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Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 22, 2018 03:32 pm Title: X

I like snakes too...Eva and I would be good friends, lol.

Always look forward to reading your updates.

Especially enjoyed the image of Michael photographing Eva with Muscles...:)

Author's Response:

Well you and Eva are braver than me when it comes to animals heck snakes lol. I had fun writing that once I researched about snakes even tho I have a fear of them lol. Thanks Mary! 

Reviewer: mjsdirtydiana Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 06, 2017 03:46 pm Title: X

Sweet chapter.  Michael was shocked that a girl wasn’t afraid of Muscles.  They seem to have common interests.  

 



Author's Response:

Haha yes and it's good that they have some common interests! Lol. Nice to know she wasnt afraid. 

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2017 11:03 am Title: X

"of course, you've tasted the food. Your harem bought the food for you? You don't think they might be trying to poison you with their love potion?" - Lol but he could be right tho 

Those sweets sound good, I want some lol 

"yes, but it doesn't mean they should be greedy"  - exactly lol

"now Eva don't start something you can't finish"  - That's a dangerous thing to say lol


Stupid photographer how dare he? Smh at such idiots 


Did Michael tell everyone about Eva? Lol it's adorable 

Cool love how she's but afraid of Muscles 

Can't wait till the cookout 

 

 

Loved this chapter 💙



Author's Response:

well michael did try to warn him about paul's crazy harem but the poor soul won't listen lol. the sweets made me hungry I can't lie when i was researching something lol. girl what are you implying when mike says that? lool. the photographer can go sit on a spiked baseball bat lol. she isn't due to being around enough animals in her life lol. the cookout is going to be lit just you wait and see! Thanks Pea <3 

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2017 08:46 am Title: X

Lmao, a "snacking queen" I love Paul too much. Oddly enough I've legit never had malapua but I want to try some now! Loveee that he took her to his house esp after he's been to hers like equality duh. The way Michael introduced 'the famous Eva' to his family and how they all see her makes it as if they're a couple. Eva's still very reserved, maybe it's cuz she's at his house for the first time, but Michael broke the ice with Muscles and all, which was sweet!

The cook-out should be good. I WANT DRAMA. Lmao great chapter tomato! <3



Author's Response:

cause Paul loves his food just as much as his buddy and wil shower praises when he can lmao. wow you never have? it sounds yummy lol. can't blame her but she's getting out of her shell more and accepting it. Poor Eva not knowing she's his girl. michael will have to address 'their relationship' some day lol. yeah introducing muscles was a good turn luckily she liked him and musscles did the same phew. your love of drama don't worry something might happen at the cook out. let's see what goes down lol. thanks onion XD

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