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Reviewer: fenderjazzkid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 01, 2015 03:39 am Title: Human...Again, Where We End We Must Begin.

okay another ten 



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<333

Reviewer: fenderjazzkid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 01, 2015 03:38 am Title: Human...Again, Where We End We Must Begin.

Jason accepted. Here's to hoping he has a better afterlife. Poor thing. You know, I always wonder about that kinda stuff. I'm always thinking what if I die now, will I be able to start over with a new life? Will I do the exact same thing? Will I be a completely different person?

But I think he'll do a great job. And I hope he finds a reason to give up the job later on too.

And okay this is why I know I love you to death. I was wondering if he would maybe meet Jean and Andy. He did and they were all friends. I know he misses them!

I'm so glad she found him again.

Two years and then bam, there it was. 

I'm more than grateful those two decided to share their love story with us. It was short, sweet, fun, and overall beautiful. Thank you much for this! Another favorite added to the list.



Author's Response:

Jason was a natural fit to take over. If ever he finds a reason to give up his immortality let it be fore the same reasons as Mciahel and not ones like Tod. 

I want to thank you so so much for reading and sharing your thoughts with me. Your support is always appreciated I hope you know just how much!!! Thank you bunches and love you much!! <333

Reviewer: fenderjazzkid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 30, 2015 08:16 pm Title: Human...Again, Where We End We Must Begin.

THIS ENDED SO PERFECTLY 

I GOTTA LEAVE A BETTER REVIEW LATER CUZ I NEED TO GATHER

BUT OMGGGGG

I loved this so much. Okay, I'm done with the caps

but I will be back later to give a full review. I'm staying faaaar away from my laptop lmao so I will be back later tonight to give you a better review 

I love you and omg i still can't believe it's over

okay i will tell you more later

still i love you! 



Author's Response:

You know I look forward to the meaningfulness!! <333

Reviewer: mjjlover1120 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 30, 2015 08:13 pm Title: Human...Again, Where We End We Must Begin.

He went back to painting!!! I'm so happy for him! I'm shocked they managed without eachother for so long but it's a good refresher that they still loved each other just as much as the first time. They definitely were meant to be together. I loved it bby doll! 



Author's Response:

First thank you so much for reading and supporting all my stories. I appreciate you!!! 

Yeah they went almost two years apart but the love only grew. It was meant to be!!!

love you more Hun!!! <333

Reviewer: Gabby7 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 11, 2015 08:37 pm Title: Worth A 1000 Words

I figured she wouldn't just be ok with everything he just told her. And I can see how hard of a position it's put her in. Poor Michael, he had to have known something was bound to come out. I am glad to know that eventually things work, but I am eager to find out how. 

 

And him coming back to get the old hag who choked on the beef...too funny! 😂😂



Author's Response:

You're right any reasonable person would be thrown totally off track hearing all that. She needs the time to have it sink in so she can reconcile with the fact that with all that she still feels for him like he does for her. How it works is the question and the answer is coming soon!  That old woman should have stayed her ass inside. But either way he was coming for it. Lmao.  <333

Reviewer: Gabby7 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 10, 2015 10:18 am Title: Human

Now how did I miss this update? Will read soon. 



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<333

Reviewer: fenderjazzkid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 08, 2015 10:43 pm Title: Worth A 1000 Words

First of all, how dare you make me laugh at the woman dying on beef while arguing with her cats. That's probably how I'm gonna go. Arguing with Harley about something omg I SCREAMED THOUGH. This is your fault. I wanna know what the argument was about.

Michael's gonna have to tell me what it was about. I'm curious about that one for sure.

He told the whole damn truth though. I'm proud of him for it, but I know it hurt him. He doesn't wanna lose her. He's finally found some happiness, and she put him out. I know they're together now and all, but I know that still hurt him. It probably gets to him now even if he thinks about it. That's how he knows he was truly in love with her. If that small memory still hurts his feelings. The thought of not being with her would kill me if I was wearing his loafers.

She still needs time to understand. In said time, let's keep our fingers crossed for Jason. Michael has a second chance at life, and Jason can be his replacement. One day, I hope Jason finds a reason to be mortal again too!

Another great one, mama. You've taken up my whole night and I'm not even complaining!

 



Author's Response:

Lmaoooo can you picture the scene at all. "Marcus get your ass off the table you're shedding all over my gotdamn mash potatoes." Gags then bits the dust. He winked at her too. He went full Monty with that truth and she deserved no less. Now we have to see how she wades though it all and makes it over to the other side. I think he understood exactly that she needs the time. He was hopeful but reality kicked in and he knew it all the time. Now it's a waiting game. <333

Reviewer: mjjlover1120 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 07, 2015 08:48 pm Title: Worth A 1000 Words

It took me forever to read this because I kept getting distracted but giiiiiiiirl!! I like Hola so much! She's not taking any mess. Even with her curiosity she had him leave. I don't blame her tho I'd have him out the moment he told me what he was lol. I'm happy they still end up together. I must admit I didn't think they would split so I'm definitely interested in next chapter!! 



Author's Response:

Any normal person would have fainted for sure then kicked him out. That's one hell of a confession. She a smart girl even though she feels the same thing for him she has to sit on it a while. Let's see how they make it to that finish line. <333

Reviewer: HoneyToTheBee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 07, 2015 05:25 pm Title: Worth A 1000 Words

OMG!! If he had tried the 'WOW would ya look at that dopplegangers do exist" line I would have had to jump into this story and kick his ass LMAO!!!

He can't expect her to be like "oh, you're the Grim Reaper and you were in love with my mom and reaped both my parent's souls, ok cool." It's going to take her some time but obviously we know she comes back around.

Michael's internal dialogue is so freakin' hilarious in this story I swear! I love it. 

Jason needs to give in already so that Michael can become mortal again and enjoy a good love making session with  Hola. 



Author's Response:

Lmaoooo. Michael is hilarious. The doppelgänger one was good though lol. But he had always intended on telling her the truth. He just thought he would do it after he became human again. Now she has to process the bomb he just dropped. The loving will come!! <333

Reviewer: DareToDream Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 07, 2015 02:57 pm Title: Worth A 1000 Words

Such a great chapter. Girl, I have no idea how they're going to get around this. I mean, obviously Hola comes around but the way you're writing this story is so unique and original. Therefore, I don't believe that I'm capable of predicting your creativity lol. Which is a good thing because you're so talented. But I'm sure you know that already lol. I absolutely can't wait to see what happens next.

Also, I do think that Jason will take Michael's offer. And Hola's reaction to his confession was extremely rational. She just needs sometime to process this. Don't worry, Michael. She'll come around soon 😀

I'm ready to see what happens next but I'm also not ready for it to end yet lol. Ugh, I'm so torn here!!!

Author's Response:

Awe thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoy my writing. They're definitely in a tough place for sure. Hola has a head on her shoulders so even though she has feelings for him too she needs time to process. It was a lot to swallow. I'm not ready for it to end either. I'm going to miss it! <333

Reviewer: Gabby7 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 27, 2015 06:04 am Title: Explain...

😩 Nooooooo! Michael in some shit now. I wonder how he gone get himself out of this. The truth shall set him free. Him and Hola are so cute together and I think after everything he went through with Mena, he deserves every bit of happiness and live a normal life again...😩 Jason, please help a brotha out! I also liked things from Hola's POV. It definitely helped fill In the questions I had....can't wait to see how he gets himself out of trouble. 



Author's Response:

He's really up to his neck in it for real. Who knows how he's going to get out of this sticky situation...I dooooooo. Lol. It will take some doing. They both suffered at the hands of Mena so they have common ground there. They are adorbs together. Hola's POV was necessary. I'm glad it cleared some things up for you. <333

Reviewer: mjjlover1120 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 24, 2015 09:14 pm Title: Explain...

well he's found his replacment! This is good but...bad..? Anyways, I like Hola. I wont hold anything against her because of her mother (acts like I never had anything against her because of her mother... I'm an angel).  Jason better help Michael out! I mean it's a lose lose situation either way for Jason, unfortunately. 

Hola found a picture of Michael and her mother....laaaaawwd Jesus! Whatever Michael tells her must have worked since they are together!



Author's Response:

It's a win win for Jason or a lose lose? It's how he takes it that's the key. Lol Hola is a true down to earth sweetheart. She was spawned from Satan she got all the angel that was left in her. And you're so right BBgirl!! He must have had some sugar the likes of candy cane souls because she's with him giving him babies and the whole nine head over heels. He got some Splainin to do!!! <333

Reviewer: HoneyToTheBee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 23, 2015 01:30 pm Title: Explain...

Only two chapters left!!!! No!!!!

I loved how you introduced Hola's POV. Her back story is so tragic though... Poor girl! 

The way Michael darts around his REAL job is funny. How in the world is he gonna explain that photo. I mean talk about weird!! How do you tell someone you were once in love with their MOTHER?! Especially when her mother is Satan. I would be asking myself what kind of person Michael even is to have been with that!!!

Jason set my man free!!!

More soon!!! I can't wait to see Hola's reaction to the truth!!



Author's Response:

I figured Hola' POV was necessary now so she could relate first hand her part of the story. You get to see the depth of her thoughts and feelings. Michael is ducking and diving around his job. The explanation is pretty accurate tho. Down played but accurate. 

Explaining that pic is going to be a HARD sell that's for sure. <333

Reviewer: eazybreezy2015 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 23, 2015 12:37 pm Title: Human

Now I understand why Hola was seeing a therapist. And I like how she and Mike both had a pov. I thought that their date went well. The only sad part about was that his couldn't kiss her like he wanted to as he is a walking living corpse. I think that Jason will accept Michael's proposition coz his is dying anyway and it only makes sense that he accepts it. Uh oh I would love to see wat Michael says in his explanation. Hope that your feeling better luv. Loved this update :)



Author's Response:

Awe thank you love. I feel so much better. Their dated did go well and it was so natural between them. We will have to wait and see what Jason's reaction is and what he decides to do. <333

Reviewer: fenderjazzkid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 22, 2015 12:59 pm Title: Explain...

Two left UUUUUUUUUGGGH

And you used my song. I loooooooove that song. It's one of my all time favorites and one of the best songs I've ever heard.

The butterfly! That was some majestic shit. I was living for that moment. It was too perfect. Gawd yes

I'm glad we're getting to know more of Hola. She's funny and they go so well together. This dude told her she gave him asthma pretty much. He should have just said it. He knows he wanted to GIRL YOU GIVE ME ASTHMA!!

Jason could possibly help a brother out. He's not very happy, and he could be great at the job in death and all. He could be good at this! 

Hola's more than likely beyond shocked by all of this. I don't know what's running through her mind, but I can't wait to find out.

I'll be here during bat time on that bat channel in my bat socks and shirt!

 

 



Author's Response:

Yup two left. To action pact adventure filled chapters. She would give him asthma if he had air in his lungs for real. You know that butterfly came right out of my reality. Mine was still alive when I wrote that. RIP baby!!! :((( I'm sure Hola's mind is racing! <333

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