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Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 22, 2018 09:22 pm Title: XVIII

Hm...a chance meeting with Eva outside of the hospital...could prove to be awkward, but we'll see...

I agree Lorry, Eva deserves a chance to explain herself. Hopefully Michael will follow his aunt's advice...

Author's Response:

Indeed it could end up becoming awakard and poor thing does need the chance to explain herself we can see how mike and Paul will recieve it in due time. thanks mary <3 

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 28, 2018 09:14 am Title: XVIII

Yikes Michael didn’t take the truth so well. He just needs time and to give Eva a chance to explain. He must be sooo confused and sad I feel so bad for mike😭. He clearly doesn’t understand why Eva had to keep it a secret and I don’t think he gets just how big this thing is... At least Aunt Jay could bring some happiness with her good news! And damn that cliffhanger I wonder if Eva will be able to tell her side of the story, if he’ll listen. Bc rn, Michael only knows ones side - Vik’s. 



Author's Response:

I agree the magnitude of what is going down has not dawned him yet that she did this for a reason and yay to aunt jay at least in the mist of drama a flicker of happiness appeared lol. we shall what goes down in the next chapter onion! mwhahahaha -cough- thanks as always <3

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 28, 2018 01:14 am Title: XVIII

Lol Michael's cute trying to pronaunce German I can't do that either so I get the feeling lol 

Michael hear the girl she is obviously terrified of Vik don't just walk away then smh (but at the same time can't blame him either but still hear her out) 


Gotta love Adil


Roy smh can't u see he loves the girl 


Yeah agree with Jay they're all stubborn lol 


See you shoulda let the girl explain even Paul says it but I get his side too but still let her explain 

Awww Jay finally will have her own little one she deserves it and has enough expierence with raising Michael and Janet 

Can't wait for Roy's reaction lol



Author's Response:

Isn't he just adorable lol. Only if he had stayed but still the poor guy needed a break and uncle Roy is just being a concerned uncle..eh in his way lool. It's a mix conflict of emotion for everyone and let's hope Jay has her own little one too soon!. Thanks Pea! 

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