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Reviewer: Khadijasworld Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 05, 2021 06:53 pm Title: II

Really good so far!!

Author's Response:

aw thanks glad you are enioying the story so far <3

Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2019 09:19 am Title: XXIII

Lol the struggles of shopping were too relatable in this chapter. Eva’s choice sounded beautiful; reminded me of the royal blue sari I have. Yeah wasn’t surprised Vikram is fooling around with other women and Eva is basically just a side piece. If only Riya knew that actually Vikram is everything she wouldn’t want in a son-in-law. Oh the irony...

Author's Response:

I love how you can relate (I hate shopping cough) and I had fun describing her dress with ideas online to helpout hehe. Vikram is a vile and disgusting man he does want he feels pleases him sadly without any care for Poor Eva smh. If she only knew and had her eyes open but would that even help? Thanks onion <3

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2019 08:16 am Title: XXVIII

Hiran is such a happy child she sounds like fun I can see her being friends with Michael and Paul when they meet 



Smh at Riya after all this year's she still hasn't accepted Bruno smh 



I'm shocked at Vik giving the twins money just like that, you never know with that man 

Author's Response:

she is! we shall get more of her relationship with her big sister when the time comes. oh she will so get on with those two heck Paul might fall in love with the cutie and spoil her like an older uncle or brother lool. because Riya resents the man and will never like him smh. who knows vik could have something goin one knows what is going on his mind! thanks pea <3 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2019 07:22 pm Title: XXVIII

Hm...interesting Adil and Aadesh asked Vikram for ANYTHING...let alone money...hope they don't become dependant on him for things, knowing how he's been treating Eva...

No love lost between Riya and Bruno...her referring to him as an 'oaf' speaks volumes...

Author's Response:

they needed it at the time as the brothers don't have jobs so they have no one else to rely on now that daadi isn't around for that period of time and let's hope not. at this point Riya will always resent Bruno for taking her daughter away and ruining potential marriage prosperals from coming into the family smh. Thanks mary <3

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2018 11:42 am Title: XXVII

Binu knew his little girl would be unhappy in a arranged marriage 

Even as mother Riya is ugh smh 

Hopefully someday Riya will have a change of heart but probably not she's too stubborn for that smh

Author's Response:

sometimes dads know best and in this Binu is right well it shows she wanted control over everything in the past and present day it is annoying smh. but I doubt the ole woman will have a change of heart but hey never say never!. thanks pea <3

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 10, 2018 10:12 pm Title: XXVII

Well, Eva definitely gets her stubbornness from her mother...and her grandmother for that matter.

Am still smh at Riya making Eva pay for Prisha's perceived mistake...

Always enjoy reading the backstories of characters :)

Author's Response:

indeed yet the ole bat could not even see that all these years smh she will never understand that the girls in the family do not want to be changed by control and now is making poor Eva pay for it so sad smh. and I am glad you do it just makes sense why so and so character act this way! i'll defo bring more blasts to the past along the way :D. thank you as always <3 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 25, 2018 08:26 am Title: XXVI

I like Adra :D...she's the complete opposite of Riya, especially where Eva is concerned.

I'm smh at Riya and her attitude about anyone other than her precious Vikram. And her wanting to keep the family's money IN the family...

As I see it, there's strength in numbers, the more people Eva has on her side, the better :D.

Author's Response:

She is indeed compared to the cold heart of Riya sadly smh she only cares for control and wealth not realising that is what pushed her daughter away smh. Lets hope these numbers come when the time is right to get her out 👀. 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 24, 2018 09:18 pm Title: XXV

Am glad to see Uncle Roy is willing to open up about his mixed heritage...Hopefully he'll take Eva's advice, and forgive the people in his past.

Always enjoy the moments between Eva and Michael...I agree with Michael, Eva should not worry about the future, and just allow herself to enjoy the present with him...

I never pictured Janet as such a brat...LOL. Though I imagine Janet thinking 'TMI' about Uncle Roy's "I'll be all over her"

Look forward to what happens next :D

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 24, 2018 12:22 pm Title: XXVI

Paul and his need for tea and breaking rules is his thing too aint it? Lol 
What's there to steal? Smh the intruders will run the other way once they see Riya 

Adra sounds much nicer than Riya

Can't Riya stay in India and Adra come back to the UK? Lol

Author's Response:

Yes it's one of his things to do you know in his spare time when he isn't spending time with his 'chocolate goddess' or his best pal he does that lool. Riya is old school and thinks the whole world is out to get her and her items smh lol. Yes Riya is the opposite of her sister and actually cares for her grandaughter pity she can't come over to stay permanently maybe a visit some time? Thanks pea 

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 19, 2018 04:19 am Title: XXV

Poor Roy, Jay is right he need to talk to Eva 

LMAO Janet walking in on them😂😂😂

Glad Roy and Eva had a heart to heart conversation they both needed it, Roy mostly

Roy will never stop swearing will he? Lol 

Love the sweet moments between Michael and Eva

Author's Response:

of course Jay is always right when it comes to advice with her man because the conversation between him and Eva was needed for him to try and heal from his hurt from the past. Yes Uncle Roy is right Janet should be used to their ways of affection they have been living together for years now lol and Roy is the type to never stop he has to make his point across with his swearing lol. I agree their moments were precious hehe. thanks pea <3

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 09, 2018 10:41 pm Title: XXIV

Paul and his flirting with Eva...Clever of him to give Eva a pager so she and Michael and communicate...:)

Hm, you know since Daadi thinks Vik is such a catch, maybe if she were to catch Vik with one of his other women it would open the old woman's eyes to the creep her delightful future son in law really is....

Look forward to more, as always :D

Author's Response:

His flirting is more on friendly tone lool and I agree it was clever for him to do that so they can chat privately. Hmm you never know that may happen downline but will that stop Daadi from seeing the light Im on the fence over it but we shall see 🤔. Thanks Mary 😁 

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 08, 2018 01:09 am Title: XXIV

Not surprised vik is with another woman 


Lol 'from the bottom of my black heart' 



Michael and Eva are adorable even when texting lol 

Author's Response:

There is no surprise when it comes to vikram smh and ah you gotta love the charm from Paul always alert 😂. Yes they are so cute lol. Thanks Pea 👌

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2018 01:22 am Title: XXIII

Daadi neers to learn its ok to marry the love of your life, so what hes not the same race? This woman smh 



Vik no words for this cheating, controlling, abusive and arrogant individual I don't yet his side chicks either they know he's to marry someone else yet they keep dating him smh not feel sorry for them at all 




And Riya with her insults towards Eva smh it's still her granddaughter not a stranger 




Can't wait to see the plans Michael, Paul and the twins have to stop the wedding from happening 

Author's Response:

the ole bat is stuck in her old ways and won't listen to anyone but the sound of her own voice and it just shows how much disdain she has for the girl. it is not her fualt she was born into this sheesh. Vikram does not care because he knows this will not affect him in the long run and his side chicks? ain't it sad how there are woman like that in society who act just like that? tsk tsk. at this point we are all waiting thanks Eve <3

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2018 08:48 pm Title: XXIII

Well, let's see...Vik is a controlling, abusive, arrogant, womanizer...yep, Daadi's blind as an old bat if she can't see those things...smh...Just makes you want to ask "C'mon Daadi, was what Eva's parents did REALLY so bad to want her married to

Love the interactions of Eva and her cousins

Crossing fingers that the cousins, Michael and Paul will be able to stop Vik and Daadi's absurd plan...

Look forward as always to more :)

Author's Response:

you and eve have the same mindset when it comes to Vikram lool and well Daadi clearly wants control over everything not caring if her grandchild is left in the fire smh and she will never forgive her own daughter over what she did which is almost decades gone my word smh. gotta love the trio of cousins relationship lets just hope something is done about it soon! thanks mary <3 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 04, 2018 07:26 pm Title: XXII

I love your gif of Michael and Quincy btw :)

Ooo...Vikram...that's all I'm gonna allow myself to say...smh. Hopefully Paul and Michael will be able to get Eva away from (smh)

Paul truly is "Mr. Charming" Eva's cousins...I didn't even know they were good at cooking :)

Look forward to always :)

Author's Response:

Well vikram is a special case with his crazy ways smh hopefully something will be done and soon but time can only tell 🤔. Yep Paul is truly a gentleman lool and the twins I wanted to give them more elements to their characters leading to them become cooks lol. I'm glad you like the gif i wanted to pick one that was linked to happier times for him. Thanks Mary 😁 

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