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Reviewer: LadyKeren Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 16, 2022 07:48 am Title: White Hot Christmas

hahahahaha...Janet should have also been like, "Don't belch without saying excuse me"

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Date: Jun 15, 2022 02:59 pm Title: The Rejected

Hah..I'd run that fast too from a bucket of crazy like Liliana..

Reviewer: LadyKeren Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 15, 2022 02:34 pm Title: The Moment of Truth or the Beginning of the Lie

Mike should listen to Randy about Liliana, he speaks wisdom. And what does he have to do to get her to understand?? Beat her up?? (For the record I'm not advocating it...think abusive men are dirt beneath my shoes)

Reviewer: LadyKeren Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 15, 2022 02:07 pm Title: Unsung Heroes

I have to wonder if Liliana would be this thirsty if sshe was dealing with the Michael from your other fics battling demons. 

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Date: Jun 15, 2022 01:57 pm Title: A Night Not Remembered

Huh..why Mike is angry should be obvious to Liliana..tryna tell me she's that slow???

She's gonna be the death of me. 

Reviewer: LadyKeren Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2022 08:35 pm Title: Mr. Brown Eyes

Mike got the right idea on how to view Liliana..she's too thirsty for my taste.

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Date: May 06, 2022 12:55 pm Title: Dangerous Deals

Does Liliana have a rock for a brain or something????

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Date: May 06, 2022 12:46 pm Title: You've Been Warned

Grrr seriously Liliana's making me want to break my phone..

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Date: May 06, 2022 12:41 pm Title: Just When You Think It's Safe...

He should have called the cops..can't stand ppl who don't get the concept of "I want nothing more to do with you"

Reviewer: LadyKeren Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2022 09:40 am Title: Hook, Line, and Sinker

Hi girl! Read this over on wattpad but wanted to leave you feedback here. Trashae is actually the girl I was rooting for..but the other one is so pushy it makes my head want to explode..

Reviewer: mickey Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 13, 2019 05:49 pm Title: Hook, Line, and Sinker

I am at a loss for words.  I can not believe that this man feels anything for a woman that has manipulated and bullied him the way she has done.  What she is is obsessed.  That is not love.  She mental issues.  I really hope that you finish this story.  This can not possibly be how it ends.

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 05, 2017 04:18 pm Title: Hook, Line, and Sinker

*SCREAMS* Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. 

Ok I'm alrig... NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.

I knew this was coming but I, for the life of me will never accept it. Michael is just as crazy as this chick. Neither of them have shared absolutely one thing to justify "love" lust? Yes. infatuation? Yes. Obsession? Yes. Love? NOPE!!! So many times those things are mistaken for love. It goes hot and heavy only to fall apart in the end.

*Screams internally one more time*

Im ready to see what happens next tho. Bring it!!! More sooooooon! <333

 

 



Author's Response:

He didn't say he was in love.... not yet. He's just feeling a little something (Something that he should have kept to himself!) 

Reviewer: michaelfan90 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 28, 2017 05:10 am Title: Hook, Line, and Sinker

Lol I don't know why I'm happy for her......but I am. Deep down inside, aside from her crazy antics.....they are somewhat.....cute. She should really divorce her husband though. If she ain't happy, why stay? If she wants Michael, let her husband free. 



Author's Response:

lol I want people to begin to start being happy for her. Because you're right deep down aside from all of her crazy antics, there's a real person who's just lonely and needs love. Her husband isn't giving it.

Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2017 10:10 pm Title: Hook, Line, and Sinker

The minute I saw this I had to click it. I even stopped me and my friends whole conversation just so I could read this. I don't know if Michael is just playing into this womans dilusions or if he really does feel something for her... Either way I'm excited to see how this goes. I don't want Michael to jeopardize his job for this even if he is feeling her. He should tread carefully because this line is thin as hell. Liyah is a damn mess and I can't deal. 

There is other ways to go about this (DIVORCE) but then it'll look too suspicious if she's with Michael.. I honestly don't know, but I do know that this is about to get extremely messy and I am here for it. 

I'm glad that you updated this and I hope you continue soon. Btw, I updated Fatal Attraction just in case it's disappeared from the 'most recent'. 

Update soon! 



Author's Response:

LOL!! Aww thanks! 

You're right any way this goes it's going to be messy. Michael's been messing with her for some time now so he's bound to catch some feelings. and YES!! I saw that too. I'm about to pop over there and read it now.

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Date: Sep 19, 2016 07:25 pm Title: Dangerous Deals

"Although I really wanted to and outght to lay her ass out." YAS, Mike. Do that shit! Nah, I'm just playing. 

The whole time I was thinking if he gave in he'd be a bitch nigga, but then I had to remember temptation is a mf and he's a man. 

That was real dirty, what she did to Tashae. Like come on? Getting a girl fired over some dick? Lbs. 

Can't wait to read the next chapter! Sorry I'm so late. 

5 stars as usual for you HoneyBee. 

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