Date: Jan 03, 2021 02:16 am Title: Ch.13
Honestly... she deserves that for what she did... kinda being selfish friend and only thinking about urself ain't right
exactly there has to be a comprise between the two! hopefully this gives her a good lesson :S.
Date: Jul 08, 2017 11:00 pm Title: Ch.31
Considering the outcome...not a smart move. Although Marlon meant well to try to stop Joseph from being nasty and insulting...
Well yes Marlon sometimes doesn't use his brain at times but he did mean well. At least there wasn't too too much violence at least.
Date: Jul 03, 2017 07:50 pm Title: Ch.30
Have enjoyed Michael and Amber's story so far :)... Am looking forward to their further adventures together :D.
Perhaps together, they can be a 'force' Joseph never figured he'd have to reckon with...as they say 'strength in numbers' :D.
I'm glad you've had fun reading this story. There is plenty more to read in the sequel. Who knows they might have a chance to away from Joseph 😏
Date: Jul 01, 2017 09:09 pm Title: Ch. 29
Omj...Joseph sure seems to be enjoying intimidating his sons into doing what he wants them to do...smh
I think Michael will get Amber to agree...eventually
That's the only way he will get his way somehow force and intimidation smh. Hopefully he will but how is the issue.
Date: Jun 26, 2017 06:54 pm Title: Ch. 27
Yeah, I can see Amber and Michael in LA together... Although I think Amber will try to keep Michael from rushing into things and acting hastily...knowing what she knows about his family...Doing anything hasty would possibly put them in more danger...especially if Joseph were to find out...
Looking forward to the next chapter :D
I agree Amber will try to stop him from jumping into things lol. But that's why she's there lol. Ooh if he finds out..it won't be pretty tsk.
Date: Jun 25, 2017 10:33 pm Title: Ch26
No, his anger is understandable, wanting to protect Amber & her family from the mafia-ish tactics of his brothers & Joseph.
Hope they won't have to be apart for too long this time...
Yep I can't blame him either poor guy let's hope the break is temporaily but we shall see next time :P
Date: Jun 21, 2017 06:41 pm Title: Ch.24
Sweet interaction between Michael and Amber. Tbh, Michael doesn't need Marlon's advice when it comes to...flirting etc ;)
Look forward to reading more when you're in the mood for writing more :)
Of course he doesn't but Marlon sees it as his mission to he 'helpful' whatever that can be smh lool. Thanks Mary