Date: Jan 03, 2021 01:25 am Title: Ch. 6
Love how the sarcastic question is literally the answer
Date: Jan 03, 2021 01:25 am Title: Ch. 6
Love how the sarcastic question is literally the answer
[Report This]Date: May 04, 2017 08:40 pm Title: Ch. 6
I'd always had a feeling Michael got along better with his mom/sisters than with his dad/brothers. Good depiction of that in this chapter...
No errors that I can see...
Love imagining what it would have been like to go to school with Michael in rl :)
Look forward to more :)
Author's Response:
I agree he might have felt a closer bond to them maybe because they didn't tease him lol. Ah going to school would have been awesome with him lol. Thanks Mary
Date: Apr 29, 2016 02:09 pm Title: Ch. 6
Marlon is a trip. He reminds of the Marlon in the old story, Love Behind This smh with his teasing and wit! It was so cute how Michael got jealous. A jealous Michael is very attractive! Great chapter!
Author's Response:
his teasing it only gets worse as the story goes on, pissing off Michael with his flirtaicous mannor *rolls eyes* smh I'm surpised michael hasn't beat his butt yet lmao! yes a jealous michael is attractive I agree, thanks Kara <3.
Date: Feb 09, 2016 04:28 pm Title: Ch. 6
Marlon is light skinned with like brown eyes.
Date: Nov 05, 2015 04:27 am Title: Ch. 6
Lol this is funny, Amber sleeping in history class, glad Michael was there to safe her
Aww Michael so cute being Jelouse of Marlon lol
Hmm i wonder why he doesn't tell her about his family
Author's Response:
Can't blame her and luckily if mj wasn't there she would have been in trouble. And yes his jealousy was adorable lool. Who knows ? Maybe mj's stubborn? We shall see his reason eventually ~
Author's Response:
Can't blame her and luckily if mj wasn't there she would have been in trouble. And yes his jealousy was adorable lool. Who knows ? Maybe mj's stubborn? We shall see his reason eventually ~
[Report This]Date: Nov 04, 2015 03:22 pm Title: Ch. 6
Michael getting jealous was extremely adorable! And Marlon was such a teaser! This was a very cute scene and I hope it won't be long before Michael comes clean about his family, as well as his romantic feelings for Amber.
Very sweet chapter.
Author's Response:
aw ikr? mj's like a little puppy with his jealousy lol and yes Marlon is a tease, and let's hope he wont keep it bottled up for too long and yes that too, thanks for reading Darling <3