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Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2018 09:34 pm Title: XIV

Oh that's all Eva needs...an arranged marriage to a guy who sounds like he's in the Mafia....smh

Hope Michael has enough street smarts to know how to handle Vkram's thugs...

Look forward to more :)

Author's Response:

Lool the mafia. Eh well vikram is not in the mafia could be something simar who knows 🤷🏾‍♀️. And let's hope for Mike's sake he does eek. Thanks Mary! 

Reviewer: Fire-in-her-veins Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 12, 2018 04:21 pm Title: XIV

love that they went ice skatingg and just had funn

now it gets intensee. so creepy and gross not only that vikrams in the picture but hes stalking here ugh



Author's Response:

its like happiness is strong in the moment and then vik comes to ruin it with his stalking ass tsk tsk. we can only wait and see what he has in store! thanks panda!

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 21, 2018 02:06 pm Title: XIV

What up. It’s ya girl. Here to read and review! 

Ok 5th May yeah. CHRIS BROWN’S BIRTHDAY OMG LOL. Daadi’s obliviousness to Vikram’s true nature just makes this 10x more ironic and I love it. Nice that you added some visuals! Would be great to see more of these. It’s always tough, as writers, going into detail about what scenery/character appearances look like, but a picture can say more than words which is useful. McDonalds. Classy, Mike. Also spice isn’t unhealthy bye Michael. Aw cutest ‘friends’ ever! She’s taking care of him! And she held his hand! *screaming*

But all that sweetness is just ruined by Vik’s hitmen. Still not used to seeing my cousin’s name in there LOL but I’m honestly on the edge rn. “Nothing will harm you in my presence” THE IRONY. Well he was right. They were both ok...sounded like more of a warning. He should’ve told Eva what just happened instead of putting them both in danger.

BOY NAMED KENDRICK DOES HIS SECOND NAME HAPPEN TO BE LAMAR LOL 😁. I really liked the dynamics of this chapter, lots of diff settings and emotions going on. The ending was kinda grim fam. Vik clearly expected more and by the looks of it, he’s gonna get what he wants. Michael needs to be more careful and he needs to tell her what’s going on fam...this involves her too. Great update Lorry! 



Author's Response:

I DIDN'T KNOW IT WAS HIS BIRTHDAY CHILD. PURE CONDINENCE lool. Daadi needs a reality check but I dounbt she will with how brain washed she is smh. yeah i agree the part that stumps me most is trying to describe the place even with research. great time for a picture ha! lmao. oh come he is a teenager not a popstar *cough cough* sheesh let him live (cheaply bang bang). I see you clocked on their 'friendship status' and yass finally they are getting somewhere *squeals~*. sadly sweetness doesn't last long when vik isn't around he sucks all the life out of the ze room and i agree mike should have but he didn't which we will find out soon why he didn't hmm. shhhhhh his last name ISN'T Lamar gosh lmao. yes mike needs to be careful but we shall how it goes with the pair working together lol. THANKS MY PRECIOUS BABY <3

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 20, 2018 07:53 am Title: XIV

Aggrrr Riya is so ugh lol

Aww their date is so sweet 

Rohan and Sahil are pretty dangerous guys 

Why didn't he tell her what they told him? Maybe she could've helped him figure out who they were 

I love me some Janet lol


Oh oh Vik's in the country? 😱😱😱😱    



Author's Response:

she is surely a pain in the butt isn't she? smh. they are on a date and they don't know tsk tsk hasn't paul's teasing taught them anything?? the idiots are not that dangerous pfft they are kittens compared to vik. I don't know why he didn't maybe he wanted to keep it to himself? hm we will find out eventually. Janet gets u sighing when you know she's right lmao. Vik can seat in the sun train and stay there lmao. thanks pea <3

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