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Reviewer: Miri Fern Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 01, 2017 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 11

Yeah, it's a little rougher than the previous chapters, but nothing a little polishing up can't fix. I didn't notice any major errors in spelling, except one instance where you used "playfully" when I think you meant "playfulness". Somewhere towards the end, "she smiled at his playfully" or something like that I think.

 

Anyway, on to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Yes I did mean playfulness lol and thanks for understanding. I hope you enjoy chapters 12&13. 

Reviewer: zezinha Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 31, 2017 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 12

So glad you are writing again. I love this story and can't wait to 'see' where it goes.

Author's Response:

Thanks zezinha! I hope you enjoy the new update and thanks for taking the time to review. 

Reviewer: KTF1958 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2017 01:57 am Title: Chapter 12

I truly love your writing. And believe you me I love when you update I genuinely get so excited that I go to my room shut my door and don't come out till I'm finished reading. I can't wait to see were you take this story even though I have my own thought of where it could be headed lol.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I hope to hear from you a little more often! 

Care to enlighten me on where you think the story will good? I'd love to hear it lol. 

Thanks for the support!

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2017 12:17 am Title: Chapter 12

Thank you for another update. You should really take advantage of. Our good mood. You are definitely back in the swing and it is fun and exciting to read. Keep up the motivation. I am sure all your readers appreciate it. Can't wait to read more about Kenya and Michael getting to know eachother and developing g a friendship. I am sure he can fall in love with her. He doesn't need Lisa

Author's Response:

Yes i am getting back into the swing and updating when it becomes available for me. I hope these past two weeks weren't too long for a new update (even though it probably was). As much as people don't like Lisa, especially during this time of Michael's life, she still plays a vital role for this story. If you stick with me through this you'll be very happy that you did! 

As always thank you for your review! 

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2017 12:11 am Title: Chapter 11

Oh, you were gone waaaayyyy too long. Thanks for coming back. You did really well. Please find the time to get back into the swing and update regularly. I would love to read that Michael falls in love with Kenya, I mean why waste time on a relationship with Lisa, if it is not going to last, anyways? Plus she is married and already has two kids with Danny. What's the point? K and M would make a cute couple. Plus and more importantly: He needs a competent lawyer in his team who also is genuinely interested in his well being and therefore gives him the right advise. And in his case it means: No settling out of court and therefore fueling rumors that harm his reputation, but taking it to court and proving those money hungry liars wrong. Setting an example for future extortion attempts showing them that they won't stand a chance. That's why I think he should be with Kenya rather than Lisa. She will fight for his rights, now won't she?
Can't wait for your next update 😊

Author's Response:

Im going to try and keep my updates closer together and not have you all waiting for eternity for an update. As for the Lisa and Michael relationship you'll just have to read to see what happens. I see you're rooting for Kenya but we shall see. 

Reviewer: Lorry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2017 04:45 pm Title: Chapter 11

Girl this is better than what I haven't written in months myself apart from finishing a story to get it out of the way lol. Give yourself some credit. Yas Kenya can't deny the friendship and one day romanceee! There's going to be romance right? Please? Lol. 



Author's Response:

You should go back to writing! I've been wanting to read two of your stories Butterflies and another one that I can't remember. (I drew a blank) 😂 but I don't want to start them if you're not going to write them and/or delete them (I'm one to talk tho aren't I lol). Anyway I really do hope you go continue writing. 

 

As for if there'll be romance... do you want romance lol? 

Reviewer: Baebaelitty Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2017 07:47 am Title: Chapter 1

No one never knew what he went through Thinking that this is probably how he really dealt with the situation makes me sad

Reviewer: Baebaelitty Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2017 07:47 am Title: Chapter 1

No one never knew what he went through Thinking that this is probably how he really dealt with the situation makes me sad

Author's Response:

Yeah this is a touchy subject. I hope you don't become too sad throughout this story. 

Reviewer: Frisket4 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2017 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 7

I never liked them as a couple but this made me interested to read . So great job

Author's Response:

I never liked them as a couple either, but I am going to be as unbiased as possible while writing this. Like it or not Michael's relationship with Lisa is pertinent information to this time period in his life. 

Reviewer: Frisket4 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2017 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 6

Hmm . Interesting concept . Great work

Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: Miri Fern Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2017 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 10

"That day was mayhem, but Elizabeth did play a huge roll* in me staying.

*role

He was persistent with himself to stop them, but Lisa was allowing hers to blossom instead of parish.*

*perish

:)

I'm assuming the married woman he fooled around with before was Diana Ross... I'm just now realizing how rusty my MJ trivia is. Oh well, back to research!



Author's Response:

I think I made the corrections. Thank you for noticing! 

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2017 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 10

Great one ☝️ Thank you. Can't wait for the next update . Please don't keep us waiting too long

Author's Response:

Thanks and sorry for the wait! 

Reviewer: femalien Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2017 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 10

I see a complex triangle emerging here: Michael, Lisa, Kenya. I guess we'll see if I am right. But it's great that Michael starts trusting Kenya and finds ways to relax during the treatment.



Author's Response:

As time progesses he'll become a lot more comfortable with her. 

Thanks for the review! 

Reviewer: femalien Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2017 11:50 am Title: Chapter 9

Sorry for being a silent reader so far. But I really think that you are doing an amazing job especially with such a sensitive topic. I know that this will get better and we get to see Michael's personality shine through more. Your approach is very realistic.



Author's Response:

Nice to see you in my reviews femalien! Aww, I appreicate your review and it means a lot. I work pretty hard on this story. Thanks for reading and I hope you stick around for future chapters! 

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 28, 2017 12:08 am Title: Chapter 9

Oh girl, I love your story! This is so exciting. The whole plot . I would really like to ask you, though to update more frequently if possible. This is just so good. But the wait between each new uploaded chapter simply is too long 😘

Author's Response:

Thank you Gigi. I'll try to update as much as possile / as fast as I can. 

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