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Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 30, 2017 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 32

YEAH, Gabby! I don't agree with Mae, but the last thing she said got me over here cheering! Check your sister Mae and Gabby needs to think long and hard about her impromptu decisions. I get she didn't want Michael in her mess, but he loves her and if he's willing to go the extra mile then she needs to LET HIM. I'd understand her leaving if Michael had said he couldn't handle, but he aint say shit close to that! She also needs to think about MJ. It's not just her self that she has to think about. Everything she decides from this point on affects MJ too. 

LORDDDTTT. 

Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 30, 2017 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 31

Gabby is 1.2 seconds from catching these hands. I have a love-hate relationship with her character. I only dislike her when she goes and pulls shit like this. She needs to work on her communication skills like ASAP. 

Yo Mike ima need you to go and find your girl man! 

Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 30, 2017 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 30

HONEY. I am not in the mood for this bitch! 

Reviewer: Xiuhan Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 27, 2017 09:26 am Title: Chapter 8

I'm shooketh , I'm guessing that Michael is finally going to reveal himself

Reviewer: countrygirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 21, 2017 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 5

Hi ! Just started here and i love it ! Into the first chapters, your story is very similar with the movie Look Who's Talking i'm right ? 🙂 Because its one of my favorite movies too!

I can't wait to read more. Keep it up ! 😉

Author's Response:

Hi!! And thank you so much...I'm glad you're enjoying it. And yes, you are correct! I got the plot from Look Who's talking. I just added my own twist. I think you're actually the first to guess it correctly. 

 

Thanks again...I hope you continue reading!! ❤️

Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2017 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

I'm about 6 chapters behind, but that's okay because I'm going to catch up. I've missed this couple. 



Author's Response:

Yay! You've missed a lot. 😈

Reviewer: purebutterflies Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2017 03:15 am Title: Chapter 34

I am glad that you and your family are safe from the Hurricane. 

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you! It was nerve wrecking thinking we were going to get hit hard as they portrayed in the media. Now I'm just worried about the other hurricane they're saying will form by tomorrow...😒 Pray for us! 

Reviewer: VickiJ Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2017 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 34

Her sister ain't right, smh. She needs to step back and let Gabby figure out her life. On another note I'm glad to hear that you and your family are alright after dealing with hurricane ima. I was praying for everyone while watching the news on CNN. 



Author's Response:

Thank you ma'am! Yea it was scary thinking we would lose everything, but i'm glad we didn't get hit hard and everything was still here once we made it back. Thank you for your prayers! 

 

And I ageee, Mae needs to let Gabby handle things on her own. But you know everyone has that one person in their family who think they're 'helping' but she's about to learn real quick. 

 

Thank you for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: VickiJ Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2017 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 30

OMG! I knew it! How crazy is this? Levi was cheating with Gabby while Janine was cheating with Michael. How ironic is it that Gabby and Michael would meet and fall in love? Now they just got a deal with the crazy ass exes who can't seem to let go. Let the drama begin.

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2017 11:19 am Title: Chapter 34

Man, this chapter left me thinking. I can understand all involved, points of view, but the way they're going about it is the problem.

Oh boy, lol. I expected some crazy reactions to finding how who Michael really was and you didn't disappoint sis! Lol. Mae had me hollering, then Andrew's whole scene was a killer! 😂😂His ass brought a bat, saw the scene, and took his ass back upstairs... No wondering why another man is in his house with his wife at that time of morning at all. Lol. Brother must have really been delirious from exhaustion.

Mae is a drama queen too, like Gabby. I see why they clash now. They're more alike, than they think. Both headstrong/stubborn and dramatic. Yes, I know she's shocked at discovering MJ in her house, but she ain't have to treat that man like a bitch. Even an angel would dislike Mae if the encounter and subsequent day went the same way.

I am floored at her telling MJ to leave Gabbby alone. I'm sure she has her reasons, and some of them are selfish and out of fear of being alone, like Gabby, and the other is probably her being wary because of the lifestyle MJ leads and whatever rumors/gossip she's read and heard about MJ. Talk about a buzz kill... MJ kept trying to break the ice and she kept up her mask. I wouldn't be surprised if Gabby leaves early with MJ. That too will create resentment in Mae for Michael. Damn.

And, what is up with MJ questioning the relationship now too and lieing to his mother? He's a grown man, so I'm not understanding all this secrecy.

Thanks girl!👍👏🙋

Author's Response:

Hey, chica!!  Girl, I love your reviews...they always keep me thinking when writing the next chapter. 

 

Mae, Andrew, and Drew are a mess 😂  And yes, Drama queen...I agree. Her reaction and her attitude towards Michael irritated me throughout the whole chapter. But she will redeem herself soon. Her telling Michael to leave comes from her being overprotective of Gabby, however she did go about it the wrong way. 

Michael questioning the relationship not so much, more so what occurred because of thr time and place. But that's my fault. I got caught up trying to wrap things up that I did not finish elaborating on that part. Thanks for pointing that out...I'll make sure to touch on that in the next chapter. Also, the secrecy, with his mother not knowing about the relationship with Jeanine, I think he's just trying to keep her from being worried about him and the situation he's about to embark... but all will be reveled soon. 

 

Thsnk you for always reading snd rebiewung!!! ❤️

Reviewer: Marri Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 15, 2017 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 34

Something just occurred to me. I hope the way Mae is acting doesn't scare Michael away from Gabby and Mj. That will just break my heart



Author's Response:

We shall see 😈

Reviewer: love_deeply Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 15, 2017 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 34

Ok, so.... She can have several seats cause I know she gotta be tired from all that reaching...

This bitch just made my pressure high. How tf you gonna just jump to conclusions like that?! First of all, Mike don't know a damn thing about any of y'all. Secondly, he's never given you a reason to be rude or disrespectful towards him. Lastly, if you gon be reaching that damn hard, atleast give Gabby and Mike a chance to explain what their situation is (although its really none of your business). For her to be a whole adult, she's acting very immature.

But aside froom the wicked witch, good chapter love. I'm certain that Michael feels the same for Gabby. Looking forward to the next one! L.O.V.E.



Author's Response:

😂😂😂 girlll, you had me hollering laughing at this review!!!! I loved it! 

 

Agreed, Mae can have several seats with the way she's acting...though I think she's just being overprotective. But you know everyone has that one person in the family that loves to control everyone's relationship...unfortunately that's her. She will redeem herself though...stay tuned.

 

thank you for reading me reviewing!!!

Reviewer: jayjay58 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 15, 2017 10:02 am Title: Chapter 34

"If you want to help her just leave her alone" Mae... what the fuck?? I guess she's just being overprotective. She probably thinks eventually he'll get bored of his little "charity case" and go back to his superstar life, leaving Gabby and the baby. Mae doesn't get it yet but I think she'll realize that she's wrong when she sees how they interact with each each other and how they really love each other. I just hope those words don't get into Michael's head and he acutally believes they're better off without him and the craziness (Jeanine/his fame) in his life.

And yeah, I think the feelings are definitely mutual lol I mean, he went all the way over there for her and the first thing they did the first night of being back together is fuck lmaoo I know sex doesn't mean love but come on... he didn't just go looking for her to have sex, he could have easily gotten that in California. He went after her because he's in love.

Btw, Andrew's reaction to Michael was pretty funny. Thanks for the chapter and I'm glad you and your family were safe from the hurricane.



Author's Response:

Thank you!!! I'm thankful we didn't get hit as bad. No damage done to our property either.  

And I'm laughing my ass off at your comment... 'I mean, the first thing they did when he got there was fuck.' 😂😂😂. I love it! 

And yes, Mae is about to learn real quick how wrong she is. And she's very overprotective but she's going about it the wrong way.

 

stay tuned. Thank you for reading and reviewing!!  â¤ï¸

Reviewer: mjsdirtydiana Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 15, 2017 08:43 am Title: Chapter 34

Mae is so wrong to think Mike is just using Gabby!  He truly cares about her.  But then again I guess she is just being protective of her little sister.  

Micahel will have to prove himself to Mae for her to understand. Gabby is a woman that can make her own decisions even though she made some wrong ones in the past everyone iof them a learning one.  

 

Great update Gabby looking forward to reading more!  

 



Author's Response:

Thsnk you! Yes, Mae is coming from a place where she thinks she is protecting Gabby, but she will soon realize how wrong she is.

 

thank you for reading and reviewing!! ❤️

Reviewer: Marri Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 15, 2017 05:23 am Title: Chapter 34

Look, Mae about to piss me off! I understand her having some reservations towards Michael... and regardless of him being a celebrity she need to come off her high horse just a bit! I've been waiting for her to find out who Michael really is, and now that she knows, I think she'll be even more cold hearted to Gabby's situation. 

i loves how Andrew came running into the room and still didn't know it was Michael! LOL...besides Mae's attitude, I love her little family. And how Drew thinks her pancakes are nasty!!! LMAO.

And I loved how Michael stepped in front of Gabby to protect her from Andrew and his bat! SO manly! Manly Michael always leaving my pulse going up!

Im still curious as to what will follow with Gabby and Michael as they head back to California. Her problems are now his problems and because Jeanine was someone from his past, she definitely is going to let Michael feel the heat from this. I believe she is going to make things even more hell for the both of them. Levi on the other hand seem as though he doesn't care. 

 

Wonderful chapter! Continue soon please! 



Author's Response:

😂😂😂 does Mae remind you of someone?? 😂 And yes, Mae needs to tone it down before she definitely lose Gabby and MJ from her life but she will soon learn.

 

and Manly protective Michael 😏  Girl ....

 

thsnk you for reading and reviewing!!!❤️

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