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Reviewer: witchybear Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 01, 2020 08:13 pm Title: Interlude and Chapter 1.

I absolutely loved this book 



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Thanks a lot.

Reviewer: yourburgersarethebest Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2020 12:35 am Title: Chapter 2

This fanfiction is like a Jackson 5 special. I like it! Kind of like Back to the Future? It's really nice.

Reviewer: yourburgersarethebest Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2020 12:34 am Title: Interlude and Chapter 1.

Okay, so my question is, why are there 3000 reads and no reviews?? Well, I'll do the honors!

The description of the amusement park was captivating. I have never seen "inflamed" used in that type of description before, but it definitely works!

This was a great opener. My only complaint is that the quotes weren't paragraphed for each new speaker. But that's okay! :)

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