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Reviewer: Dulce98 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 22, 2020 08:42 am Title: Chapter 15

OMG YES! Prince! I love its meeting with Michael, I send them too and A LOT haha ​​Richie reminds me of Prince in a way, especially in the early 80's when Prince hated Michael the most for constantly being compared to him. Very interesting because he loved MJ, he was a huge fan of the Jackson 5 in the 70s. He asked me what was wrong with them because in the late 80's even though they weren't the best of friends if they had a bigger and closer relationship, and Michael even went to his house and some parties with him and Prince defended him in 1993. These guys intrigue me, both had a haunting aura; Michael as out of this world and Prince very intimidating.
Sorry to write you all this but I am a huge fan of Prichael!

I love that you write in such a deep and realistic way, very few authors captivate me like you. I normally don't read anything with "Guy Original" or "Girl Original", but you've definitely changed my mind, you're my favorite author.
Let no one discourage you, write what you want

Reviewer: Dulce98 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 22, 2020 07:48 am Title: Chapter 14

I Love your story 🥰

Reviewer: Dulce98 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 21, 2020 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 14

OMG !! oh Richie how dare you make fun of my baby at the Grammys?
Bitch leave him alone!

And the toya ??? I can't believe it! how could he do that to his own brother, my God, my blood boils

Reviewer: Dulce98 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 21, 2020 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 12

I really like your story!

Reviewer: Dulce98 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 11, 2020 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 2

Woohoo! this is so good !!

Reviewer: yourburgersarethebest Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2020 12:29 am Title: Chapter 4

“Hey.” He stepped toward me with a warning gaze in his eyes. “You don’t have to be glad to see me, but boy I am your mother’s brother goddammit, you’re gonna respect me.” Something in his tone made me slightly more subdued. He hadn’t lost his sharp tongue but something was definitely different about him. Even the way he stood straight and tall, he was more serious now than I ever remembered. I knew prison could change a man but I hardly expected this. Without warning he grabbed my chin and peered into my eyes. I broke out of his grasp and stepped back.

I really liked this paragraph. I knew exactly what you meant by writing "something in his tone made me slightly more subdued."

Latoya said and then poked me in the side. I flinched because it tickled.

Awwe, LOL she's so cute with her little brother :)


I enjoyed reading this chapter. :)

Reviewer: yourburgersarethebest Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 25, 2019 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 2

Wow! I haven't been around to read things lately since I started school again, but I like the way that you wrote Michael's introspection in this chapter. It was believable and it made me think about what he might have felt like if something like this had really happened. 


Question: why does Cedric feel somewhat haunted by the girl he is with?


Hope to read more soon!

Reviewer: yourburgersarethebest Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 09, 2019 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hi Ms. Apricot :)

I see that you have started in the middle of the story, using "in medias res". Good technique to throw us into your characters' lives.

Is Ranci his friend or just a past model, like Angel? (I feel sorry for Angel. Is she starting out as a video girl, and thus being really complacent with the guy?)

So, are Michael and Brooke are going to be a "thing" in this story (or nah)?

And I take it that Alex (the biracial one) is a friend of Michael's? What will be his role in the story? Is Alex Quincy's son?

And who is Pete? Is he a real person? (Maybe if I had his last name, I could guess who he is.) (I know who John Landis is.)

Looking to read more of this. I expect more greatness after finishing "Smoke"! :D


Reviewer: WomanOhWoman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 08, 2019 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 25

I know this story is abandoned but could you tell me what would have happened? I'm really curious as to where the story would have gone.

Reviewer: WomanOhWoman Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 24, 2019 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 3

I'm really excited to see where this goes! Richie is a complete asshole so far; I really want to see how he and MJ interact as the story progresses

Reviewer: LS15 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 03, 2018 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 25

good work in this, very interesting. I hate richie tho lol

Reviewer: TheEightiesLover Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2017 03:52 am Title: Chapter 25

Lmao, poor Michael!

Reviewer: ILoveMJ777 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2017 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 1


Reviewer: Taurus03 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 30, 2017 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 25

That damned Richie! 😂

Reviewer: LandraSony Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 25, 2017 08:40 am Title: Chapter 25

That was quite a funny chapter :-)

I loved it!

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