, and Vikram
Always look forward to more :)
Author's Response:
I do not envy her either Mary it sounds like hell to be attached to a man like Vikram with his weird ways smh. maybe the twins will be on her side? time can only tell ;).
Thanks mary!
[Report This]Date: Jun 22, 2018 11:36 am Title: XVII
Aw so cute they admitted they'll miss each-other. It's interesting how relationships across race barriers are somewhat "forbidden" in this story and everyone's secretive af, and then you got Marissa who just don't give a fuuuuckk lol. People should be more like Marissa. Paul and Michael's plan was genius, the scene was really funny and ironic too but I love that it worked. I feel really bad for Michael but he had to find out sooner or later. Yikes Daadi steady pressuring poor Eva :( idk how much longer she can hide it, either. We'll see I guess. Great chapterrrr
Author's Response:
yes I agree 'be like marissa' who is blunt with no cares lmao and it is sad that relationships are forbidden when you can bring two worlds together and live together but some people refuse to want that smh lol. the pair of friends when it comes to their plans sometimes works luckily this time nothing failed thank goodness if imagine Virkram had found em? yea the poor guy had to find out eventually at least it was in a better enviornment than in a public place. Daadi needs to leave poor Eva alone we shall how it goes! thanks onion! <3
[Report This]Date: Jun 10, 2018 06:56 am Title: XVII
Oh Paul smh learn ur girls names lol
At least Adil got 2 numbers that's something right?
Michael and Eva are just too cute :)
Oh Michael u whish that was true that Eva is your girl so it's not entirely a lie from Paul and hey it'll keep Marissa away from u too so be glad lol
Ugh Vik makes my blood boil talking like that about Eva smh
LMAO Paul would've really married for bussiness? Smh
Poor waiter lol
Gremlin lol I love those nicknames the siblings have for each other lol
Lol Michael I can't blame u for not wanting your bones jumped lol
Paul and Marissa are too funny lol
The old woman smh
Author's Response:
Paul as you can see doesn't care to learn any of his girls names and of course all for business surely once he gets he wants he is done lool. Riya annoys all and she doesn't realise what she is doing is hurting poor Eva meh. That is the type of sibling Paul and Marissa have going on lol but Mike I agree should be glad for his friends input smh tsk Tsk better than getting jumped by Marissa lol. Thanks Pea!
[Report This]Date: Jun 08, 2018 09:34 pm Title: XIV
Oh that's all Eva needs...an arranged marriage to a guy who sounds like he's in the Mafia....smh
Hope Michael has enough street smarts to know how to handle Vkram's thugs...
Look forward to more :)
Author's Response:
Lool the mafia. Eh well vikram is not in the mafia could be something simar who knows 🤷ðŸ¾â™€ï¸. And let's hope for Mike's sake he does eek. Thanks Mary!
[Report This]Date: May 24, 2018 10:48 pm Title: XIII
Well, Paul is quite the ladies man isn't he?...lol
Interesting to see he (like Eva) has a young relative who annoys him at times...lol.
Look forward to more :)
Author's Response:
The true question is will he the ladies man change for the better? Poor Paul he has his own trails to face at home with annoying kids but he copes lol. Thanks Mary!
[Report This]Date: May 15, 2018 06:35 pm Title: XII
So, Sophia is secretly dating Eva's younger relative, maybe Sophia and Eva will become ally's if Daadii finds out about the relationships...
Good old Marcus...smh, clearly his ego has taken a beating...we'll just see if he learns his lesson, and doesn't offend Michael again...
Author's Response:
That could work but time will only tell and ah its wonderful to see the egoistic get thrown down to earth to see reality lool. Let's hope he doesn't annoy Mike again. Thanks As alawys!
[Report This]Date: Apr 30, 2018 09:06 pm Title: XI
Wow...and I thought the only drama at the cook out would be Eva and her cousins...lol
Marcus sure has lousy timing, and yes he was way out of line with his comments about Michael's parents...and he got JUST what was coming to him as far as Michael's decking him is concerned.
I love to see Michael's aunt and sister welcoming Eva into the family :)
Looking forward to more :)
Author's Response:
Thankfully none of it involved her and adil lol. Marcus needs to sit his ass down. He loves creating drama when it is not needed and well you break the camels back and in this case Michael's temper. He got what he deserved lol. The jackson ladies are so welcoming poor Eva. Thanks Mary!
[Report This]Date: Apr 22, 2018 03:32 pm Title: X
I like snakes too...Eva and I would be good friends, lol.
Always look forward to reading your updates.
Especially enjoyed the image of Michael photographing Eva with Muscles...:)
Author's Response:
Well you and Eva are braver than me when it comes to animals heck snakes lol. I had fun writing that once I researched about snakes even tho I have a fear of them lol. Thanks Mary!
[Report This]Date: Apr 11, 2018 08:19 am Title: XVI
Lol I love Paul and Michael's 'brotherly' bond they're hilarious together
Lmao Paul his always flirting self to the horse lady lol
Glad he goes for Georgie he met his match there lol
Lmao his horse didn't like him ignoring her lol that's too funny
Can't Aadesh stfu hes dating a non Indian girl himself smdh at him
Wait what did the old woman book a date for the wedding? Damn
Author's Response:
Paul flirts with anyone he can sigh lol. Aadesh is such a hyperitocte knowing he's doing the same thing that he thinks his cousin is going to end up doing smh. Daadi plans secretly so much foreshadowing hm..thanks pea!
[Report This]Date: Apr 07, 2018 04:08 pm Title: XVI
Wow Paul must be working magic or something the way he can flirt with just about any female. Like that’s talent, fam😂. He may be aware of the power he has but I’m glad he will keep his eyes on the gorgeous Georgie bc I SHIP IT. Looks like they had a great time at the farm with all of the horses! I can totally relate what with the childhood nostalgia/memories aspect of it because me and my siblings would regularly go visit our aunt on Sundays and whenever we do this in the present day it DOES still feel nostalgic to me, revisiting places where we grew up. Anyway I kinda missed Eva in this chapter but she made an appearance towards the end so i’ll let you off, Lorry👀. Haha OMG AADESH IS A TOTAL FANGIRL. Love it. And omg typical for them troublemakers to be fighting all the damn time lmao. You can’t leave them alone for more than two secs legit. But you know how aadesh has his hopes up about the prospect of a relationship between Michael and Eva? Yeah he might not want to get ahead of himself because it seems as if Rita is working hard to make sure this wedding will go ahead â˜¹ï¸ Fr she’s planning Eva’s future for her which sucks, but that’s the reality of arranged marriages. Great chapter tomato!
Author's Response:
just one of his great talents that he is slowly pushing away for his girl lmao. Mike and Paul had fun indeed going back to their memories and being able to relive em as adults and I agree its great to go and back feel that nostagalia feeling again. the troublemakers are always fighting sadly enough smh and yikes Daadi is planning behind the shadows poor Eva. hopefully something will happen to intervene to stop the wedding from happening! time will only tell! thanks onion! <3
[Report This]Date: Mar 23, 2018 08:43 pm Title: IX
Good thing Michael was able to get out of the house before Daadi found him in Eva's bedroom...
Seems Eva's timing is better than the boys' is...lol
Author's Response:
thank goodness for a woman's intitutation that saves lives and boys they deserve it for disobeying her lol. thanks mary!