Date: Oct 06, 2016 11:26 am Title: 01st Impression
Wow! This is a side of Michael I've never seen before. I can't wait to see what's next!
[Report This]Date: Jan 10, 2016 06:47 pm Title: 13 Years Later
This make me cry love it
Date: Dec 01, 2015 08:19 pm Title: 12 - 10 Family Members
This is truly amazing! <3 Keep it up! Can't wait for the next part. <3
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
-Chris
[Report This]Date: Nov 24, 2015 04:55 am Title: 11 - 1 Family Members
Omg love it
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
-Chris
Date: Nov 22, 2015 10:56 pm Title: 10 Bottles of Booze and Counting
Awh the poor baby!! Isabelle's like an angel, such a sweetie!!
Author's Response:
Haha, right? Thanks for reviewing andrating!
-Chris
Date: Nov 09, 2015 02:03 am Title: 08 Months Later
Nawwww that was so adorable!!!
Date: Oct 26, 2015 09:11 pm Title: 07 Months Apart
Oh phew, she didn't get all crazy about him kissing tatiana. Good chapter!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
-Chris
Date: Oct 20, 2015 03:19 am Title: 06 Avenue
NO DON'T CHANGE IT. Sorry. Just. This is better hahahaahahahaha. Trust me, it really is, and this was such a sweet chapter, so innocent and cute :D
Author's Response:
Haha! Thank you - Don't worry, I have no intentions on changing it - just making a whole new book the same as this but all of it told from Isabelle's perspective - that's what I meant. Thanks for your input!
-Chris
[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2015 06:09 pm Title: 06 Avenue
no i like the way it is
Author's Response:
I'm not going to change this story entirely just make a new story telling it from Isabelle's point of view - thanks for your input!
-Chris
Date: Oct 14, 2015 03:12 am Title: 05 Hours
Oh this is fantastic!!!!!!! So cute
Author's Response:
Thank you!
-Chris
[Report This]Date: Oct 12, 2015 04:57 pm Title: 01st Impression
Aww...his is lonely and misses his wife.
[Report This]Date: Oct 12, 2015 01:04 pm Title: 05 Hours
I love it
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
-Chris
[Report This]Date: Sep 22, 2015 05:08 pm Title: 02 Options
Hi love,
I think my only complaint is actually the changing tenses of the story. I'm not talking about the flashbacks... I mean, in one sentence you refer to "he said, he nodded, he laughed" and the next is, "he nods, he says, he feels, he laughs"
Other than that, I really like your storyline :) Hopefully Michael isn't telling her all of the rude things he has said or is saying.
I feel a bit bad for Ramone though!
Author's Response:
Hey love - I love comments like yours - if you could give me a specific like where the tenses change, I'll definitely check it out -- thank you for calling me out on that.
Of course not! Haha as I said in the beginning, the flashback is as if it's happening in real time for the first time - he's definitely not telling Esme the rude things haha! God Bless!
-Chris
[Report This]Date: Sep 22, 2015 05:06 pm Title: 01st Impression
Hi love,
I began reading this this morning and I wanted to say that its got a great premise. I like the idea of it very much,... a bit "how i met your mother" style...
I'll keep reading :)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading love!
-Chris
[Report This]Date: Sep 18, 2015 04:50 pm Title: 01st Impression
Wow. That sounds about right. Loosing someone in general is a difficult things 2 deal with and not a lot of ppl can deal with that sort of thing and on top of that memories are also a much harder thing 2 handle. I love this a lot, and I have a fascination with sad things 2 so I know how 2 identify with this story in a lot of ways. I just love it baby! Keep writing, I will keep reading!! Hope 2 hear from u soon!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! God bless!
-Chris