Date: Jan 05, 2020 12:34 am Title: Interlude and Chapter 1.
Okay, so my question is, why are there 3000 reads and no reviews?? Well, I'll do the honors!
The description of the amusement park was captivating. I have never seen "inflamed" used in that type of description before, but it definitely works!
This was a great opener. My only complaint is that the quotes weren't paragraphed for each new speaker. But that's okay! :)