[Report This]Date: Oct 22, 2015 12:28 pm Title: Explain...
Oh crap! Ish is about to hit the fan for sure, so to speak.
First, I love how MJ and Hola hit it off so easily. I'm glad she's so down to earth, modest, comical, and kind. It only adds on to her outer beauty. My heart goes out to her from hearing about the kind of upbringing she had.
Second, I'm really hoping Jason will "help a brother out" too! Either way, his human life is about to expire and a life as an immortal being is better than not existing at all, right? Think about it Jason.
Oh, I also thought it was funny when Hola was getting ready for their first date and she almost fell but MJ suddenly appeared and caught her. One look into those captivating eyes and she forgot all about questioning him on how he got inside her locked apartment. Lol don't feel bad, Hola. I would have done the same thing. That's just the Michael Jackson effect!
Finally, I'm actually glad she found that picture because I think he should tell her what's going now rather than wait for Jason to make his decision. You already got her involved Michael so you might as well fill her in on everything now because what if Jason says no and then you suddenly pursuing Hola? If that happens, you'll be out of her life without any giving her any explanation as to why. And I think that will hurt her alot more than telling her the ugly truth.
Okay, my rant is over. Lol Excellent chapter. This story is so captivating and I'm going to be very sad when it ends :(
Looking forward to reading more!
Author's Response:
Hola is the polar opposite of Mena. Kind and sweet and beautiful. She learned hard lessons but didn't make them rob her sweet spirit. It's the most attractive part of her in Michael's eyes. Lol that and her mesmerizing eyes.
I would hope Jason does. It's a win win for him. Plus then Michael would have to keep looking. Do you know how may people die in a day? That's A LOT of candidates to go through.
Hola gettin all swept up in the Michael Jackson Effect was funny. Those beautifully crippling eyes.
Now Michael has some not only explaining but convincing to do. Let's see how that goes. <333
[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2015 07:27 pm Title: Explain...
Just heading to bed and I saw this. Will definitely be reading in my downtime tomorrow...can't wait!
Author's Response:
Hope you enjoy soon!!! <333
Author's Response:
Hope you enjoy soon!!! <333
[Report This]Date: Oct 11, 2015 07:27 pm Title: Parable Of The Talent
I'm slowly buy surely progressing on understanding this story So far. It's different that's why, lol. But I got it now.
So his talent is painting. Magical painting, right? He says it all of the time so I'm assuming it. Hmm, he's pretty good to say he's getting ALOT of damn mula for his talent.
Meeennnaaaa.... she working my nerves and she hasn't even done anything yet to trigger them. Ha! I naturally don't like her. She's a low-key hoe in my eyes. How you gone blush and let a man flirt with you in front of your man (Michael)!?!?!? I don't blame Mike for snatching her damn hand from that olive oil grease ball of a man.
So disrespectful.
I hope his his talent doesn't get him into extreme bad trouble. But hell who am I kidding. You said it would, lol. If Mena is involved, I'm coming for Her ass myself. Be prepared to add me in the story :)
New character on board.
Author's Response:
Take your time Hun. His talent is he's able to forge paintings. He's so good he can copy works from like Michelangelo or Di Vinci and he experts can't tell its a fake. It's not literally magical. He's just saying it is because it's a very rare talent. And you're right he's making a lot of money from it. As for the olive oil grease ball you have to read on to catch more of what's going on between them. Be prepared to come for Mena's ass. Lol. <333
[Report This]Date: Oct 10, 2015 02:35 pm Title: PennyLoafers
for him to be Death...he's pretty cool and smooth but at the same time kinda ....nerdy? I can't think of the word I'm looking for lol but seeing him interact like this is really cute. That's cool how he can materialize. I was wondering how he ever got to know her being Death lol I applaud him for punching that dude in the nose. That's a good big brother even in death u.u So Hola knows her parents are shit basically. Im glad. I hope she has not one quality from either of them two that made her. I'm thinking she might know about Michael and what happened to him. I don't know. I just get the feeling she knows about that and that's why she doesnt like her parents.
Author's Response:
Both of them are nerdy as hell. Lmao. You'll see just how much in this date. It will be adorable. Him punching that dude was funny but his sister still married the asshole. Hola knows that her parents where foul. She saw it and she'll tell it all soon. We will find out just how much she knows about Michael. <333
[Report This]Date: Oct 10, 2015 07:33 am Title: PennyLoafers
Their first encounter was lovely. I adore Hola a hundred times more than I did Mena. She's absolutely nothing like her mother. I'm glad that she's showing a decent interest in Michael, making it a little easier for Michael to court her properly. Can't wait to read what happens next. 😀
Author's Response:
Their encounter was adorable. They're both goofballs so they mesh. Hola is a million miles away from what her parents where and you will come to find out the reason. The courting will be awesome. Lol. <333
[Report This]Date: Oct 10, 2015 04:43 am Title: PennyLoafers
I can't review without first saying
EVERY LITTLE THING SHE DOES IS MAGIC
EVERYTHING SHE DO JUST TURNS ME ON
EVEN THOUGH MY LIFE BEFORE WAS TRAGIC
NOW I KNOW MY LOVE FOR HER GOES STRONG
Okay back to the review. Hola seems to be really cool! She seems funny and fiesty. I looooove that. They're a match. Their sense of humor is a match. They work well and I support this!
He was lying and telling the truth lmao That's what was cracking me up. He was so honest about everything, but he didn't say everything. I loved that part so much.
He has a reason to come back, so I'm looking forward to that!
Another great one. Three more? *cries in a corner*
Author's Response:
He has a reason to want to live again and Hola is perfect. So much more to come. This date will be great and what follows will be beyond I intriguing!! He was lying and telling the truth. It's the oxymoron life for us!! Lol <333
[Report This]Date: Oct 09, 2015 09:53 pm Title: PennyLoafers
I really love FBs (flashbacks) esp this one. I don't think that Hola is like her evil bitch of a mother. I like her. She is witty and funny. Hmm...that pose an interesting question as I honestly Idk. Maybe she will be freak out and run away. Or she will look the Reaper in his face and laugh. So many ways that it could play out. I can't wait for their date as I think that it will be unforgettable. I love remember both of those songs and I couldn't agree with you more luv. Beyond wicked update. Keeping them coming luv. I am going to read your next update for BEB :)
Author's Response:
Hola is nothing like her parents and thank good for that. It was easy for Michael to trip and fall in love. She's great. How she finds out about Michael will be interesting to say the least. The date will be cute I promise. <333
[Report This]Date: Oct 09, 2015 06:33 pm Title: PennyLoafers
AWWWWW!!! That was the CUTEST approach EVER!!! "I like your shoes." *MELTS!*
Sigh... I dont' even know what to write in this review, this uber cuteness overload of this chapter has me melted to a silent puddle!
I love Hola's personality. She doesn't seem anything like her parents so that's good! This date's gonna be so interesting and it's gonna be even more crazy since he can only be in the flesh for a little while at a time.
When he answered "The Grim Reaper" I laughed out loud LOL.
Omg I need more soon! Like Now soon.
<3 No words can describe the amounts of creepy internet love I'm dishing out right now.
Author's Response:
Wasn't that the cutest thing? And mere coincidence they live the same shoes. Destiny maybe? lol. Hola is great and you'll come to see just why it was so easy for Michael to fall for her and be so in love till this day. The date will telegram a lot
They're both too funny for their own good. They're both goofballs.
Time immemorial amounts of creepy Internet love. <333
[Report This]Date: Oct 04, 2015 05:15 pm Title: The White Rabbit Vs The Light
Mj is like the grim reaper! Except 4 in his case he already stole my heart when I first looked at him and I love that pic of him h is just 2 sexy!! God he so fine! I wouldn't mind having him steal my soul in his case I don't even want it back! Just tell me where on the dotted line do I sign?! Lol I will agree 2 what the contract says as long as I get 2 b with him and look at him every day of my life. I love this girl and ur right I'm hooked like a drug to this story I need my fix (another update) ASAP! Can't b 2 long without it I start 2 have withdraws!! I love love love it! Hope 2 hear from u soon!
Author's Response:
Right?!?!? I would do the same as you. He could take my soul and keep it forever and ever. Lol. He could reap all of this if ever came to collect me! With his yummy self! I will try my best to get you the update and stave of the withdrawals ASAP!! Thanks for the love!! <333
Date: Oct 04, 2015 01:57 pm Title: Human
ok ok, decided to come out of my silent reading of this story which always somehow gets to reading it..ok lemme get my rant on~
the witch is dead!,the witch is dead!,~ hohoho the way michael slammed it down on her was sadicstic wonderful and she deserved it so much and Dillinger got his payback BISH, you go mj with your bad self, loving it <3.
annnnd mj is going to fall for his ex's daughter that sounds well ironically..what goes around comes back around..in this case in a good or bad way since i still have more to read..i just hope she didnt take on any of her mother's traits..(fingers crossed)..You tut need to comment on my story "eh" soon to be stories and write something..not only my blog if you do 'll hand you this free mj *holds free mj* and cookies...
ignoring all that..im watching your stories in the silent shadows~
Author's Response:
Hey Lorry. Thanks for taking the time out to read and review. I do appreciate that. You're right Michael mentions in the story a few times that everything in life cycles back around so him falling for the daughter of his murder in a past life is irony at its best. You will see in the next chapter what Hola's personality is like. So more to come. Only 4 more chapters left go!! Can't wait to get them to you guys.
You have a story called "eh"?
and if you're giving out free MJ's I could always do with some and as for the cookies are they vegan? If not it would be all for naught. Lol. Thank you for the offer.
I will join you in the silent shadows and watch your stories as well. <333
[Report This]Date: Oct 04, 2015 10:19 am Title: The White Rabbit Vs The Light
Loved it! And I love the sense of humor you convey in here too! I'm so glad he took Mena's life. I almost thought he was going to spare her a few moments with her daughter, in which I was hoping he wouldn't. That's why I'm glad he didn't waste no time! My favorite part in this chapter 😊. And Hola...hmmm, I'm liking where this is going. I do wonder how that will turn out, can he make himself visible to her? I'm starting to piece some stuff together here....and I can't wait to see how it turns out.
Great chapter! More soon!
Author's Response:
Thank you love!! Michael is hilarious as the reaper. It seems to fit him so well. He wasn't going to give her the chance she didn't even consider to give him. He doesn't role that way anymore. As for Hola the plot thickens cause now it's time to get to know her. Come with me on this fantastic voyage. Lol. <333
[Report This]Date: Oct 03, 2015 11:03 pm Title: Fools Goal
I'm so upset at myself. I forgot to read this chapter after school and dance practice like I said I was. Sorry!!!! :(:(:(
But this Mena chick he dating is already driving me up the fucking wall with her goldigging ass. If I was him, I wouldn't be giving her shit at all we'll just have to break up then. Duece deuce bitch!
I'm so ready for him to tell the deeper parts of his story. I'm so curious how he died.
And who was the person that called him daddy at the end of the chapter? Ugh, lol. I'm so curious. I wanna know.
Author's Response:
So much more twists and turns. Read one bew!! I hope you like where it's going!!<333
[Report This]Date: Oct 03, 2015 09:27 pm Title: The White Rabbit Vs The Light
So he done went and married his murderers daughter ;---'; that seems lowkey shady lmao like its just more revenge ;-; but i can tell he really loves Hola. Im shocked that he even found interest in her considering she is menas daughter. But thats just the way life happens sometime! Im ready to see how this relationship blooms! Mhm.
Author's Response:
Yup. The irony is almost palpable with that. It will all come to fruition soon!! He does love Hola a great deal and she loves him even more. You will see that. I doubt he saw it coming where he would fall so quickly and deeky for Mena AND Dillinger's kid. The blooming is coming!! <333
[Report This]Date: Oct 03, 2015 08:16 pm Title: The White Rabbit Vs The Light
50
I did it! I gave fifty
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[Report This]Date: Oct 03, 2015 08:15 pm Title: The White Rabbit Vs The Light
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