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Reviewer: MommaE Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 17, 2017 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 3

Michael handled that better than I thought. Hopefully he won't get angry in the future. I am sure when her ex comes around all hell will break loose. Looking forward to the next chapter. It is cool that they have her moms book

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2017 05:23 am Title: Chapter 3

Michael handled this news like a champ. Here's hoping that Gabby has a healthy pregnancy and that she warms up to the idea of completing the bucket list. I'm gonna go dry my eyes now :-)

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2017 05:13 am Title: Chapter 2

This chapter has me holding my breath. Moving on to the next one now... Please let this then out as best as possible.

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2017 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 3

Im glad they're making progress of becoming closer again they need each other now more than ever 

 

 

Smh at that Sam, he doesn't deserve to be in his child's life 

 

 

 

I'm sure the bucket list and her pregnancy will heal their broken hearts and she had the best 'teacher' to help her raise her child, she could ask anything she needs 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: The man with no name Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2017 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 3

And after everything, Gabby still considered to have that stupid boyfriend of hers in her baby's life? Gosh...Anyway, things turned out pretty well. But it saddened me that Gabby was so close to her graduation. And being pregnant means she has to give up her dreams, she cannot go to college at least untill her child is old enough. I agree that every child is a blessing, but in real life, there is too much responsibilities that a teenager can handle, even thoung Gabby had Michael's help.

Ok, I am rambling now :)). Thank you for the new chapter. I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: mjsdirtydiana Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2017 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 3

Michael did very well, he realized if he blew up he could possibly lose his daughter for good and she was talking with him!

The bucket list and the baby will be good for both of them!  The healing needs to begin and i believe it just started between them!

 

another great update

Reviewer: fletcher Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2017 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 3

Can't wait to see this whole story....great plot...thanks

Reviewer: MommaE Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2017 04:43 am Title: Chapter 2

Great story!!! Wonder how Michael will take it



Author's Response:

thanks...you shall see... thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: mjsdirtydiana Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2017 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 2

Great chapter!  I'm glad sge spoke to Devin and he helped her make the right decision and tell her Dad of her dilemma!  Now to see how Michael takes the news!  His reaction will make or break their future relationship!



Author's Response:

his reacion is a make or break..what will he do?  thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: YuliAlexaMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2017 10:57 am Title: Chapter 2

Sh&t. What a mess! Getting better and better



Author's Response:

yes it certainly is a sticky mess hopefully one they can overcome and grow in their relationship.  thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: The man with no name Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2017 10:08 am Title: Chapter 2

...well, what should I say? I hope that both Michael and Gabby could overcome this difficult time and stay strong, not drift apart more.

Gosh, Michael's reaction could be the key to their future. He would need to remain calm and understand for Gabby, which I know very difficult to do, but I believe he could, based on Michael's nature. However, we cannot be sure of everything (except you :v), he might get super angry and said something that made things worse than they are.

Things are so complicated!!! @@. Both of them haven't set down and now they have to face another complicated situation. Gosh!!!

Anyway, thank you for the new chapter. I can't wait to read more.

Happy new year! :D

Author's Response:

Happy new year to you too!  it certainly add a new problem into their relationship.  Michael needs to think before he reacts because like you said it's a make or break time.  thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2017 01:48 am Title: Chapter 2

Maybe instead of pushing them further apart the new addition to the family  (if Gabby decides to keep it) will bring them closer to each other, just my thoughts

 

 

And that Sam he better not show up cause I'm sure he's running for his life when he bumps into either Michael, Ben, Devin or the others  

 

 

 

 

Ps. Happy New year 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Happy New Year to you too!.  Time will tell how this new revelation will affect their future.  As for Sam, he better not show his face again because theres a line of people waiting to deal with him.  thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Llamalouise88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 31, 2016 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 2

Interesting cast of characters with devin and Ben and Janet... and johns family? Excited to learn more about this family dynamic. I definitely think they will keep the baby and start on the bucket list! Can't wait for more :)

Author's Response:

yes the cast gets bigger.  Hopefully I didnt confuse you too much.  thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Llamalouise88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 22, 2016 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

I'm excited for this new idea. I love sequels even tho this made me tear up a bit :) Also it's interesting having no clue when he's gonna meet the new love interest. I hope you mess with us a bit lol.

Author's Response:

you know I will  thanks for reading

Reviewer: MommaE Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 18, 2016 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 1

Loving it so far! Read your books a lot! Keep up the great work! Hopefully he and Gabby and meet on mutual ground

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