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Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2018 02:25 pm Title: XX

Clearly Vikram is bad news. Hard to believe Daadi is blind to this dark side of her future son-in-law.

Vikram's attacking Eva clearly was a turning point in the story...I agree with that 100%. Hopefully, now that the twins have seen Vikram attacking their cousin they can get Michael and Paul to help get Eva out of harm's way without Vikram turning on them...

As always, looking forward to more :)

Author's Response:

the old woman is immune to her 'son-in-law' faults' it's sad she lets this happen and does nothing sigh. I agree Vik hurting Eva gets into the meat of the story now.at least the good thing that has happened in the chapter is that Aadesh is on their side now and something can be sorted out with mike/paul in due time. time will only tell Mary! thanks as always <3

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 24, 2018 02:27 pm Title: XX

Poor Eva she has to find a way to get out of it she derseves so much better 



Author's Response:

I agree there has to be some way out of this mess. time will only tell. Thanks Eva <3

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 22, 2018 12:59 pm Title: XX

I can’t read Eva being so terrified like I actually feel her fear. As for Vikram well he is just really good at doing what he does, putting up this lover-boy facade. Someone has got to make Daadi realise that this man is a monster and he doesn’t deserve Eva. Maybe if Riya caught Vikram being violent toward or mistreating Eva, she might change her mind about this marriage. And welp there’s that lamb curry again that I love so much jk. Me and Eva wouldn’t get along in terms of food preferences😂. I thought the irony and tenseness of having none other than Michael as the photographer was cool af. If only Vikram knew muahaha. But I can tell he was uncomfortable the whole time...but he did his job like a pro and I’m proud of him for that.

SIS THE ENDING. I was so shook! Thank God for Adil but that was just...wow. Part of me wishes that it was Daadi who appeared instead of the twins but I’m glad it was the twins because they will actually do something about it. I know they won’t let Eva’s life be ruined and I can’t wait to see what their synced minds come up with. I need Michael and Eva to have their happy ending ok. Amazing (and kinda terrifying) update, tomato! <3



Author's Response:

I did not expect that I described her fear so well (after so much research) I highly doubt Riya will see any fault in her golden boy all she sees is good and nothing else. I had to add that lamb curry in it yet again lool. ah isn't irony fun hm? especially when it hits Vikram and he gets in his feelings which lead to him abusing poor Eva that was uncalled for thankfully the boys were there to help her but I do feel Riya will not do anything and just ignore whatever she might see. at least the poor girl has some people on her side to get out of this mess. thanks onion for the support as always <33

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