Date: Aug 15, 2019 04:26 am Title: Chapter 3
Your story is interesting. I will follow it. Ian a little clueless about the Michael character, though. Wonder who he is...ðŸ¤”and what his connection is with her home. I guess it must be his childhood home. Does he have siblings, what does he do for a living??? He is very mysterious. You havenâ€™t let us in on many details about his life, so I guess we need more updates ðŸ˜‰
Date: Aug 14, 2019 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 2
Looking forward to know what's going to happen. She seems like an out of this world woman and Michael is minding his own business.
Date: Aug 13, 2019 09:33 am Title: Chapter 1
I enjoy reading your writing. I believe you have a very balanced approach to writing detail. Michael was introduced very slowly, and I can picture him saying some of the things he said in this chapter. Wonderful opening!
Date: Aug 11, 2019 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 2
Please continue! This story is getting very interesting!
Date: Dec 23, 2016 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: Dec 18, 2016 06:04 am Title: Chapter 1
This is great. Mj is a player! And she's a smart business girl :) let's see what's next.